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aur na sar jhuka ke jiyo
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to muskura ke jiyo

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Gam hai na ab Khushii hai na ummiid hai na yaas
sab se najaat paaye zamaane guzar gaye
"gujraNe ko to yu bhi gujar hi jayegi zindgi,
gar hote jo aap saath to zindgi sanwar jati"

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wah bahut khoob.....aap etne kaha rahe ? eska bhi jawaab dijiye...

jawaab de rahi hoon :

darti hoon dil ka raaj batane se,
darti hoon dil ka raaj sun-ne se,
ek meetha sa dard hai mere dil mei.n,
darti hoon uske zahir ho jane se....

It is RAAZ, not RAAJ. These two words mean totally different things in Urdu. Please do not break the legs of teh language when you quote poetry - at least not in poetry.

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"gujraNe ko to yu bhi gujar hi jayegi zindgi,
gar hote jo aap saath to zindgi sanwar jati"

-sunita virender
GUZARNE KO TO YUN BHI GUZAR HI JAEGI ZINDIGI,
GAR HOTE JO AAP SAATH TO ZINDIGI SANWAR JAATI

Nice she'r but your idiosyncracy of writing all Z sounds as J are really killing all the roamnticism in it.

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Maham ke pasandeeda shayer , Faiz sahab ka kalaam ,

kisi bauhat hee khubsoorat aur bakamal javab ka muntazir unka ye qatah ,

hamare dil mei jo dharkta hei sada ,

aap ehl e zouq ki qeemtee basaraton ki nazr.........



Raat yun dil mein teri khoyee hoee yaad ayee
jaise weerane mein chupke se baahar ajaye
jaise sehraoun mein haule se chale baad e naseem
jaise beemaar ko bewajha qaraar ajayae


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Maham ke pasandeeda shayer , Faiz sahab ka kalaam ,

kisi bauhat hee khubsoorat aur bakamal javab ka muntazir unka ye qatah ,

hamare dil mei jo dharkta hei sada ,

aap ehl e zouq ki qeemtee basaraton ki nazr.........



Raat yun dil mein teri khoyee hoee yaad ayee
jaise weerane mein chupke se baahar ajaye
jaise sehraoun mein haule se chale baad e naseem
jaise beemaar ko bewajha qaraar ajayae


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hum bhi apke fav shayar faiz sahab ka hi sher arz kiye dete hain......

us qadar pyaar se ai jaan-e jahaaN rakkhaa hai
dil ke ruKhsaar pe is vaqt terii yaad ne haath
yuu.N gumaa.N hotaa hai garche hai abhii subah-e-firaaq
Dhal gayaa hijr kaa din aa bhii ga_ii vasl kii raat


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18th October 2007, 01:12 PM

[QUOTE=mausam;253434]hum bhi apke fav shayar faiz sahab ka hi sher arz kiye dete hain......

us qadar pyaar se ai jaan-e jahaaN rakkhaa hai
dil ke ruKhsaar pe is vaqt terii yaad ne haath
yuu.N gumaa.N hotaa hai garche hai abhii subah-e-firaaq
Dhal gayaa hijr kaa din aa bhii ga_ii vasl kii raat
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terii judaai se bharii raat bhii dhal jayegii
honge sath fir daman wo ghadi bhii aayegii
goonjegii jab shahanaai mere naam ki tere aangan main
hamesha ke liye wo milan ki raat tham jayegii...........


( sorry but is time kuch soojha hi nahi )

wo to jara sa idhar ka rukh kiya sher pasnad aaya ... kuch esi gahdi thi ki ye do line jud gayiin maine post kar di....................


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hum bhi apke fav shayar faiz sahab ka hi sher arz kiye dete hain......

us qadar pyaar se ai jaan-e jahaaN rakkhaa hai
dil ke ruKhsaar pe is vaqt terii yaad ne haath
yuu.N gumaa.N hotaa hai garche hai abhii subah-e-firaaq
Dhal gayaa hijr kaa din aa bhii ga_ii vasl kii raat

Waaaaaaah wah wah mausam ji wah , dil khush kar dya ap ne
bas isko zara sahee kar lijiye ye US QADAR nahi IS QADAR hie
DASHT E TANHAYEE ki nazm se ye stanza dil pe gehra acar chor jata hai sada hee buahat khub janab

lijiye javab haazir hie

baat raat ki ho , hijr ki ho aur kisi ki yaad ho dil mein to phir labon pe beikhtiyaar maham ke ye sher ajata hei ke ,


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Raat bhar deeda e namnaak mein lehraate rahe[/B]
sans ki tarhe se aap ate rahe jaate rahe
Siyah shab maine gujari jaag-kar,
Yaad teri tadpati rahi shab-bar…

Ek tisnagi* se rahi jisam mein, (pyas)
Saanse sum* pilati rahi shab-bar… (zehar)


Maham ji aapke sher ke jawaab meiN hum apni hi gazal ke do sher likh rahey haiN, umeed hai sahi lageNge.


