`•.(*•.¸(`•.¸ Ek Aas•´)¸.•*).•´

[munfairy]

ASSALAM WALEKUM,
NAMASTE DOSTO.


KESE HAI AAP SAB?
Dosto phir ek baar hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabhi ke samne rakh rahe hain,
aaj bhi hum,,hamesha ki tarah umeed karte hain,,
ke aap hame padhenge,or saath hi hamari hosla afzai karenge.

Aap ke jawab ka intezaar rahega,

SHUKRIYA.
*************************************************

*''*
( c '?
>.--</"")
«•´`•.(*•.¸(`•.¸ Ek Aas•´)¸.•*).•´`•»


Ek pal me de diye,kya_kya ilzaam ApNe,
khuN_E_dil aNkho se tapka,Na dekha ApNe.


Meri palko ki Mandaro pe,koi roNak hi Nahi,
dekh lo ashko ka chiraga,Na dekha Apne.


he shakk se bhara charo taraf,samuNdar_hi_samuNdar,
jo Umeed se badhaya haath,Na thama ApNe.


koi Akar mujhe le jaye,yahiN dur kahiN,
kyuN roz Dua me khuda se,yehi maNga ApNe?


Nahi jati mere badan se,Apki pyar ki khushbu,
mere khuwaboN ki basti ko,jo yuN sajaya ApNe.


Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.


meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?


maNa ke kuch pata Nahi,manzil he,ab kidhar,
jo bichhde he,wo mileNge,yeh maNa he ApNe.


wapas palat ke Ayega,gaya pal wo ek diN,
apNi dulhaN ki Aas me,piya jo guzara ApNe...


**************************************************
Aap sab apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[rajveeer]

Originally Posted by munfairy

ASSALAM WALEKUM,
NAMASTE DOSTO.


KESE HAI AAP SAB?
Dosto phir ek baar hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabhi ke samne rakh rahe hain,
aaj bhi hum,,hamesha ki tarah umeed karte hain,,
ke aap hame padhenge,or saath hi hamari hosla afzai karenge.

Aap ke jawab ka intezaar rahega,

SHUKRIYA.
*************************************************

*''*
( c '?
>.--</"")
«•´`•.(*•.¸(`•.¸ Ek Aas•´)¸.•*).•´`•»


Ek pal me de diye,kya_kya ilzaam ApNe,
khuN_E_dil aNkho se tapka,Na dekha ApNe.


Meri palko ki Mandaro pe,koi roNak hi Nahi,
dekh lo ashko ka chiraga,Na dekha Apne.


he shakk se bhara charo taraf,samuNdar_hi_samuNdar,
jo Umeed se badhaya haath,Na thama ApNe.


koi Akar mujhe le jaye,yahiN dur kahiN,
kyuN roz Dua me khuda se,yehi maNga ApNe?


Nahi jati mere badan se,Apki pyar ki khushbu,
mere khuwaboN ki basti ko,jo yuN sajaya ApNe.


Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.


meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?


maNa ke kuch pata Nahi,manzil he,ab kidhar,
jo bichhde he,wo mileNge,yeh maNa he ApNe.


wapas palat ke Ayega,gaya pal wo ek diN,
apNi dulhaN ki Aas me,piya jo guzara ApNe...


**************************************************
Aap sab apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

sony ji ko raj ka salaam........sony ji ek baar phir se bhut hii pursakoon or purkashish koshish.......har ashaar dilfrabe or pur asar,bhut acha laga aapke ehsaason se ru b ru ho kar......meri daad pesh-e-khidmat hai......yun hii bazam ko roshan banaye rakhna.........raj...........

