**~**Khwaab**~**

farhana · **~**Khwaab**~** - 5th March 2006, 05:49 PM

mere sabhi azeez doston...
aapka istaqbaal karti hoon apne kalaam pe...umeed hai aap ise mere sabhi baaki kalaamon ki tarah padhenge..khyaal rakhiyega apna aap sabhi..khush rahiyega..aabaad rahiyega..isi dua ke saath ijaazat chahungi.

yeh khwaab bhi bade ajeeb hain...kabhi haqeeqat se lagte hain aur kabhi bas ek aisa manzar jo jaane ke liye hi hamari nazron me utar aata hai....kabhi yeh dil me ek khalish si chod jaata hai aur kabhi yeh dil ko ek anjaani si khushi de jaata hai...ek aisi bechaini jisme chain hi chain hai...jise baar baar dekhne ke liye hum bekaraar hojate hain. @}-;
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Phir wahi gazab kee suhaanee chandnee raat hai
Zubaan pay mere ek sharmaayi ankahi si baat hai

Kaash baras jaate woh bina baadal barsaat jaise
Aaj seene mein kuch machaltay say jazbaat hai

Kal tak kat rahee thi shaam-o-seher tanha tanha
Tere aane se ab harsu khushiyon ki baaraat hai

Raatraani se mehekta hai mere ghar kaa aangan
Teri saanson se muattar mere ye din aur raat hai

Bagair tere toh hum bas mar hi jaate jaaneman
Meri yeh zindagee tere pyaar kee hi saugaat hai

Roz likhte hain hum tere ishq me ghazal-o-nazm
Mere har aashaar me base tere hi ehsaasaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai

chandsi · **Re: **~**Khwaab**~** -** 5th March 2006, 05:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by farhana
mere sabhi azeez doston...
aapka istaqbaal karti hoon apne kalaam pe...umeed hai aap ise mere sabhi baaki kalaamon ki tarah padhenge..khyaal rakhiyega apna aap sabhi..khush rahiyega..aabaad rahiyega..isi dua ke saath ijaazat chahungi.

yeh khwaab bhi bade ajeeb hain...kabhi haqeeqat se lagte hain aur kabhi bas ek aisa manzar jo jaane ke liye hi hamari nazron me utar aata hai....kabhi yeh dil me ek khalish si chod jaata hai aur kabhi yeh dil ko ek anjaani si khushi de jaata hai...ek aisi bechaini jisme chain hi chain hai...jise baar baar dekhne ke liye hum bekaraar hojate hain. @}-;
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Phir wahi gazab kee suhaanee chandnee raat hai
Zubaan pay mere ek sharmaayi ankahi si baat hai

Kaash baras jaate woh bina baadal barsaat jaise
Aaj seene mein kuch machaltay say jazbaat hai

Kal tak kat rahee thi shaam-o-seher tanha tanha
Tere aane se ab harsu khushiyon ki baaraat hai

Raatraani se mehekta hai mere ghar kaa aangan
Teri saanson se muattar mere ye din aur raat hai

Bagair tere toh hum bas mar hi jaate jaaneman
Meri yeh zindagee tere pyaar kee hi saugaat hai

Roz likhte hain hum tere ishq me ghazal-o-nazm
Mere har aashaar me base tere hi ehsaasaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai

wow...........
aap/tum toh gajab ka likhti ho .................................

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mehul jain · **Re: **~**Khwaab**~** -** 5th March 2006, 05:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by farhana
mere sabhi azeez doston...
aapka istaqbaal karti hoon apne kalaam pe...umeed hai aap ise mere sabhi baaki kalaamon ki tarah padhenge..khyaal rakhiyega apna aap sabhi..khush rahiyega..aabaad rahiyega..isi dua ke saath ijaazat chahungi.

yeh khwaab bhi bade ajeeb hain...kabhi haqeeqat se lagte hain aur kabhi bas ek aisa manzar jo jaane ke liye hi hamari nazron me utar aata hai....kabhi yeh dil me ek khalish si chod jaata hai aur kabhi yeh dil ko ek anjaani si khushi de jaata hai...ek aisi bechaini jisme chain hi chain hai...jise baar baar dekhne ke liye hum bekaraar hojate hain. @}-;
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Phir wahi gazab kee suhaanee chandnee raat hai
Zubaan pay mere ek sharmaayi ankahi si baat hai

