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kabhii Khaamosh baiThogii kabhii kuchh gun_gunaaogii
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hum aah bhi bharte hai to badnaam ho jate hai aur
wo katla bhi karte hai to charcha tak nahi hota


Woh janey kyu janey tamana sa lagey hai,
Appna nahi hai par appna sa lagey hai…..

Woh qatal bhi karey to qatil na lagey hai,
Woh jahar bhi de to dawa sa lagey hai……

Janey kaya hai uski udhas aankho.n mein ‘Sunita’
muh chuppa ke bhi jaye to be-waffa na lagey hai..


Karnail paa ji aapke sher ke jawaab meiN apni hi likhi hue ek gazal ke chand sher likh rahi hoon.......


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Woh janey kyu janey tamana sa lagey hai,
Appna nahi hai par appna sa lagey hai…..

Woh qatal bhi karey to qatil na lagey hai,
Woh jahar bhi de to dawa sa lagey hai……

Janey kaya hai uski udhas aankho.n mein ‘Sunita’
muh chuppa ke bhi jaye to be-waffa na lagey hai..


Karnail paa ji aapke sher ke jawaab meiN apni hi likhi hue ek gazal ke chand sher likh rahi hoon.......

wah didi aapne to khush kar diya bahut hi achha likha hai aapne ab ye aapke liye

tu hamari yaad hamara ahesas hai
aasman ko chhuta hua dharti ka sitara hai
tum sada raho hamare paas
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dil ki mehfil me wo mukaam hai tumhara,
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dil ki mehfil me wo mukaam hai tumhara,
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wah lamha bahut hi achha hai

ek din khuda ne mujhe kaha ki
bande pyaar mat kar deewana ho jayega
maine kaha khuda tu mere pyaar se
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Smile mehfiil - 19th December 2007, 09:04 AM

hu_ii ham se Khataa terii mahafil me.n aa baiThe
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wah dost bahut khub likha hai ab ye suno

socha tha na honge zindagi me kabhi ruswa
magar pyaar ki ruswai tanha kar gai
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wah dost bahut khub likha hai ab ye suno

socha tha na honge zindagi me kabhi ruswa
magar pyaar ki ruswai tanha kar gai
gaye the unki mahefil me gam bhulane
lekin waha bhi tanhai apna farz ada kar gai

MANU & KRENIL..........bahut khub.............

rone se gham-e-dil ka guzara nahi hota,
har shaksh dil ka sahara nahi hota,
us roz lagta hai bekaar jiye hum,
jis roz zikra tumhara nahi hota..................


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Love dil - 19th December 2007, 10:48 PM

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MANU & KRENIL..........bahut khub.............

rone se gham-e-dil ka guzara nahi hota,
har shaksh dil ka sahara nahi hota,
us roz lagta hai bekaar jiye hum,
jis roz zikra tumhara nahi hota..................

Laakhon mein intekhaab ke qaabil bana diya
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wah dost bahut hi khub likh rahe ho

dil se dil ko milaya aapne
door hote hue bhi deewana banaya aapne
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dost achha hai ye tumhara jawab

dil ki hasrat juban par aane lagi
tumhe dekha aur zindagi muskurane lagi
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Smile ummid - 20th December 2007, 12:39 AM

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hi - 20th December 2007, 12:55 AM

hame laga ki sirf hum hi aapko chahte hai
par aapko chahne walo ka khalifa nikla
dil ne kaha shikayat kar khuda se par
khuda khud aapko chahne wala nikla


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Smile 1 beautiful Rubaayi - 20th December 2007, 09:05 AM

Har Dil Mein Dard Chuppa Hota Hai
Bayaan Karney Ka Andaaz Juda Hota Hai
Kuch Loog Aankhoun Se Dard Baha Detay Hein
Aur Kisi Ki Hansi Mein Dard Chuppa Hota Hai

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uuhn dard ko na dekho dard se
dard ko bhi dard hoga yaaro
kabhi dard ko mehsoos karo fursad se
dard bhi meetha hoga yaaro


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uuhn dard ko na dekho dard se
dard ko bhi dard hoga yaaro
kabhi dard ko mehsoos karo fursad se
dard bhi meetha hoga yaaro

bahut hi achha hai dost

kagaj pe humne zindagi likh di
asko se sinchkar har khushi likh di
dard ko jab humne ubhara labzo me
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bahut hi achha hai dost

kagaj pe humne zindagi likh di
asko se sinchkar har khushi likh di
dard ko jab humne ubhara labzo me
to logo ne kaha wah kya gazal likh di


wahhhh wahhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhh NIHAR,MANU & KRENIL ...........bahut hi khub likha hai aap sab ne..........

wo mile hum se kahani bankar,
dil me rahe pyaar ki nishani bankar,
hum jinhe jagah dete hai aankhon ke andar,
wo aksar nikal jate hai paani bankar........................