[Dhaval]

sony jee adaab:

kaisi haiN aap?

maine har baar mehsoos kiyaa hai kii aapkii teHreer meiN aSh'aar bahot hi kamaal ke hote haiN ..aapkaa andaaz-e-bayaaN hi itnaa baRhiyaa hai ki kyaa kaheN baRaa achHaa lagtaa hai jab bhii aapko paRHtaa huN to aur ees baar bhi aapne aSh'aar ko bare hi achHe se peSh kiYe haiN ..ees mukammal aur behtrin si kosiSh ke liYe dil se nikli huYii dheroN saari mubaarak baad ko qabool kareN..ummid kartaa huN aap aage yuuNhi bazm ko sajaate raheNge

meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?

yeH sher bahot hi khoob rahaa..

apnaa khayaal raKheN aur khuSh raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

W'salaam

aapkaa dost
dhaval

[sakhi1909]

dard bhara likha hai dil chho gya

sakhi

[sakhi1909]

bahut dard bhara raha apko padna

dil chu gya
acha llikha hai

sakhi

[munfairy]

SALAM RAJ JI,
KAISE HAI AAP?

AAPKA BOHOT_BOHOT SHUKRIYA .
apne hamari nazm ko saraha,yakin maniye hame be_hadd khushi hui,
bas aise hi apna saath banaye rakhiyega,

APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you

sony jee adaab:

kaisi haiN aap?

maine har baar mehsoos kiyaa hai kii aapkii teHreer meiN aSh'aar bahot hi kamaal ke hote haiN ..aapkaa andaaz-e-bayaaN hi itnaa baRhiyaa hai ki kyaa kaheN baRaa achHaa lagtaa hai jab bhii aapko paRHtaa huN to aur ees baar bhi aapne aSh'aar ko bare hi achHe se peSh kiYe haiN ..ees mukammal aur behtrin si kosiSh ke liYe dil se nikli huYii dheroN saari mubaarak baad ko qabool kareN..ummid kartaa huN aap aage yuuNhi bazm ko sajaate raheNge



yeH sher bahot hi khoob rahaa..

apnaa khayaal raKheN aur khuSh raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

W'salaam

aapkaa dost
dhaval

Aadab dhaval ji,
Allah ke fazal se,me bilkul thik hu,
aap kahiye,,aap kaise hain?

dhaval ji aapne jis khubsurti se hame mubarak baad di hai,,,,
yaKin maniye humne aapki daad,dilse kabul ki hai,
aap jab bhi, hamari post pe reply karte hai,hame bohot achha lagta han.
bas isi tarah ,apni is dost ki himmat badhate rahiye..

hamesha khush rahiye.

Apna khayal rakhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[shrdh]

sony ji aapki is kalaam ne is soch ne duniya ki haqiqat hi pesh ki hai

aapke saath is dard ke humkadam hona achha laga

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by sakhi1909

bahut dard bhara raha apko padna

dil chu gya
acha llikha hai

sakhi

AADAB sakhi ji,
kaisi hai aap?

yakin maniye hame,be_hadd khushi hui apka reply dekh kar,
bas hame aise hi padte rahiye,,taki hame bhi aur achha likhne ka hosla mile,

APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by shrdh

sony ji aapki is kalaam ne is soch ne duniya ki haqiqat hi pesh ki hai

aapke saath is dard ke humkadam hona achha laga

Aadab shrdh ji,
kaise hain aap?

sabse pehle aapka shukriya,
jo aap ne pehli baar,,is nacheez ke kalam pe apni nazre karam ki.

aapko hamari nazm me kuch sachhai nazar aayi,
apne ise pasand kiya,,
hame saraha,,
aapka dilse shukriya ada karti hun.

aapne hame pehli baaar padha hai,aur aapse umeed karti hun,k aap apna saath aise hi banaye rakhege,

APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[Mohammad Kashif]

Originally Posted by munfairy

ASSALAM WALEKUM,
NAMASTE DOSTO.


KESE HAI AAP SAB?
Dosto phir ek baar hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabhi ke samne rakh rahe hain,
aaj bhi hum,,hamesha ki tarah umeed karte hain,,
ke aap hame padhenge,or saath hi hamari hosla afzai karenge.