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Siyah shab maine gujari jaag-kar,
Yaad teri tadpati rahi shab-bar…

Ek tisnagi* se rahi jisam mein, (pyas)
Saanse sum* pilati rahi shab-bar… (zehar)


Maham ji aapke sher ke jawaab meiN hum apni hi gazal ke do sher likh rahey haiN, umeed hai sahi lageNge.


Gam kaa fasaanaa sunane vaalo aaKhir-e-shab aaraam karo
kal ye kahaanii phir chhe.De.nge ham bhii zaraa ab so le hai.n



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hum pyar meiN jalne walo.n ko chain kaha haye araam kaha,
apna dil chalne walo.n ko chain kaha haye araam kaha....

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apna dil chalne walo.n ko chain kaha haye araam kaha....

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ik lafz-e-mohabbat kaa adanaa saa fasaanaa hai>>
simTe to dil-e-aashiq phaile to zamaanaa hai>>



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likhlo chahe sone par ya hire moti par likh lo
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kehte he kai buzurg ki pyar mat karna
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ishq ke samundar me
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woh kaun hai jisne kar li ishq ke naam se tauba,
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pyar ki umar kabhi nahi hoti
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Guzrati nahi zindgi ab bin tere,
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kaise batae tum ko ki
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kaise batae tum ko ki
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hum to bas tum he yaad kiye ja rahe he
Yaadon ko apne dil se mita kyun nahin deti
Jo guzar chuka hai usko bhula kyun nahin deti


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yaado ko nahi koi mita paya he
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jawaab arz hai:

abhii raah me.n ka_ii mo.D hai.n, ko_ii aayegaa ko_ii jaayegaa
tumhe.n jisane dil se bhulaa diyaa use bhuulane kii duaa karo



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tumhe.n jisane dil se bhulaa diyaa use bhuulane kii duaa karo

Asan hota woh safar jispe nikla tha
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Rah ke kanton pe teri aah! ne raasta roka
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Chand yaadey aur aansu chorr gaya woh meri ankho main,
Wahi shakas jo aaya tha mujhe aapna bananey ke liye….

Jab se gaya hai mujhe chorr ke phir lout ke aaya hi nahi,
Par tanha dekh teri yaadey aa jatti hai dil bahlaney ke liye…

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Jab se gaya hai mujhe chorr ke phir lout ke aaya hi nahi,
Par tanha dekh teri yaadey aa jatti hai dil bahlaney ke liye…

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par aap ko ek sher me.n hi jawaab dena hai





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[quote=sunita virender;255008]Chand yaadey aur aansu chorr gaya woh meri ankho main,
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chaliye ham ne ek sher liya hai jawaab ke liye : jawaab arz hai:


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ruKh havaao.n kaa jidhar kaa hai udhar ke ham hai.n



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apanii marzii se kahaa.N apane safar ke ham hai.n
ruKh havaao.n kaa jidhar kaa hai udhar ke ham hai.n
safar ko jab bhi kisi dastaan mein rakhna
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karna safar tu aakela kisike sath ka intezar na karna
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yaqii.n laaye.N to kyaa laaye.N jo shak laaye.N to kyaa laaye.N
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ji hum aap jaise shayar to nahi fir bhi koshish karta hoon zara gour farmaiye ga

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jab makaan-o-laamakaa.N sab se guzar jaataa huu.N mai.n
allah-allaah tujh ko Khud apanii jagah paataa huu.N mai.n



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Benaam sa rishta hain dono ka..
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hum jab samje samaj ko to woh na samja sake humari samaj ko
duniya he ruthe hare jab laut pahuche humare paas fir na thukra sake woh humri samaj ko

samajhate the magar phir bhii na rakkhii duuriyaa.N hamane
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wah wah wah very good mausam ji sach me aachi shayri likhi he



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