Kaash baras jaate woh bina baadal barsaat jaise
Aaj seene mein kuch machaltay say jazbaat hai

Kal tak kat rahee thi shaam-o-seher tanha tanha
Tere aane se ab harsu khushiyon ki baaraat hai

Raatraani se mehekta hai mere ghar kaa aangan
Teri saanson se muattar mere ye din aur raat hai

Bagair tere toh hum bas mar hi jaate jaaneman
Meri yeh zindagee tere pyaar kee hi saugaat hai

Roz likhte hain hum tere ishq me ghazal-o-nazm
Mere har aashaar me base tere hi ehsaasaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai

kya likha hai dd maza aa gaya aise kavita kaha padhne milti hai par aapke hote huye hume padhne ka mauka mil ta hai

masoomshayer · **farhana -** 5th March 2006, 05:56 PM

jo kahtee ho dil kee baat hotee hai dil ke as pas hotee hai samjh sakta hai apne hee khawabokhwahsin ko sajatee ho
main janata hooh khud ko jab parhtee ho muskaratee ho
kyon ke ye ahsas hota hai dil se kaha hai dil kee baat kahee hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai
sweet hai ye kahayl
Anil

acharya_mj · **hI -** 5th March 2006, 06:07 PM

hI FARHANA HOW ARE U?

tUMNE BAHUT HI KHUBSOORAT LIKHA HAI

Good creation always comes from pure, honest and beautiful mind.

Keep sharing dear

i would like 2 add some lines in to it
gustaakhi maaf

Phir wahi gazab kee suhaanee chandnee raat hai
Zubaan pay mere ek sharmaayi ankahi si baat hai

Kaash baras jaate woh bina baadal barsaat jaise
Aaj seene mein kuch machaltay say jazbaat hai

Kal tak kat rahee thi shaam-o-seher tanha tanha
Tere aane se ab harsu khushiyon ki baaraat hai

Raatraani se mehekta hai mere ghar kaa aangan
Teri saanson se muattar mere ye din aur raat hai

Bagair tere toh hum bas mar hi jaate jaaneman
Meri yeh zindagee tere pyaar kee hi saugaat hai

Roz likhte hain hum tere ishq me ghazal-o-nazm
Mere har aashaar me base tere hi ehsaasaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai

Jigar k khun mai dubo k mashaale hamne jalaayi hai
1 umrabhar se roshan hamaari kaaynaat hai

kahkasa se chura kar khuda ne bhrja hai tume,
Bahak jaayenge ye armaan ,fir vohi barsaat hai

Ham likhte rahenge hamesha tera hosla mile,
Tere shabnami hotho ke tabbsum ko meri saugaat hai

Dilo k kaagaz par hardam jo bikhar jaate hai yaha,
Voh khubsurat aur maasoom tere hi khayaalat hai

how was that?

surbhi_lov1 · 5th March 2006, 06:10 PM

hi farhana ji
how r u sach bahut hi khubsurat poem hainice one
likhte rahiye
bye tc

Rohin · 5th March 2006, 06:31 PM

Farhana

Very nice and sweet one.... with a bit of pain ... magar itna kahoonga,.... sab badalta hai... yeh bhi badlega... tumhara sapna ek din jaroor sacch hoga,,,

Take Care
Rohin

saakib · **Re: **~**Khwaab**~** -** 5th March 2006, 06:44 PM

Kaash baras jaate woh bina baadal barsaat jaise
Aaj seene mein kuch machaltay say jazbaat hai

Kal tak kat rahee thi shaam-o-seher tanha tanha
Tere aane se ab harsu khushiyon ki baaraat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat ha

adaab farhana ji,,,

bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne...phir se dil ge gehre jazbaat pesh kiye hai...aapko yuh padhna aaj phir dil ko achcha laga hamare...umeed hai aapko aage bhi padhne ko milega hume...

saakib...