Aap ke jawab ka intezaar rahega,

SHUKRIYA.
*************************************************

*''*
( c '?
>.--</"")
«•´`•.(*•.¸(`•.¸ Ek Aas•´)¸.•*).•´`•»


Ek pal me de diye,kya_kya ilzaam ApNe,
khuN_E_dil aNkho se tapka,Na dekha ApNe.


Meri palko ki Mandaro pe,koi roNak hi Nahi,
dekh lo ashko ka chiraga,Na dekha Apne.


he shakk se bhara charo taraf,samuNdar_hi_samuNdar,
jo Umeed se badhaya haath,Na thama ApNe.


koi Akar mujhe le jaye,yahiN dur kahiN,
kyuN roz Dua me khuda se,yehi maNga ApNe?


Nahi jati mere badan se,Apki pyar ki khushbu,
mere khuwaboN ki basti ko,jo yuN sajaya ApNe.


Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.


meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?


maNa ke kuch pata Nahi,manzil he,ab kidhar,
jo bichhde he,wo mileNge,yeh maNa he ApNe.


wapas palat ke Ayega,gaya pal wo ek diN,
apNi dulhaN ki Aas me,piya jo guzara ApNe...


**************************************************
Aap sab apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

salam bhai janab ke mijaz kese hay maza aa gaya wakei me bahut khoob ese hi hume apni nazmo se lutfndos karte rahiye KHUDA HAFIZ

aap ka dost kashif

[musafir ek pal]

sony g,
namaskar,

bahut dard chalak raha hai aapki is nazm mein. bahut bar padi aapki yhe nazm, dil ko chu gayi. bahut achi tarah se aapne, apne dard ko bayan kiya hai. apki yhe koshish humein bahut achi lagi. aise hi likte rahein.

tc

manish

[Merul]

hi sony ji

kese ho aap?

sony ji aaj aapko kai dino baad ek dard bhare asaar ke sath dekh raha hu, aapne jis tarah se dil ke dard bhare alfaaz ko hamare samne rakha hai uspe daad hazir hai janab,

aapki har panktiyon mein se kuch panktiya hamari dil ke rubaru ho gayi hai wo kuch panktiya niche hai...


koi Akar mujhe le jaye,yahiN dur kahiN,
kyuN roz Dua me khuda se,yehi maNga ApNe?

Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.

meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?
sony ji aapki is panktiyo se apke dil ka dard saf dikhai deta hai

milte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul

Originally Posted by munfairy

ASSALAM WALEKUM,
NAMASTE DOSTO.


KESE HAI AAP SAB?
Dosto phir ek baar hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabhi ke samne rakh rahe hain,
aaj bhi hum,,hamesha ki tarah umeed karte hain,,
ke aap hame padhenge,or saath hi hamari hosla afzai karenge.

Aap ke jawab ka intezaar rahega,

SHUKRIYA.
*************************************************

*''*
( c '?
>.--</"")
«•´`•.(*•.¸(`•.¸ Ek Aas•´)¸.•*).•´`•»


Ek pal me de diye,kya_kya ilzaam ApNe,
khuN_E_dil aNkho se tapka,Na dekha ApNe.


Meri palko ki Mandaro pe,koi roNak hi Nahi,
dekh lo ashko ka chiraga,Na dekha Apne.


he shakk se bhara charo taraf,samuNdar_hi_samuNdar,
jo Umeed se badhaya haath,Na thama ApNe.


koi Akar mujhe le jaye,yahiN dur kahiN,
kyuN roz Dua me khuda se,yehi maNga ApNe?


Nahi jati mere badan se,Apki pyar ki khushbu,
mere khuwaboN ki basti ko,jo yuN sajaya ApNe.


Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.


meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?


maNa ke kuch pata Nahi,manzil he,ab kidhar,
jo bichhde he,wo mileNge,yeh maNa he ApNe.


wapas palat ke Ayega,gaya pal wo ek diN,
apNi dulhaN ki Aas me,piya jo guzara ApNe...


