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Sher ka jawaab sher meiN deejiye.. - 8th May 2007, 06:57 PM

Sher ka jawab sher meiN deejiye..

DostoN,


ham apni is Anjuman main ek or thread ka izafa karte haiN ess main aap ko ashar hi likhne haiN or agle member ko us sher ke jawab main koi sher meiN likhna hoo ga theek hai ?

yeh koi naya silsila nahi hai sab ko pata hoga ke kaise khelna hai yeh.. aise threads say hame kaafi kuchh seekhne ko milta hai.. Sher kisii ka bhii ho sakta may be your own or borrowed..

bas she'r likhte vaqt is baat ka khayaal rakha jaaye ke javaaban jo she'r likha jaa rahaa hai, us ka koi na koi rabt pichle she'r se hona chaahiye..Shukryah!

to chaliye meiN hi Shuruaat karta huuN:


ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa


PS: to keep the beauty & meaning of the thread 'sher ka jawaab sher me.n deejiye', it is requested to all member that, please reply a 'sher' with a 'sher' only (not with four liners, qitaa, Ghazal, nazm etc etc). I hope all members will cooperate me to maintain beauty and dignity of the site in all level.

thank u all

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9th May 2007, 01:15 PM

frineds.. kuchh examples de raha huuN....

jaise kii pahela Sher hai..

ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa

ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh ess tarah ho sakta hai...

ishq me.n jaa.N se guzarate hai.n guzarane vaale
maut kii raah nahii.n dekhate marane vaale

aur phir ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh es tarah de sakte haiN...

us lab-o-chashm se hai zindagii-o-maut apanii
kab-kabhii pal me.n jilaayaa kabhii pal me.n maaraa




buraa jo dekhan mai.n Chalaa, buraa naa milyaa koye
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fir ek nayi column.... good..........

waise jawab dena try kar rahin hoon..sahin hain ki galat jaroor batana....

nida fazlijee ka sher hain yeh......

Kabhi kisiko mukammal jahan nahin milta,
Kahin zameen to kahin aasman nahin milta...

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fir ek nayi column.... good..........

waise jawab dena try kar rahin hoon..sahin hain ki galat jaroor batana....

nida fazlijee ka sher hain yeh......

Kabhi kisiko mukammal jahan nahin milta,
Kahin zameen to kahin aasman nahin milta...

mausam

hmm.. answer sahiii hai aur rabt bhii dono SheroN meiN.. yeh Sher waise bhii mera pasandidah Sher hai... so, thanks too

ab ess Sher ke jawaab meiN, Ek Sher arz hai...

zamii.n pe chal na sakaa aasmaan se bhii gayaa
kaTaa ke par ko parindaa uDaan se bhii gayaa



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hmm.. answer sahiii hai aur rabt bhii dono SheroN meiN.. yeh Sher waise bhii mera pasandidah Sher hai... so, thanks too

ab ess Sher ke jawaab meiN, Ek Sher arz hai...

zamii.n pe chal na sakaa aasmaan se bhii gayaa
kaTaa ke par ko parindaa uDaan se bhii gayaa

I don't know if I'm replying this right.. still trying to..

Na cheeno usse uski udaan, keh raha hai ek parinda..
Aasmaan me hi hai muskaan uski, mat karo use sharminda..

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Chaahat aap ka Sher bilkul sahii... aur khuubsuurat Sher chuna hai aap ne.. daad!

apa ke SHer ke jawaab meiN yehi kahuNga..

Na cheeno usse uski udaan, keh raha hai ek parinda..
Aasmaan me hi hai muskaan uski, mat karo use sharminda..


mujhe maaluum hai us kaa Thikaana phir kahaa.N hogaa
pari.ndaa aasmaa.N chhuune me.n jab naaqaam ho jaaye




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Chaahat aap ka Sher bilkul sahii... aur khuubsuurat Sher chuna hai aap ne.. daad!

apa ke SHer ke jawaab meiN yehi kahuNga..