Taish · 5th March 2006, 07:04 PM

wah dd wah.bas bahut maza aaya.shabdon me nahi keh paaunga shayad is baar main ki mujhe kitni pasand aayi ye rachna.bas dil ke har kone se ek wah hi nikal rahi hai.meed hai ki aap bas yunhi likhti rahengi.

GHAYAL

kuhulika · 5th March 2006, 07:28 PM

hi Faru...

bahut hi pyaari ghazal likkhi hai.... mujhe bahut pasand aayi.... wahi kahoongi ki... mere dil ki baat likkhi hai....sacch KHWAAB or TAARE dono aise hai jinhe hum dekh to sakte hai per un tak pahunch nahi sakte

yu hin likhti raho

cute_ashu · 5th March 2006, 07:40 PM

farhana
kaamaal kar diya aapne
bahut khoobsoorati se likha hai aapne
aise hi likhti rahiyega

aapka apna
cute sa Ashu

musharrafhusain · 6th March 2006, 10:36 AM

farhana

aise khalaat aur bayaan ko hem tapti dhoop mein taaza hawa ka jhonka kehte hain.
apne tishna aur adhoore tasauuraat ko khuaabon se mehkaate hain.
aap ka andaaze bayaan aur jazb ka alam aap ke kalaam ki techniki khaamiyon par bohat haavi raha aur parh ker bohat mehsoos kiyaa mein ne isey.

meri dua hai ke aap ke yeh khuaab haqiqat ka roop dhaarein aur aap zindagi mein voh sab kuch balke us se bhi ziaayaada haasil karein jin ke aap khuaab dekhti hain.

God bless you.

musharrafhusain

Mayank · 6th March 2006, 12:05 PM

Bagair tere toh hum bas mar hi jaate jaaneman
Meri yeh zindagee tere pyaar kee hi saugaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat ha

Farhana..

Bahoot khoobsoorat si ghazal likhi hai aap ne.. Achchhe lage aap ke har aashar.. Har sher dil ko jhakjhor kar rakh diya.. Bahoot hi pyaara ehsaas hai.. Kya baat hai bahoot romantic huyi jaa rahi hain aap?

Apna khayal rakhna.. Aise hi likhte raho...

MayanK

Diggaj_Dave · **Re: **~**Khwaab**~** -** 6th March 2006, 12:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by farhana
mere sabhi azeez doston...
aapka istaqbaal karti hoon apne kalaam pe...umeed hai aap ise mere sabhi baaki kalaamon ki tarah padhenge..khyaal rakhiyega apna aap sabhi..khush rahiyega..aabaad rahiyega..isi dua ke saath ijaazat chahungi.

yeh khwaab bhi bade ajeeb hain...kabhi haqeeqat se lagte hain aur kabhi bas ek aisa manzar jo jaane ke liye hi hamari nazron me utar aata hai....kabhi yeh dil me ek khalish si chod jaata hai aur kabhi yeh dil ko ek anjaani si khushi de jaata hai...ek aisi bechaini jisme chain hi chain hai...jise baar baar dekhne ke liye hum bekaraar hojate hain. @}-;
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Phir wahi gazab kee suhaanee chandnee raat hai
Zubaan pay mere ek sharmaayi ankahi si baat hai

Kaash baras jaate woh bina baadal barsaat jaise
Aaj seene mein kuch machaltay say jazbaat hai

Kal tak kat rahee thi shaam-o-seher tanha tanha
Tere aane se ab harsu khushiyon ki baaraat hai

Raatraani se mehekta hai mere ghar kaa aangan
Teri saanson se muattar mere ye din aur raat hai

Bagair tere toh hum bas mar hi jaate jaaneman
Meri yeh zindagee tere pyaar kee hi saugaat hai

Roz likhte hain hum tere ishq me ghazal-o-nazm
Mere har aashaar me base tere hi ehsaasaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai

DEar Farhana

aapke ye ehsaasaat bohat ache lage hamein
jazbaato k mein doobi ye rachna pasand aayi...Tarif mein apno ki karta nahi isliye mera aana hi apni tarif samjh llijiyega....

apka dost

Diggaj

farhana · **Re: Re: **~**Khwaab**~** -** 6th March 2006, 02:04 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by chandsi
wow...........
aap/tum toh gajab ka likhti ho .................................