**************************************************
Aap sab apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by Mohammad Kashif

salam bhai janab ke mijaz kese hay maza aa gaya wakei me bahut khoob ese hi hume apni nazmo se lutfndos karte rahiye KHUDA HAFIZ

aap ka dost kashif

SALAM MOHD.KASHIF JI,
JI SHUKRIYA,
ALLAH KE FAZAL SE HUM THIK HAIN,
AAP KAHIYE,AAP KAISE HAIN?


sabse pehle aapka dilse shukriya ada karna chahungi,

ke aap pehli baar hamari post pe aaye,
hamari nazm ko padha,use saraha,,,
yakin maniye,,hame be_hadd khushi hui.
INSHA ALLAH,,hum aayinda bhi,,achha likhne ki koshish karenge,AAMIN

bas aap logo ka saath isi tarah banaye rakhiyega.

KASHIF JI,ek baat aur kehni thi aapse.
ke hum bhai nahi hai.............hum mohtarma hai.

APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[KunaaL]

Originally Posted by munfairy

ASSALAM WALEKUM,
NAMASTE DOSTO.




Nahi jati mere badan se,Apki pyar ki khushbu,
mere khuwaboN ki basti ko,jo yuN sajaya ApNe.


Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.


[[/COLOR][/B]

Wasslaam Sony Shahiba

uff ye dard e dil, aur us pe jhulse parwaane ki jubaan se nikli jaisi shayri .. kahin unpar ilzaam aur kahiN bharosha ki wo bhi tadpe haiN ... kya baat hai .. ehsaas poore shikher par hai ... aur bayani parwaan .. kahin kahin shurwaat maiN ladkhadayi par ant karte karte .. dil cheer diye ,,, kya baat hai

jo do sher alehda kiye hai maine ... na jane kyUn nazar unhi pe ruk gayi bas .. khas kar pehle sher pe jyada ,, ki ye sher apne aap main itna gehra hai .. mujhe to bohat se matlab dikhte hai iske .. jisme sabse pehla ki ye beeti poori zindgi ko saamne rakh raha hai ..

bohat khoob meri daad poori aapke naam .. khushi hui aapko padh ke .. kam hi padhne ko milte hai dhaardaar alfaaz aaj kal ... kash main bayaan kar paat apne jazbaat yahan ... par phir bhi kamiyan hai kahin kahin .. umed hai waqt ke sath kalam ki nikh kagaz ka seena bekhauf cheeregi aur padhne waale uff kareNge par luft ke sath ...

aur haan agle sher pe apni likhi ek purani gazal yaad aa gayi link de raha huN waqt mile to mulayeza farmaiyega ..

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=44687

apna khyaal rakhiye .. khuda ne chaha to rabta bana rahega ..

Khaaksaar

Kunaal

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by musafir ek pal

sony g,
namaskar,

bahut dard chalak raha hai aapki is nazm mein. bahut bar padi aapki yhe nazm, dil ko chu gayi. bahut achi tarah se aapne, apne dard ko bayan kiya hai. apki yhe koshish humein bahut achi lagi. aise hi likte rahein.

tc

manish

Aadab,Namaste,Manish ji,
kaise hain aap?

sabse pehle apka bohot_bohot shukriya,
jo aapne pehli baar hamari nazm ko padha,,haari nazm ko pasand kiya,aur hame izzat bakshi.

hamari nazm ne,apke dil me apni ek jagah banayi,hame be_hadd khushi hui.

umeed karti hu,aage bhi aap,apna saath isi tarah banaye rakhenge.

APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by Merul

hi sony ji

kese ho aap?

sony ji aaj aapko kai dino baad ek dard bhare asaar ke sath dekh raha hu, aapne jis tarah se dil ke dard bhare alfaaz ko hamare samne rakha hai uspe daad hazir hai janab,

aapki har panktiyon mein se kuch panktiya hamari dil ke rubaru ho gayi hai wo kuch panktiya niche hai...


koi Akar mujhe le jaye,yahiN dur kahiN,
kyuN roz Dua me khuda se,yehi maNga ApNe?

Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.

meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?
sony ji aapki is panktiyo se apke dil ka dard saf dikhai deta hai

milte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul

SALAM MERUL JI,
JI ALLAH KE FAZAL SE HUM THIK HAI,
Aap kaise hai?

merul ji apke reply jab bhi hame milte hain,hame be_hadd khushi hoti hain,

aap jis andaz me hame sarahte hain,,hame bohot achha lagta hain,SHUKRIYA
aapki ek aur baat jo hame achhi lagti hai,,wo yeh hain,ke
aap kafi had tak hamare maksad,hamari dilse nikli baato ko samajh jate hain.

isi ka nam dosti hai,,,HAI NA?

BAS aise hi apni dost ki himmat badhate rahiyega.

Allah aapko aur tarakki de,
aapke aur apke pyar ko hamesha saath rakhe,
hamesha khush rahiye,
APNA AUR APNE PYAR KA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[sunita thakur]

Originally Posted by munfairy

ASSALAM WALEKUM,
NAMASTE DOSTO.


KESE HAI AAP SAB?
Dosto phir ek baar hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabhi ke samne rakh rahe hain,
aaj bhi hum,,hamesha ki tarah umeed karte hain,,
ke aap hame padhenge,or saath hi hamari hosla afzai karenge.

Aap ke jawab ka intezaar rahega,

SHUKRIYA.
*************************************************

*''*
( c '?
>.--</"")
«•´`•.(*•.¸(`•.¸ Ek Aas•´)¸.•*).•´`•»


Ek pal me de diye,kya_kya ilzaam ApNe,
khuN_E_dil aNkho se tapka,Na dekha ApNe.


Meri palko ki Mandaro pe,koi roNak hi Nahi,
dekh lo ashko ka chiraga,Na dekha Apne.


he shakk se bhara charo taraf,samuNdar_hi_samuNdar,
jo Umeed se badhaya haath,Na thama ApNe.


koi Akar mujhe le jaye,yahiN dur kahiN,
kyuN roz Dua me khuda se,yehi maNga ApNe?


Nahi jati mere badan se,Apki pyar ki khushbu,
mere khuwaboN ki basti ko,jo yuN sajaya ApNe.


Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.


meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?


maNa ke kuch pata Nahi,manzil he,ab kidhar,
jo bichhde he,wo mileNge,yeh maNa he ApNe.


wapas palat ke Ayega,gaya pal wo ek diN,
apNi dulhaN ki Aas me,piya jo guzara ApNe...


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Aap sab apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

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( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

Sony ji behad khoobsurat gazal pesh ki hai aapne, har sher umda banna hai, dil ki sadda dil tak pahunch jaye…yehi dua hai….kush rahiye aur yu hi mahfil aapni majudgi se rangeen banaye rahiye.

Duao.n ke saath

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by sacccha_pyar

Wasslaam Sony Shahiba

uff ye dard e dil, aur us pe jhulse parwaane ki jubaan se nikli jaisi shayri .. kahin unpar ilzaam aur kahiN bharosha ki wo bhi tadpe haiN ... kya baat hai .. ehsaas poore shikher par hai ... aur bayani parwaan .. kahin kahin shurwaat maiN ladkhadayi par ant karte karte .. dil cheer diye ,,, kya baat hai

jo do sher alehda kiye hai maine ... na jane kyUn nazar unhi pe ruk gayi bas .. khas kar pehle sher pe jyada ,, ki ye sher apne aap main itna gehra hai .. mujhe to bohat se matlab dikhte hai iske .. jisme sabse pehla ki ye beeti poori zindgi ko saamne rakh raha hai ..

bohat khoob meri daad poori aapke naam .. khushi hui aapko padh ke .. kam hi padhne ko milte hai dhaardaar alfaaz aaj kal ... kash main bayaan kar paat apne jazbaat yahan ... par phir bhi kamiyan hai kahin kahin .. umed hai waqt ke sath kalam ki nikh kagaz ka seena bekhauf cheeregi aur padhne waale uff kareNge par luft ke sath ...

aur haan agle sher pe apni likhi ek purani gazal yaad aa gayi link de raha huN waqt mile to mulayeza farmaiyega ..

