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28th May 2015, 11:23 AM
ik baar muhabbbat kar liije to Gam kaa mere a.ndaazaa ho,
lekin ye duaa hogii merii, taqaleef tumhe kuchh zyaadaa ho.
har adaa hai un kii jaaduuii aur qaatil un kaa yaaraanaa,
phir chaahe shokh la.Dakpan ho, yaa phir un kaa sharamaanaa ho.
jab maranaa hai anjaam-e-wafaa to kyuu.n na duaa ye lab pe ho,
ye rooh hawaa me tab jaae, jab aanchal wo laharaataa ho.
ye qalam bhii us dam chalatee hai aur yaad terii tab aatii hai,
jab raat bahut sharmeelii ho aur chaand falak pe aadhaa ho.
kis kaam ka hai wo parwaanaa jo shammaa ko chhoo kar bhaage,
kyaa khaak muhabbat ki usane jo jal kar shor machaataa ho.
mahbooob ki galiyaa.n jaane me itnaa bhii kyaa chalte rahnaa,
aye shaad kabhii to ruk jaao jab paas koii maykhaanaa ho.
इक बार मुहब्ब्बत कर लीजे तो ग़म का मेरे अंदाज़ा हो,
लेकिन ये दुआ होगी मेरी, तक़लीफ़ तुम्हें कुछ ज़्यादा हो.
हर अदा है उन की जादूई और क़ातिल उन का याराना,
फिर चाहे शोख लड़कपन हो, या फिर उन का शरमाना हो.
जब मरना है अन्जाम-ए-वफ़ा तो क्यूं न दुआ ये लब पे हो,
ये रूह हवा मे तब जाए, जब आंचल वो लहराता हो.
ये क़लम भी उस दम चलती है और याद तेरी तब आती है,
जब रात बहुत शर्मीली हो और चाँद फ़लक पे आधा हो.
किस काम का है वो परवाना जो शम्मा को छू कर भागे,
क्या ख़ाक मुहब्बत की उसने जो जल कर शोर मचाता हो.
महबूब कि गलियां जाने मे इतना भी क्या चलते रहना,
ऐ शाद कभी तो रुक जाओ जब पास कोई मयख़ाना हो.
Shaad...........
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28th May 2015, 11:37 AM
shaad jii....behad khoobsoorat ghazal huyi hai....bas jaise jaise padhti gayi..iski ghahraiyon me utarti gayi....bahut hee achcha flow aur utni hee sateek tareeke se ehsaas bayaan huye hain....matla padhte hee jo waah nikli vo har sher par badti hee gayi....
Superb.....
likhte rahein.....salamat rahein....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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shaad jii....behad khoobsoorat ghazal huyi hai....bas jaise jaise padhti gayi..iski ghahraiyon me utarti gayi....bahut hee achcha flow aur utni hee sateek tareeke se ehsaas bayaan huye hain....matla padhte hee jo waah nikli vo har sher par badti hee gayi....
Superb.....
likhte rahein.....salamat rahein....
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aapki inaayat hai madhu jii..... aapne jo kalaam ki tareef ki hai to dil jhoom uthaa hai..... daad aur duaaon ka tahe dil se shukriyaa.... aati rahiyegaa
Shaad....
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28th May 2015, 11:41 AM
waaaaaahhhh!!
behad khubsurat ashaar haiN, Shoiabbhai.... dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad hamaari jaanib se......
duaaGo
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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waaaaaahhhh!!
behad khubsurat ashaar haiN, Shoiabbhai.... dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad hamaari jaanib se......
duaaGo
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aadeil bhai mashkoor hoon jo aapne kaalaam ki pazeeraai farmaai........
aage bhi aapki aamad kaa intezaaar rahaa karegaa... khush rahen
shaad.....