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tum bhi bahaut accha likhti ho..tumhe kalaam pasand aaya jaanke khushi hui..yuhin aati raha karo..accha lagta hai dear.
apna khyaal rakhna.

roshani · 6th March 2006, 02:19 PM

dear faru,
amazingly well expressed. well pyaar mein doobe hue halaton ki bahut ache se pehchaan karwayi aapke har ek alfaas ne. well its awesome.loved reading each word of urs n its complete in itself. keep penning down ahead too n keep sharing among us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jas

farhana · **Re: Re: **~**Khwaab**~** -** 6th March 2006, 02:56 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by mehul jain
kya likha hai dd maza aa gaya aise kavita kaha padhne milti hai par aapke hote huye hume padhne ka mauka mil ta hai

hehe zyada tareef mat karo....isse bhi bhetar kalaam tumhe yahan padhne miljayenge....
waise tum aaye accha laga mujhe...apna khyaal rakhna sweets.

farhana · **Re: farhana -** 6th March 2006, 02:58 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by masoomshayer
jo kahtee ho dil kee baat hotee hai dil ke as pas hotee hai samjh sakta hai apne hee khawabokhwahsin ko sajatee ho
main janata hooh khud ko jab parhtee ho muskaratee ho
kyon ke ye ahsas hota hai dil se kaha hai dil kee baat kahee hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai
sweet hai ye kahayl
Anil

anil ji...

aapne mere jazbaaton ko samjha aur unki kadar ki yeh mere liye bahaut badi baat hai warna is duniya log bas anjaan bane rehne me apna fayda samjhte hain..kadar toh door ki baat hai.
khair ab jabtak likh sakti hoon likkhungi...lekin alvida karne se pehle zaroor kehke jaungi.tabtak ke liye padhte rahiyega.apna khyaal rakhiyega.

farhana · **Re: hI -** 6th March 2006, 03:00 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by acharya_mj
hI FARHANA HOW ARE U?

tUMNE BAHUT HI KHUBSOORAT LIKHA HAI

Good creation always comes from pure, honest and beautiful mind.

Keep sharing dear

i would like 2 add some lines in to it
gustaakhi maaf

Phir wahi gazab kee suhaanee chandnee raat hai
Zubaan pay mere ek sharmaayi ankahi si baat hai

Kaash baras jaate woh bina baadal barsaat jaise
Aaj seene mein kuch machaltay say jazbaat hai

Kal tak kat rahee thi shaam-o-seher tanha tanha
Tere aane se ab harsu khushiyon ki baaraat hai

Raatraani se mehekta hai mere ghar kaa aangan
Teri saanson se muattar mere ye din aur raat hai

Bagair tere toh hum bas mar hi jaate jaaneman
Meri yeh zindagee tere pyaar kee hi saugaat hai

Roz likhte hain hum tere ishq me ghazal-o-nazm
Mere har aashaar me base tere hi ehsaasaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai

Jigar k khun mai dubo k mashaale hamne jalaayi hai
1 umrabhar se roshan hamaari kaaynaat hai

kahkasa se chura kar khuda ne bhrja hai tume,
Bahak jaayenge ye armaan ,fir vohi barsaat hai

Ham likhte rahenge hamesha tera hosla mile,
Tere shabnami hotho ke tabbsum ko meri saugaat hai

Dilo k kaagaz par hardam jo bikhar jaate hai yaha,
Voh khubsurat aur maasoom tere hi khayaalat hai

how was that?

manu mei toh hamesha hi kehti hoon ke tum accha likhte ho.ls baar bhi tumne accha likkha hai kaafi..mere kalaam me chaar chaand laga diye tumne.shukriya aapka.
aapko kalaam pasand aaya yeh meri khush naseebi hai...aise hi aindah bhi aate rahiyega.dil ko sukoon milta hai doston ka saath paake...khush rahiyega

farhana · 6th March 2006, 03:02 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by surbhi_lov1
hi farhana ji
how r u sach bahut hi khubsurat poem hainice one
likhte rahiye
bye tc

hi surbhi....

thanks for coming dear...tumhe kalaam pasand aaya jaanke dil ko bada sukoon mila hai..
aati rehna dost.