Na cheeno usse uski udaan, keh raha hai ek parinda..
Aasmaan me hi hai muskaan uski, mat karo use sharminda..


mujhe maaluum hai us kaa Thikaana phir kahaa.N hogaa
pari.ndaa aasmaa.N chhuune me.n jab naaqaam ho jaaye

aadaab mayank ji,
is thread mai,mai bhi shirkat karna chahungi.umeed hai mera sher sahi hai,

hamarii koshishon ko naakaami ka naam na do yaaron,
milen na manzil jab tak hum haaraa nahi karte.


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aadaab mayank ji,
is thread mai,mai bhi shirkat karna chahungi.umeed hai mera sher sahi hai,
hamarii koshishon ko naakaami ka naam na do yaaron,
milen na manzil jab tak hum haaraa nahi karte.

Sara jee:

aap ne Sher sahii kahe haiN.. daad!

ab aap ke Sher ke jawaab meiN..

ajab chiiz hai ye mohabbat kii baazii
jo haare vo jiite, jo jiite vo haare




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ajab chiiz hai ye mohabbat kii baazii
jo haare vo jiite, jo jiite vo haare


Mohabbat karne vaale, haar jeet ka kahaan hisaab rakhte hain..
Dil me mehboob ki dhadkan, aur aankhon me hijaab rakhte hain..

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Mohabbat karne vaale, haar jeet ka kahaan hisaab rakhte hain..
Dil me mehboob ki dhadkan, aur aankhon me hijaab rakhte hain..

~Priya

kyon ho koi hijaab mehboob aur aashiq ke darmiyaan??
bas yeh wasl ki baatein logon ko bataaya nahi karte.

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hamarii koshishon ko naakaami ka naam na do yaaron,
milen na manzil jab tak hum haaraa nahi karte.

Sara jee:

aap ne Sher sahii kahe haiN.. daad!

ab aap ke Sher ke jawaab meiN..

ajab chiiz hai ye mohabbat kii baazii
jo haare vo jiite, jo jiite vo haare

Thukra ke usne mujhse kaha ki muskurao,
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hmm.. answer sahiii hai aur rabt bhii dono SheroN meiN.. yeh Sher waise bhii mera pasandidah Sher hai... so, thanks too

ab ess Sher ke jawaab meiN, Ek Sher arz hai...

zamii.n pe chal na sakaa aasmaan se bhii gayaa
kaTaa ke par ko parindaa uDaan se bhii gayaa

is ke baare mein kya raye hai

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frineds.. kuchh examples de raha huuN....

jaise kii pahela Sher hai..

ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa

ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh ess tarah ho sakta hai...

ishq me.n jaa.N se guzarate hai.n guzarane vaale
maut kii raah nahii.n dekhate marane vaale

aur phir ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh es tarah de sakte haiN...

us lab-o-chashm se hai zindagii-o-maut apanii
kab-kabhii pal me.n jilaayaa kabhii pal me.n maaraa

janab jawab arz hai.
AAPKE IS SHER K JAWAB MEIN MIRZA GHALIB KEHTE HAIN,

ISHQ PER ZOR NAHIN YE HAI WOH AATISH GHAALIB
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mahfile shayarii ko mera aadab
main bhii is mahfil main shirkat karne kii koshish kar raha hoon
umiid hai ki sher kuch thik thak hoga
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mahfile shayarii ko mera aadab
main bhii is mahfil main shirkat karne kii koshish kar raha hoon
umiid hai ki sher kuch thik thak hoga
shukriyaa
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merii mohbbat ko unhone dosti naam de diyaa
shayad ye bhii ek ada thi unki mujhe satane kii.....

Darta hun naye dost banane se....
Bahut Zakhm khaye hain dosti ke bahane se........
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Darta hun naye dost banane se....
Bahut Zakhm khaye hain dosti ke bahane se........
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Thanks friends, aap sab waqaii meiN bohat achchha kar rahe haiN.. aap ek ke baad ek Sher ko paRhenge to bohat mazza aayega... aisa lagegaa kya khuub silsila chal raha hai..