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=44687

apna khyaal rakhiye .. khuda ne chaha to rabta bana rahega ..

Khaaksaar

Kunaal

Aadab kunal ji,
kaise hain aap?

samajh me nahi aata,ke aapka shukriya ada kaise karu.

aapne hame pehli baar padha,,
aur pehli baar me hi aapne hame itni izzat bakshi,,
sach dilse apka shukriya ada karti hun.
aapka reply karne ka andaz khame be_hadd pasand aaya.

kunal ji,bas aap logo ki dua,,,aur saath ,hamesha banaye rakhiyga,

hum wada karte hain,
INSHA ALLAH,hum aur achha likhne ki koshshish karenge,,

aur jo thodi kami reh gayi hai,use jald pura kar denge.

Allah apko bohot tarakki de,AAMIN,
apna saath aise hi banaye rakhiyega.

APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

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( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[Merul]

hi sony ji

ji sony ji hum bhi thik hai,

sony ji aapka bhi hamien yehi andaaz bara achchha lagta hai, aap har baar hamare liye khuda se dua karte rehte hai ki hum sada khush rahe,

ji sahi kaha sony ji sahi kaha aapne isi ko dosti kehte hai.

ese hi hauslaa afzaai karte rahiyega

aapka dost
Merul

Originally Posted by munfairy

SALAM MERUL JI,
JI ALLAH KE FAZAL SE HUM THIK HAI,
Aap kaise hai?

merul ji apke reply jab bhi hame milte hain,hame be_hadd khushi hoti hain,

aap jis andaz me hame sarahte hain,,hame bohot achha lagta hain,SHUKRIYA
aapki ek aur baat jo hame achhi lagti hai,,wo yeh hain,ke
aap kafi had tak hamare maksad,hamari dilse nikli baato ko samajh jate hain.

isi ka nam dosti hai,,,HAI NA?

BAS aise hi apni dost ki himmat badhate rahiyega.

Allah aapko aur tarakki de,
aapke aur apke pyar ko hamesha saath rakhe,
hamesha khush rahiye,
APNA AUR APNE PYAR KA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

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( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[Pagal Kuri]

Hmm..... ok jee teekh hai

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by sunita virender

Sony ji behad khoobsurat gazal pesh ki hai aapne, har sher umda banna hai, dil ki sadda dil tak pahunch jaye…yehi dua hai….kush rahiye aur yu hi mahfil aapni majudgi se rangeen banaye rahiye.

Duao.n ke saath

AADAB SUNITA JI,
KAISI HAI AAP?
aapki tahe dilse shukra guzar hun,k aapne hamari nazm ko pasand kiya,
bas aap logo ka saath aise hi banaye rakhiyega,
INSHA ALLAH hum aise hi mehfil rangeen banayenge,

AAP BHI KHUSH RAHIYE,
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

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( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by Pagal Kuri

Hmm..... ok jee teekh hai

Aadab kuri ji,
kaise hain aap?

aapka bohot_bohot shukriya
jo aap hamare kalam pe aaye aur hame padha,
aage bhi hamari hosla afzai karne zarur ayiyega,


hamesha khush rahiye.

Apna khayal rakhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[chaahat]

Sony ji..

Dard se bhare aapke yeh aashaar dil ko choo gaye...

Shayri ki nazar me behad khoobsoorat hain... bas is dard ko dil se na lagaaiyega.. yehi dua hai..

Humesha khush rahiye..