farhana · 6th March 2006, 03:04 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Rohin
Farhana

Very nice and sweet one.... with a bit of pain ... magar itna kahoonga,.... sab badalta hai... yeh bhi badlega... tumhara sapna ek din jaroor sacch hoga,,,

Take Care
Rohin

nahi rohin..

mera sapna ab kabhi sach nahi hoga...
meri takdeer mujhse ab hamesha ke liye rooth gayi hai...
khair tum aaye accha laga...yuhin dosti nibhaate rehna.....
tumhe kalaam pasand aaya,shukriya dost.

farhana · **Re: Re: **~**Khwaab**~** -** 6th March 2006, 05:44 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by saakib
Kaash baras jaate woh bina baadal barsaat jaise
Aaj seene mein kuch machaltay say jazbaat hai

Kal tak kat rahee thi shaam-o-seher tanha tanha
Tere aane se ab harsu khushiyon ki baaraat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat ha

adaab farhana ji,,,

bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne...phir se dil ge gehre jazbaat pesh kiye hai...aapko yuh padhna aaj phir dil ko achcha laga hamare...umeed hai aapko aage bhi padhne ko milega hume...

saakib...

saakib ji aapne kalaam ko tareefe kaabil samjha iske liye mei aapki shukraguzaar hoon..jabtak likh sakti hoon inshallah likhne ki koshish karti rahungi.khyaal rakhiyega apna aur aate rahiyega.

Vipinbox · 6th March 2006, 05:56 PM

Farhana Ji
Aapko Namaskaar!

Aapke 'khawab' ko parha tow ismein bahaut kuch paaya hai. Shabdon ka sangam paaya hai.....

"Raatraani se mehekta hai mere ghar kaa aangan"

dhanyavaad
v i p i n

sushiljain · 6th March 2006, 06:30 PM

AAPKO DIL SE DETE HUM DAAT HAI,
JO BHI PADHE WOH YEHI KAHEGA,
KYA BAAT HAI, KYA BAAT HAI.

farhana · 6th March 2006, 07:03 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
wah dd wah.bas bahut maza aaya.shabdon me nahi keh paaunga shayad is baar main ki mujhe kitni pasand aayi ye rachna.bas dil ke har kone se ek wah hi nikal rahi hai.meed hai ki aap bas yunhi likhti rahengi.

GHAYAL

lucky dear........

kaise ho sweetu....accha laga tum aaye..tumhe mera kalaam itna pasand ayega mujhe umeed nahi thi..dil ko khushi aur sukoon donno mila hai tumhare aane se...aate rehna aage bhi.khush raho.

sukanya · 6th March 2006, 08:03 PM

Roz likhte hain hum tere ishq me ghazal-o-nazm
Mere har aashaar me base tere hi ehsaasaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai

Hello Farhana

A beautiful creation....lovely poetry.....Yuun hi ghazal aur nazm likti rehna.....Keep writing...mere daad kabul karna

Take Care

farhana · 6th March 2006, 09:57 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by kuhulika
hi Faru...

bahut hi pyaari ghazal likkhi hai.... mujhe bahut pasand aayi.... wahi kahoongi ki... mere dil ki baat likkhi hai....sacch KHWAAB or TAARE dono aise hai jinhe hum dekh to sakte hai per un tak pahunch nahi sakte

yu hin likhti raho

haan bilkul sahi kaha shweta...yeh khwaab yeh taare jaane hum kyun paa nahi sakte.........
tumhe kalaam pasand aaya dil ko khushi mili..yuhin aage bhi mujhe padhti rehna sweets...miss u.

Pulkit_gupta · 6th March 2006, 10:52 PM

Phir wahi gazab kee suhaanee chandnee raat hai
Zubaan pay mere ek sharmaayi ankahi si baat hai

Kaash baras jaate woh bina baadal barsaat jaise
Aaj seene mein kuch machaltay say jazbaat hai

Waaaaaah... kya baat hai...

Kal tak kat rahee thi shaam-o-seher tanha tanha
Tere aane se ab harsu khushiyon ki baaraat hai

Raatraani se mehekta hai mere ghar kaa aangan
Teri saanson se muattar mere ye din aur raat hai

beautiful...