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wahhhh wahhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhh NIHAR,MANU & KRENIL ...........bahut hi khub likha hai aap sab ne..........

wo mile hum se kahani bankar,
dil me rahe pyaar ki nishani bankar,
hum jinhe jagah dete hai aankhon ke andar,
wo aksar nikal jate hai paani bankar........................

bahut hi achha lamha ye raha aapka jawab

agar hum ek aansu hote to
aapki aankho se hokar aapke hoton
pe marna pasand karte agar
aap meri aankho ke aansu hote to
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bahut hi achha lamha ye raha aapka jawab

agar hum ek aansu hote to
aapki aankho se hokar aapke hoton
pe marna pasand karte agar
aap meri aankho ke aansu hote to
vaada hai hum zindagi bhar na rote


oye hoye....mai mar java.....kya gal hai..............

kal meri aankh se ek aansoo nikal aaya,
maine pucha, to muskurakar usne bataya,
ki koi teri aankhon me hai itna samaya,
ki chah kar bhi mai apni jagah na bana paya........


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kal meri aankh se ek aansoo nikal aaya,
maine pucha, to muskurakar usne bataya,
ki koi teri aankhon me hai itna samaya,
ki chah kar bhi mai apni jagah na bana paya........

wah lamha bahut khub

ek raat khuda ne puchha tu dosti
me itna kyu khoya hai tab dil se
aawaj aai dosto ne hi di hai
khushiya sari varna pyaar karke
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Love tasweer - 21st December 2007, 12:23 AM

terii tasviir se karataa thaa baate.n
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wah manu bahut hi achha likha hai

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Chehre pe ashkon ki lakeer si ban gayi ,
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Chehre pe ashkon ki lakeer si ban gayi ,
jo na chaha tha wo takdeer si ban gayi,
humne to uhi feri thi ret par ungliya,
gaur se dekha to unki tasveer si ban gayi.

very good lamha ab ye suno

rishto ki dor kamzor nahi hoti hai
aankho ki baate dil ki aur hoti hai
khuda ne jab bhi puchha dosti ka matlab
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very good lamha ab ye suno

rishto ki dor kamzor nahi hoti hai
aankho ki baate dil ki aur hoti hai
khuda ne jab bhi puchha dosti ka matlab
hamari ungali aapki aur hoti hai

"dost hi dost ka saath diya karte haiN,
dost hi dost ka dukh door kiya karte haiN,
kabhi kabhi zindgi ke safar mein, dosto !
dost hi sre-aam aapko badnaam kiya karte haiN"

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"dost hi dost ka saath diya karte haiN,
dost hi dost ka dukh door kiya karte haiN,
kabhi kabhi zindgi ke safar mein, dosto !
dost hi sre-aam aapko badnaam kiya karte haiN"

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ham se puuchho na dostii kaa silaa
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bahot khoob manu


dost ne ki dosti , dosti nibhane ke liye
hum ne bhi ki dosti dost pane ke liye
farq sirf itna tha dosto ki
unho ne ki dosti gum bhoolane ke liye
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bahot khoob manu


dost ne ki dosti , dosti nibhane ke liye
hum ne bhi ki dosti dost pane ke liye
farq sirf itna tha dosto ki
unho ne ki dosti gum bhoolane ke liye
aur humne ki dosti unko pane ke liye


bahut hi achha likha hai dost

vishwas ki ek dor hai dosti
betab dil ki majburi hai dosti
na mano to kuch nahi aur
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bahut hi achha likha hai dost

vishwas ki ek dor hai dosti
betab dil ki majburi hai dosti
na mano to kuch nahi aur
mano to khuda ki bhi kamzori hai dosti

bahut khub..............

chand adhura hai sitaro ke bina,
gulshan adhura hai baharo ke bina,
samundar adhura hai kinaro ke bina,
jeena adhura hai aap jaise yaaro ke bina.......


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bahut khub..............

chand adhura hai sitaro ke bina,
gulshan adhura hai baharo ke bina,
samundar adhura hai kinaro ke bina,
jeena adhura hai aap jaise yaaro ke bina.......

wah wah wah kya baat hain lamha ji
aap ka jawab hazeer hain


chand ne di chandni
suraj roshni deta raha
humne ki aapse dosti
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wah wah wah kya baat hain lamha ji
aap ka jawab hazeer hain


chand ne di chandni
suraj roshni deta raha
humne ki aapse dosti
aur sada aapko pyar deta raha

bahut khub mere dost aapka jawab

beshak kuch waqt ka intezaar mila humko
par khuda se badhkar yaar mila humko
nahi rahi tamanna kisi jannat ki
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bahut khub mere dost aapka jawab

beshak kuch waqt ka intezaar mila humko
par khuda se badhkar yaar mila humko
nahi rahi tamanna kisi jannat ki
teri dosti se wo pyaar mila humko

tere baare me.n jab socha nahee tha,
mai.n ta.Nha tha magar iTna nahee tha

- 'unknown'


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SOCHA JAB HUMNE AAP KI SOCH KO
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GIRE JO HUM IS PYAR KI SOCH KI GEHRAI MAIN
TO YEH GEHRAI TANHAI SE BHI GEHRI NIKLI
vo aaye ghar me.n hamaare Khudaa kii qudrat hai
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hum to so rahe the hume kya pata vo humara hi pyar tha.

kya baat kahi hai dost ab ye suno

roop ka nazara pyaar nahi hota
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har kisi ke dil me sachha pyaar nahi hota

waah waah kyaa baat kahee hai tumne..............

ham intazaar kare.nge teraa qayaamat tak
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waah waah kyaa baat kahee hai tumne..............

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