~Priya

[TariqAhmadAzmi]

Originally Posted by munfairy

ASSALAM WALEKUM,
NAMASTE DOSTO.


KESE HAI AAP SAB?
Dosto phir ek baar hum apni nayi koshish,aap sabhi ke samne rakh rahe hain,
aaj bhi hum,,hamesha ki tarah umeed karte hain,,
ke aap hame padhenge,or saath hi hamari hosla afzai karenge.

Aap ke jawab ka intezaar rahega,

SHUKRIYA.
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*''*
( c '?
>.--</"")
«•´`•.(*•.¸(`•.¸ Ek Aas•´)¸.•*).•´`•»


Ek pal me de diye,kya_kya ilzaam ApNe,
khuN_E_dil aNkho se tapka,Na dekha ApNe.


Meri palko ki Mandaro pe,koi roNak hi Nahi,
dekh lo ashko ka chiraga,Na dekha Apne.


he shakk se bhara charo taraf,samuNdar_hi_samuNdar,
jo Umeed se badhaya haath,Na thama ApNe.


koi Akar mujhe le jaye,yahiN dur kahiN,
kyuN roz Dua me khuda se,yehi maNga ApNe?


Nahi jati mere badan se,Apki pyar ki khushbu,
mere khuwaboN ki basti ko,jo yuN sajaya ApNe.


Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.


meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?


maNa ke kuch pata Nahi,manzil he,ab kidhar,
jo bichhde he,wo mileNge,yeh maNa he ApNe.


wapas palat ke Ayega,gaya pal wo ek diN,
apNi dulhaN ki Aas me,piya jo guzara ApNe...


**************************************************
Aap sab apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

Aapko shaan ka salam,
kyse hai aap, aaj bahut din bat hum shairy.com per aaye or aapki post padhi bahut achee koshish Hai. humari mubarak baad kabool kijiye.

Aap bhi apna khyaal rakee or hamesha hanste or muskurate rahe.
t.k.
SHAAN

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by chaahat

Sony ji..

Dard se bhare aapke yeh aashaar dil ko choo gaye...

Shayri ki nazar me behad khoobsoorat hain... bas is dard ko dil se na lagaaiyega.. yehi dua hai..

Humesha khush rahiye..

~Priya

Aadab priya ji,
kaisi hain aap?

hamari nazm ne apke dil ko chhua,aapko hamari nazm khubsurat lagi,
yakin kijite..aapka dilse shukriya ada karti hun,

haan priya ji aap hamare liye zarur dua kijiyega,k yeh dard ,hamari zindagi se koso duur rahe,AAMIN

hamesha khush rahiye.

Apna khayal rakhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aapko shaan ka salam,
kyse hai aap, aaj bahut din bat hum shairy.com per aaye or aapki post padhi bahut achee koshish Hai. humari mubarak baad kabool kijiye.

Aap bhi apna khyaal rakee or hamesha hanste or muskurate rahe.
t.k.
SHAAN

SALAM SHAAN JI,
KHUSH AAMADID SHAAN JI,
kaise hain aap?

itne dinon ke baad ,,aapko phir ek baar,, apni post per dekh kar hame be_hadd khushi hui,
aapne aate hi hamari nazm padhi,aur use pasand kiya,aapka dilse shukriya ada karti hun,
shaan ji aap pehle bhi hamesha hamari hosla afzai karte the,bas ab apne is parivaar se jude rahiyega,or apna saath banaye rakhiyega,
humne apki mubarak baad dilse kabul karli ,

ap bhi hamesha khush rakhiye.
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

[Ek Ehsaas]

Originally Posted by munfairy

ASSALAM WALEKUM,
NAMASTE DOSTO.

Wale-Kum-Assalam Sony Ji

Originally Posted by munfairy

KESE HAI AAP SAB

Achhe Hain Sony Ji aur Dua hai ki aap aur Hassan Ji bhi achhe honge..