Bagair tere toh hum bas mar hi jaate jaaneman
Meri yeh zindagee tere pyaar kee hi saugaat hai

Roz likhte hain hum tere ishq me ghazal-o-nazm
Mere har aashaar me base tere hi ehsaasaat hai

Waaaaaaaahhhhh....last sher was just tooo good...

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai

Waaaaaahh..!

Hi Farhana,

Thsi on is soo soo beautifulll.. har sher dil ko chhota hai....evry word of this ghazal touched me.... just loved it... meri dil se daad kubool akrna... bass aise hi likhti raho... khayal rakho apna

Mukhra · 6th March 2006, 11:18 PM

wow! kya baat hai farhana...hehe, so nice!

and sweet!! ya, there is a bit of dard in there, but the happiness dominates it!
and wht to say...lagta hai aaj sab lajawaab likh rahe hain...whts so special abt today? huh huh huh huh

well, wht can i say, wonderful, beautiful

take care
bye

sameer'shaad' · 7th March 2006, 10:43 AM

appi aap kya ho yaar sach me aisa lagta hai ki main kahin aur aa gaya hoon.ek alag anokhi duniya me.sach me appi ek aur ummda kalaam ,yoon hi likhte rahna appi aur allah pe bharosa rakhna inshallah aapke sare armaan poore honge..allah hafiz
shaad

farhana · 7th March 2006, 12:57 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by cute_ashu
farhana
kaamaal kar diya aapne
bahut khoobsoorati se likha hai aapne
aise hi likhti rahiyega

aapka apna
cute sa Ashu

cute se ashu dear....tum aaye accha laga..tumhe kalaam pasand aaya yeh meri khushnaseebi haiaater ehna aage bhi dost.apna khyaal rakkho

farhana · 7th March 2006, 01:05 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by musharrafhusain
farhana

aise khalaat aur bayaan ko hem tapti dhoop mein taaza hawa ka jhonka kehte hain.
apne tishna aur adhoore tasauuraat ko khuaabon se mehkaate hain.
aap ka andaaze bayaan aur jazb ka alam aap ke kalaam ki techniki khaamiyon par bohat haavi raha aur parh ker bohat mehsoos kiyaa mein ne isey.

meri dua hai ke aap ke yeh khuaab haqiqat ka roop dhaarein aur aap zindagi mein voh sab kuch balke us se bhi ziaayaada haasil karein jin ke aap khuaab dekhti hain.

God bless you.

musharrafhusain

musharrafji.......

ab aapse kya kahoon ke mujhe kitni khushi milti hai jabbhi mei aapko apne kalaam pe dekhti hoon....
aapko mera andaaze bayaan itna pasand aaya jaanke dil ko tasalli mili hai....aap aindah se techiki kamiyaan mujhe zaroor bata diya kariyega taaki mei use bhi nikhaar sakoon....
waise jahan tak aapki duaon ki baat hai toh ab kya kahoon....
meri toh kabhi kubool nahi hui shayad aapki arz khuda sunle...
aate rahiyega aindah bhi..aapka reply dekhke bada sukoon milta hai.

farhana · 7th March 2006, 01:10 PM

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Originally posted by Anjana Rahi
Bagair tere toh hum bas mar hi jaate jaaneman
Meri yeh zindagee tere pyaar kee hi saugaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat ha

Farhana..

Bahoot khoobsoorat si ghazal likhi hai aap ne.. Achchhe lage aap ke har aashar.. Har sher dil ko jhakjhor kar rakh diya.. Bahoot hi pyaara ehsaas hai.. Kya baat hai bahoot romantic huyi jaa rahi hain aap?

Apna khayal rakhna.. Aise hi likhte raho...