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28th May 2015, 11:43 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
ik baar muhabbbat kar liije to Gam kaa mere a.ndaazaa ho,
lekin ye duaa hogii merii, taqaleef tumhe kuchh zyaadaa ho.
har adaa hai un kii jaaduuii aur qaatil un kaa yaaraanaa,
phir chaahe shokh la.Dakpan ho, yaa phir un kaa sharamaanaa ho.
jab maranaa hai anjaam-e-wafaa to kyuu.n na duaa ye lab pe ho,
ye rooh hawaa me tab jaae, jab aanchal wo laharaataa ho.
ye qalam bhii us dam chalatee hai aur yaad terii tab aatii hai,
jab raat bahut sharmeelii ho aur chaand falak pe aadhaa ho.
kis kaam ka hai wo parwaanaa jo shammaa ko chhoo kar bhaage,
kyaa khaak muhabbat ki usane jo jal kar shor machaataa ho.
mahbooob ki galiyaa.n jaane me itnaa bhii kyaa chalte rahnaa,
aye shaad kabhii to ruk jaao jab paas koii maykhaanaa ho.
इक बार मुहब्ब्बत कर लीजे तो ग़म का मेरे अंदाज़ा हो,
लेकिन ये दुआ होगी मेरी, तक़लीफ़ तुम्हें कुछ ज़्यादा हो.
हर अदा है उन की जादूई और क़ातिल उन का याराना,
फिर चाहे शोख लड़कपन हो, या फिर उन का शरमाना हो.
जब मरना है अन्जाम-ए-वफ़ा तो क्यूं न दुआ ये लब पे हो,
ये रूह हवा मे तब जाए, जब आंचल वो लहराता हो.
ये क़लम भी उस दम चलती है और याद तेरी तब आती है,
जब रात बहुत शर्मीली हो और चाँद फ़लक पे आधा हो.
किस काम का है वो परवाना जो शम्मा को छू कर भागे,
क्या ख़ाक मुहब्बत की उसने जो जल कर शोर मचाता हो.
महबूब कि गलियां जाने मे इतना भी क्या चलते रहना,
ऐ शाद कभी तो रुक जाओ जब पास कोई मयख़ाना हो.
Shaad...........
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shaad bhai...loot liya aapke shayrana andaaz ne, bahut hi khoobsurat gazal aur pehle wala sher to kya dil ki koonas nikaali hai
ik baar muhabbbat kar liije to Gam kaa mere a.ndaazaa ho,
lekin ye duaa hogii merii, taqaleef tumhe kuchh zyaadaa ho.
bahut saare pyar aur duaoN ke saath
diii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th June 2015, 09:48 AM
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shaad bhai...loot liya aapke shayrana andaaz ne, bahut hi khoobsurat gazal aur pehle wala sher to kya dil ki koonas nikaali hai
ik baar muhabbbat kar liije to Gam kaa mere a.ndaazaa ho,
lekin ye duaa hogii merii, taqaleef tumhe kuchh zyaadaa ho.
bahut saare pyar aur duaoN ke saath
diii
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sunitaa dee namaskaar..... khushii huii aapko bazm me dekh kar....
tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon aapka jo aapne hame is laayaq samjhaa aur hamare adnaa se kalama ko itnii izzt dee....
age bhi aatii rahiyegaa,,, aur apni duaaon se hame nawaaztii rahiyegaa....
shukriyaa
shaad.....
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28th May 2015, 12:00 PM
Waah Shaad bhai bahut khoob bahut umdah likha hai
daad kubul karen
radhe radhe
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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10th June 2015, 09:51 AM
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Waah Shaad bhai bahut khoob bahut umdah likha hai
daad kubul karen
radhe radhe
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aapki inaayato se mamnoon hoon rajinder saaahab..... aate rahiyegaa.
shaad....
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28th May 2015, 01:36 PM
Waah waah....
Kya baat kya baat kya baat....
Matlab Ki stupendofantaboulouslyfantastic....
Mazza aa Gaya.
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29th May 2015, 06:24 AM
ik baar muhabbbat kar liije to Gam kaa mere a.ndaazaa ho,
lekin ye duaa hogii merii, taqaleef tumhe kuchh zyaadaa ho
humari b dua hai ki apka hunar or kushiya waqt ke sath or bhi zyaada ho waah bahut khuuuuuuuuubbb Shaad bhai bahut khub.. dil ko chuu gayi apki ye gazal.. subeh subeh humara SDC pe ana itna acha hoga socha na tha.. sukriya is keemti gazal ke liye..
kush rahe or yu hi likhte rahe..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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11th June 2015, 12:13 PM
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ik baar muhabbbat kar liije to Gam kaa mere a.ndaazaa ho,
lekin ye duaa hogii merii, taqaleef tumhe kuchh zyaadaa ho
humari b dua hai ki apka hunar or kushiya waqt ke sath or bhi zyaada ho waah bahut khuuuuuuuuubbb Shaad bhai bahut khub.. dil ko chuu gayi apki ye gazal.. subeh subeh humara SDC pe ana itna acha hoga socha na tha.. sukriya is keemti gazal ke liye..
kush rahe or yu hi likhte rahe..