Originally Posted by munfairy

«•´`•.(*•.¸(`•.¸ Ek Aas•´)¸.•*).•´`•»


Ek pal me de diye,kya_kya ilzaam ApNe,
khuN_E_dil aNkho se tapka,Na dekha ApNe.

Meri palko ki Mandaro pe,koi roNak hi Nahi,
dekh lo ashko ka chiraga,Na dekha Apne.

he shakk se bhara charo taraf,samuNdar_hi_samuNdar,
jo Umeed se badhaya haath,Na thama ApNe.

koi Akar mujhe le jaye,yahiN dur kahiN,
kyuN roz Dua me khuda se,yehi maNga ApNe?

Nahi jati mere badan se,Apki pyar ki khushbu,
mere khuwaboN ki basti ko,jo yuN sajaya ApNe.

Ehd_e_Wafa ko apNi me,kese bayaN karu,
HaaN! chali auNgi,me mar k bhi,ke pukara ApNe.

meri himmat hi Na hui,ke paas bitha ke me puchhuN,
kyuN tadpa ke mujhko,khud ko bhi,tadpaya ApNe?

maNa ke kuch pata Nahi,manzil he,ab kidhar,
jo bichhde he,wo mileNge,yeh maNa he ApNe.

wapas palat ke Ayega,gaya pal wo ek diN,
apNi dulhaN ki Aas me,piya jo guzara ApNe...

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Sony Ji aap Jis Tarah Se apne Ehsaason ko alfaaz deti hain wo wakayi kabile tareef hai. Aapka Andaaz auron se kaafi juda hai aur yahi baak aapko doosron se juda banati hai..
Aapko padhna hamesha hi bahut achha lagta hai Sony Ji aur yakeen maniye aapse baat karke kaafi hudd tak apna dard bhi bhool jata hoon. Aap sahi maynon mein FAIRY hain.Aur jaisa ki maine kaha ki aapko padhkar bahut sukoon milta hai so aaapse bhi yahi guzarish hai ki hamesha yun hi likhte rahiye...

Originally Posted by munfairy

Aap sab apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

Aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyega FAIRY Ji. Khuda Hafiz..

[munfairy]

Originally Posted by Widhani

Wale-Kum-Assalam Sony Ji

Achhe Hain Sony Ji aur Dua hai ki aap aur Hassan Ji bhi achhe honge..


Sony Ji aap Jis Tarah Se apne Ehsaason ko alfaaz deti hain wo wakayi kabile tareef hai. Aapka Andaaz auron se kaafi juda hai aur yahi baak aapko doosron se juda banati hai..
Aapko padhna hamesha hi bahut achha lagta hai Sony Ji aur yakeen maniye aapse baat karke kaafi hudd tak apna dard bhi bhool jata hoon. Aap sahi maynon mein FAIRY hain.Aur jaisa ki maine kaha ki aapko padhkar bahut sukoon milta hai so aaapse bhi yahi guzarish hai ki hamesha yun hi likhte rahiye...



Aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyega FAIRY Ji. Khuda Hafiz..

Aadab widhani ji,
kaise hai aap?

ji hum dono bhi boohot achhe hain,or khush b hai,

widhani ji kya kahe,
yakin maniye hamare paas alfaz nahi hain,
hame be_inteha khushi ho rahi hain,
aapne hamari un nazmo me reply kiya hain,jo hamare dilke bohot karib hain,aur sachhai se nazdik bhi hain,

aapne hamari purani nazmo ko padha,use dilse mehsus kiya,

aap hi kahiye kya kahe hum aapse?

widhani ji,ek baat aapne sach kahi,
hum jo kuch b likhte hain,
bas likhte hain,uski bariki,,etc.....
in baato ko,,to hum jante bhi nahi hain,

haan aaj jo kuch b hai,sirf aap jese dosto ki hosla afzai,aur duao ki wajah se hai,

widhani ji hum or hamare HaSSaN .dilki gehraiyon se aapka shukriya ada karte hai,
baraye meherbani zarur kabulk kijiyega.