MayanK

romantic ho paati..ya pyaar ki vaadiyon me jhoom paati aisi meri kismat nahi hai...har kisiko pyaar nahi milta hai...yahi hai kahani meri....bas mei aur aur meri tanhaaiii...par koi baat nahi kyunki ab mujhe aise jeene ki aadat ho chuki hai...
tumhe kalaam pasand aaya jaanke khushi hui mayank.....aate raha karo....doston ka saath kaafi hai ab.khush rahiyega.

farhana · **Re: Re: **~**Khwaab**~** -** 7th March 2006, 01:13 PM

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Originally posted by Diggaj_Dave
DEar Farhana

aapke ye ehsaasaat bohat ache lage hamein
jazbaato k mein doobi ye rachna pasand aayi...Tarif mein apno ki karta nahi isliye mera aana hi apni tarif samjh llijiyega....

apka dost

Diggaj

tareef ki zarurat nahi hai mujhe..bas yuhin ajaaya karo..bas aapki dosti ki zarurat hai mujhe....khushi milti hai tumhare aane se...tumhe kalaam pasand aaya jaanke accha laga..yuhin aate rehna aage bhi...

farhana · **Re: Re: **~**Khwaab**~** -** 7th March 2006, 01:13 PM

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Originally posted by Diggaj_Dave
DEar Farhana

aapke ye ehsaasaat bohat ache lage hamein
jazbaato k mein doobi ye rachna pasand aayi...Tarif mein apno ki karta nahi isliye mera aana hi apni tarif samjh llijiyega....

apka dost

Diggaj

tareef ki zarurat nahi hai mujhe..bas yuhin ajaaya karo..bas aapki dosti ki zarurat hai mujhe....khushi milti hai tumhare aane se...tumhe kalaam pasand aaya jaanke accha laga..yuhin aate rehna aage bhi...

farhana · 7th March 2006, 01:17 PM

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Originally posted by roshani
dear faru,
amazingly well expressed. well pyaar mein doobe hue halaton ki bahut ache se pehchaan karwayi aapke har ek alfaas ne. well its awesome.loved reading each word of urs n its complete in itself. keep penning down ahead too n keep sharing among us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jas

hi jas.............

finally u came on my post after such a long timeeeeee........
m so glad to see you yaar...
aise hi aati raha karo....accha lagta hai...
tumhe kalaam pasand aaya meri khuhsnaseebi hai dear....
hmmm aise hi mujhe padhti rehna sweets...aur haan apna khyaal rakhna tum.

farhana · 7th March 2006, 01:21 PM

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Originally posted by Vipinbox
Farhana Ji
Aapko Namaskaar!

Aapke 'khawab' ko parha tow ismein bahaut kuch paaya hai. Shabdon ka sangam paaya hai.....

"Raatraani se mehekta hai mere ghar kaa aangan"

dhanyavaad
v i p i n

vipinji...

aap aaye bahaar aayi...
jabbhi aapko apne post pe dekhti hoon toh lagta hai ke shayad is baar meine accha likkha hai....

yuhin aate rahiyega aur haan kalaam pasand karne ke liye shukriyaji...apna khyaal rakhiyega.

farhana · 7th March 2006, 01:22 PM

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Originally posted by sushiljain
AAPKO DIL SE DETE HUM DAAT HAI,
JO BHI PADHE WOH YEHI KAHEGA,
KYA BAAT HAI, KYA BAAT HAI.

tumhara sher ke zariye apni baat keh dena mujhe bada pasand aata hai...
yuhin aate rehna dost.apna khyaal rakhna.

farhana · 7th March 2006, 04:18 PM

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Originally posted by sukanya
Roz likhte hain hum tere ishq me ghazal-o-nazm
Mere har aashaar me base tere hi ehsaasaat hai

So jao ‘farhana’ ke bahaut lambi aaj ki ye raat hai
Aaj Khwabo me likhi meri unse ik aur mulakaat hai

Hello Farhana

A beautiful creation....lovely poetry.....Yuun hi ghazal aur nazm likti rehna.....Keep writing...mere daad kabul karna

Take Care

SUKANYA JI....

kaisi hain aap......aapka reply dekhke khushi hui..kalaam pasand karne ke liye shukriya..jabtak mere jazbaat mere kalam ka saath denge tabtak yeh nacheez bhi likhti rahegi....aap yuhin aati rehna...khush rahiye.

shrdh · 7th March 2006, 04:35 PM

dear faru late reply k liye mafi chaungi

thoda busy thi to nahi aa payi thi
but ab aayi hoon to dil se padh ahai and bhaut sunder likha hai lado
love u
shrdh