Priya, aap ke Sher

Har lehar ko kinaara mat samjho..
Har dost ko dost pyara mat samjho..
Nazar nazar me bhi farak hota hai..
Har nazar ko ishara mat samjho..

ess ke jawaab meiN:

Takaraa hii ga_ii merii nazar un kii nazar se
dhonaa hii pa.Daa haath mujhe qalb-o-jigar se

qalb-o-jigar: jaaN aur dil




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Takaraa hii ga_ii merii nazar un kii nazar se
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-mayank

jawaab arz hai,

han,kuch pane ke liye kuch khona to padta hai,
tune to bas khoya hai dil,woh apne qaraar ko tarasta hai.


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jawaab arz hai,

han,kuch pane ke liye kuch khona to padta hai,
tune to bas khoya hai dil,woh apne qaraar ko tarasta hai.
sara jee wel come...ess anjuman meiN post kiye huye mere lagbhag sabhii Sher ustaadoN ke haiN.. aap ke sher ka jawaab arz hai..

shaayad aa jaayegaa saaqii ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paayaa hai un aa.Nkho.n ka ras ab ke baras








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sara jee wel come...ess anjuman meiN post kiye huye mere lagbhag sabhii Sher ustaadoN ke haiN.. aap ke sher ka jawaab arz hai..

shaayad aa jaayegaa saaqii ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paayaa hai un aa.Nkho.n ka ras ab ke baras





yeh baras beete jaaye hai,
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Arey sunita ji chill, I am not angry at all. Infact I ws replying to mayank's sher But took some time and now when I posted my sher there are couple of more posts before me.... mistake oops...


Yeh wafaa ke sakht raahen, yeh tumhare paao naazuk
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it's ok sandy , Sher ka jawaab achchha diya hai aap ne.. ab aap mere us Sher ka jawaab deejiye, jis Sher ka jawaab baaqi hai.. lekin jaldi kahiiN aisa na ho kii aap se pahle koii aur jawaab de de..



chooTaa kar ke dekhiye jiivan kaa vistaar
aa.Nkho.n bhar aakaash hai, baaho.n bhar sa.nsaar

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it's ok sandy , Sher ka jawaab achchha diya hai aap ne.. ab aap mere us Sher ka jawaab deejiye, jis Sher ka jawaab baaqi hai.. lekin jaldi kahiiN aisa na ho kii aap se pahle koii aur jawaab de de..



chooTaa kar ke dekhiye jiivan kaa vistaar
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Dohe ka jawab dohe se....

jeevan ke din rain kaa , kaise lage hisaab
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Yeh wafaa ke sakht raahen, yeh tumhare paao naazuk
Na lo inteqam mujhse mere saath saath chal ke.....

Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey,
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tumne samajhi hee nahi ishq kee azmat warna,
hum tumhey ek he sajdey main khudaa kar detey...

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Dohe ka jawab dohe se....

jeevan ke din rain kaa , kaise lage hisaab
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hum bhi ek doha likh de....

divas gavaya khai ke, rain gavaye soye,
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hum bhi ek doha likh de....

divas gavaya khai ke, rain gavaye soye,
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mujhe dohe nahin aate so main phir se sher hi se start karti hoon.....

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yeh meri likhi hue gazal ka hi ek sher hai:

Siyah shab maine gujari jaag kar,
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Siyah shab maine gujari jaag kar,
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merii tarah kisii se muhabbat use bhii thii

[zikr-e-shab-e-firaaq = mention of the night of separation]
[vahashat = fear/dread]


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bahut khoob dost

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bahut khoob dost

likhkar naam tera haath par humne chuppa liya,
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-sunita virender
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[quote=sandysandy;232109]Dohe ka jawab dohe se....

jeevan ke din rain kaa , kaise lage hisaab

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