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mashkoor hoon aaapki inaayaton aur nawaazishon se bhai.... yunhi aate rahen aur hauslaa badhaate rahen.........
khadime- SDC..
Shaad....
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11th June 2015, 12:12 PM
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Waah waah....
Kya baat kya baat kya baat....
Matlab Ki stupendofantaboulouslyfantastic....
Mazza aa Gaya.
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matalb ke thanksslaotwaaameharbaaniinaayat................
tahe dil se shukriyaa aapka Sarika jee.... do keep coming and share your blessings....
thanks,
shaad.....
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29th May 2015, 08:05 AM
Shaad bhaii
Subha subhaa itni behterin Ghazal paDh ke dil khush ho gahaa...mazaa aa gayaa sach me...dil se daad
Aapka
Dhaval
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Shaad bhaii
Subha subhaa itni behterin Ghazal paDh ke dil khush ho gahaa...mazaa aa gayaa sach me...dil se daad
Aapka
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aapki behad inaayat aur nawaazish hai Dhaval bhai...... aate rahen.. khush rahen..
Shaad....
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29th May 2015, 02:48 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
ik baar muhabbbat kar liije to Gam kaa mere a.ndaazaa ho,
lekin ye duaa hogii merii, taqaleef tumhe kuchh zyaadaa ho.
har adaa hai un kii jaaduuii aur qaatil un kaa yaaraanaa,
phir chaahe shokh la.Dakpan ho, yaa phir un kaa sharamaanaa ho.
jab maranaa hai anjaam-e-wafaa to kyuu.n na duaa ye lab pe ho,
ye rooh hawaa me tab jaae, jab aanchal wo laharaataa ho.
ye qalam bhii us dam chalatee hai aur yaad terii tab aatii hai,
jab raat bahut sharmeelii ho aur chaand falak pe aadhaa ho.
kis kaam ka hai wo parwaanaa jo shammaa ko chhoo kar bhaage,
kyaa khaak muhabbat ki usane jo jal kar shor machaataa ho.
mahbooob ki galiyaa.n jaane me itnaa bhii kyaa chalte rahnaa,
aye shaad kabhii to ruk jaao jab paas koii maykhaanaa ho.
इक बार मुहब्ब्बत कर लीजे तो ग़म का मेरे अंदाज़ा हो,
लेकिन ये दुआ होगी मेरी, तक़लीफ़ तुम्हें कुछ ज़्यादा हो.
हर अदा है उन की जादूई और क़ातिल उन का याराना,
फिर चाहे शोख लड़कपन हो, या फिर उन का शरमाना हो.
जब मरना है अन्जाम-ए-वफ़ा तो क्यूं न दुआ ये लब पे हो,
ये रूह हवा मे तब जाए, जब आंचल वो लहराता हो.
ये क़लम भी उस दम चलती है और याद तेरी तब आती है,
जब रात बहुत शर्मीली हो और चाँद फ़लक पे आधा हो.
किस काम का है वो परवाना जो शम्मा को छू कर भागे,
क्या ख़ाक मुहब्बत की उसने जो जल कर शोर मचाता हो.
महबूब कि गलियां जाने मे इतना भी क्या चलते रहना,
ऐ शाद कभी तो रुक जाओ जब पास कोई मयख़ाना हो.
Shaad...........
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Shaad bhai is behatreen ghazal par meri nacheez si daad aap tak pahunche..kal is do baar padhe zehan mein kuch sawaal the aur aapse baat bhi huyi, aaj ghazal ke daayroN ka ek naya rang bhi dekhne ko milaa. Bahut khoob janaab mazaa aa gaya.
Yun to shab sher khoob the par is ek sher ne waah bulandi se nikaal di
ye qalam bhii us dam chalatee hai aur yaad terii tab aatii hai,
jab raat bahut sharmeelii ho aur chaand falak pe aadhaa ho.
Bahut khoob bhai....
Qasid
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Shaad bhai is behatreen ghazal par meri nacheez si daad aap tak pahunche..kal is do baar padhe zehan mein kuch sawaal the aur aapse baat bhi huyi, aaj ghazal ke daayroN ka ek naya rang bhi dekhne ko milaa. Bahut khoob janaab mazaa aa gaya.
Yun to shab sher khoob the par is ek sher ne waah bulandi se nikaal di
ye qalam bhii us dam chalatee hai aur yaad terii tab aatii hai,
jab raat bahut sharmeelii ho aur chaand falak pe aadhaa ho.
Bahut khoob bhai....
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aaapki muhaabbataon aur inaayaton ke liye tahe dil se mashkoor hoon Mast bhai....... aap ka saath aur pyaar yunhii milta arahe yahi iltijaa hai... aur ummeed karte hain ilm ki is bazm me har din nayee roshanii panaptee rahegee.... shukriyaa tahe dil se
Shaad....
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1st June 2015, 09:06 PM
main agar kahun isne jaan le lee meri.....Sdc kee shaan hain hai ye......phoolon mein khilta kamal hai ye...tareef ye bhi to shaad bhai kuch bhi nahin......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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2nd June 2015, 12:53 AM
Matle mein keher dha doya aur akhir mein maikhana bhi dilha diya..aapki yeh peshkash kuch alag lagi mujhe ...ravangee bahut achchi thi ..dil se daad .
Hamdam
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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Matle mein keher dha doya aur akhir mein maikhana bhi dilha diya..aapki yeh peshkash kuch alag lagi mujhe ...ravangee bahut achchi thi ..dil se daad .
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aapkii inaayaten sar aankhon par Sir jeee......................
aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya ye mere liye khushnaseebi hai..... guzaarissh hai aapse ke aage bhi tashreeef laaaya karen....
Duaaon ka talabgaar.....
Shaad...
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main agar kahun isne jaan le lee meri.....Sdc kee shaan hain hai ye......phoolon mein khilta kamal hai ye...tareef ye bhi to shaad bhai kuch bhi nahin......
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bazm ko nai jaan aap sab dete hain. aur yahii merii shaayrii ki pahchaan hai.... aage bhi duaa karungaa ke aap sab ka saath yunhii miltaa rahe mujhe.....
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2nd June 2015, 05:05 AM
originally posted by Sameer shad
ik baar muhabbbat kar liije to Gam kaa mere a.ndaazaa ho,
lekin ye duaa hogii merii, taqaleef tumhe kuchh zyaadaa ho.
har adaa hai un kii jaaduuii aur qaatil un kaa yaaraanaa,
phir chaahe shokh la.Dakpan ho, yaa phir un kaa sharamaanaa ho.
jab maranaa hai anjaam-e-wafaa to kyuu.n na duaa ye lab pe ho,
ye rooh hawaa me tab jaae, jab aanchal wo laharaataa ho.
ye qalam bhii us dam chalatee hai aur yaad terii tab aatii hai,
jab raat bahut sharmeelii ho aur chaand falak pe aadhaa ho.
kis kaam ka hai wo parwaanaa jo shammaa ko chhoo kar bhaage,
kyaa khaak muhabbat ki usane jo jal kar shor machaataa ho.
mahbooob ki galiyaa.n jaane me itnaa bhii kyaa chalte rahnaa,
aye shaad kabhii to ruk jaao jab paas koii maykhaanaa ho.
Wah wah kya khoobsurat mood mein likhi hai yeh gazal
Mubarak ho ek behad khoobsurat klaam k liay
rajinderseep
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6th June 2015, 12:43 AM
Shaad Sahb, adaab-o-tasleemaat.
Agar shayari ki bulandiyoN ki baat ki jaaye to yaqeenan iss peshkash ka hawaala aayega. Aur SDC ka mayyaar yahaaN se pata chalta hai.
SDC pe aise shayar maujuud haiN, humeiN fakhar hai ke hum iss kumbey ka ek hissa haiN.
Dher saari daad aur mubarakbaad, dear Shaad
Abaad raheiN aur khush raheiN, baar-haa aise kalaam humse kaheiN.
Khair andesh
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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