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ye dil hie jo aagaya hai tum pur wagarna sach ye hei banda parwar
jise bhi hum dekh len palat kar ushi ko apna ghulaam kar len

waah! waah! khuubsuurat sa jawaab diya hai aap ne maham jee, paRh kar dil khush ho gaya....

aap ke sher ka jawaab arz hai...

miTaa saktaa hai jo ai! husn tere liye khud ko
vahii hai ishq jo maaNge hai mere liye tujh ko



buraa jo dekhan mai.n Chalaa, buraa naa milyaa koye
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waah! waah! khuubsuurat sa jawaab diya hai aap ne maham jee, paRh kar dil khush ho gaya....

aap ke sher ka jawaab arz hai...

miTaa saktaa hai jo ai! husn tere liye khud ko
vahii hai ishq jo maaNge hai mere liye tujh ko
darmiyaaN meN na laayeN Khudaa ko bhii ham
bas vahii vo sune jis kii hai daastaaN


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darmiyaaN meN na laayeN Khudaa ko bhii ham
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ham tum ko khuda kahe ke khuda ko khuda kahe
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tu Khuda hai na mera ishq farishton jaisa
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muddato.n bichha.De rahe phir bhii gale to mil liye
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muddato.n bichha.De rahe phir bhii gale to mil liye
ham ko sharm aa_ii to kyaa un ko hijaab aayaa to kyaa
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gale laga ke jo sunte the dil ki aahon ko
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qadam qadam pe vo aNkhen bicha bicha dena
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gale laga ke jo sunte the dil ki aahon ko
taras raha huN unhin ki haseen baahon ko

qadam qadam pe vo aNkhen bicha bicha dena
zarur yaad to hoga tumhaari raahon ko

dil dha.Dakane kaa sabab yaad aayaa
vo terii yaad thii ab yaad aayaa
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dil dha.Dakane kaa sabab yaad aayaa
vo terii yaad thii ab yaad aayaa
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dil men eik lehar see uThi hai abhi
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shor barpaa hai Khaanaa-e-dil men
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dil men eik lehar see uThi hai abhi
koi taazaa hava chali hai abhi

shor barpaa hai Khaanaa-e-dil men
koi diivaar si giri hai abhi
mausam-e-gul hai havaa itr_fishaa.N hai saaqii
dekh gul_zaar pe jannat kaa gumaa.N hai saaqii
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mausam-e-gul hai havaa itr_fishaa.N hai saaqii
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lab band hein saaqi mujhe ankhon se pilaa de
vo jaam jo minat kash e sehba nahi hota
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lab band hein saaqi mujhe ankhon se pilaa de
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FAIZ
rah gaye laakho.n kalejaa thaam ke
aa.Nkh jis jaanib tumhaarii uTh ga_ii

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rah gaye laakho.n kalejaa thaam ke
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eik hum hee hien jo maiy ko aankhon se pilaate hein
kehne ko tou dunia mein maiy khane hazaroun hein


aa.Nkh ko jaam samajh baiThaa thaa anjaane me.n
saaqiyaa hosh kahaa.N thaa tere diivaane me.n
[Shamim Shahabadi]



buraa jo dekhan mai.n Chalaa, buraa naa milyaa koye
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eik hum hee hien jo maiy ko aankhon se pilaate hein
kehne ko tou dunia mein maiy khane hazaroun hein
hazaaro n Khvaahishe.n aisii ki har Khvaaish pe dam nikale
bahut nikale mere armaa.N lekin phir bhii kam nikale
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hazaaro n Khvaahishe.n aisii ki har Khvaaish pe dam nikale
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hazaaroN rang meN kii maiN ne un se guftugu barsoN
na niklaa phir bhii mere muNh se Harf-e-aarzoo barsoN




tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
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Maana nigaho mein teri meh k hazaaron sagaar hain
hum be kam nahi, Haseen, hum bi diloN k saudagaar hain…..>>


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Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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ye sirf sher hei ya waqayee aisa hei ?!

hahahahaa


chaliye janab javab haazir kiiye dete hein :-)

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ye sirf sher hei ya waqayee aisa hei ?!

hahahahaa


chaliye janab javab haazir kiiye dete hein :-)

in aankhon ki masti ke mastaane hazaroun hein
in aankhon se wabasta afsaane haazaroun hein

bahut khub................

un ke dekhe se jo aa jaatii hai muu.Nh pe raunaq
vo samajhate hai.n ki biimaar kaa haal achchhaa hai
[Mirza Ghalib]


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bahut khub................

un ke dekhe se jo aa jaatii hai muu.Nh pe raunaq
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ruh tak gayee taceer maseehayee kee"


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh


shaam se un ke tasavvur kaa nashaa thaa itanaa
niind aa_ii hai to aa.Nkho.n ne buraa maanaa hai
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shaam se un ke tasavvur kaa nashaa thaa itanaa
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ye kis kaa tasavvur hai ye kis kaa fasaanaa hai
jo ashk hai aa.Nkho.n me.n tasbiih kaa daanaa hai
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jo ashk hai aa.Nkho.n me.n tasbiih kaa daanaa hai
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"Raat bhar deeda e namnaak mein lehraate rahe
sans ki tarhe se aap ate rahe jaate rahe"
har goshaa gulistaa.N thaa kal raat jahaa.N mai.n thaa
ek jashn-e-bahaaraa.N thaa kal raat jahaa.N mai.n thaa
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zikr us pariivash kaa aur phiir bayaa.N apanaa
ban gayaa raqiib aaKhir thaa jo raaz_daa.N apanaa
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sarakatii jaaye hai ruKh se naqaab aahistaa-aahistaa
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sarakatii jaaye hai ruKh se naqaab aahistaa-aahistaa
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhh janab.....

chehare kaa nisf hissaa zer-e-naqaab kar ke
karate hai.n husn vaale diidaar me.n milaavaT
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chehare kaa nisf hissaa zer-e-naqaab kar ke
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vo husn-o-jamaal un kaa ye ishq-o-shabaab apanaa
jiine kii tamannaa hai maranaa kaa zamaanaa hai
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vo husn-o-jamaal un kaa ye ishq-o-shabaab apanaa
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jiine kii tamannaa hai maranaa kaa zamaanaa hai
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manu



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ek haqiiqat sahii firdaus meN huuroN kaa vajuud
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wahhhhhhhhhhh DI...........BAHUT KHUB.....


sharm ek adaa-e-naaz hai apane hii se sahii
hai.n kitane be-hijaab ki hai.n yuu.N hijaab me.n
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sharm ek adaa-e-naaz hai apane hii se sahii
hai.n kitane be-hijaab ki hai.n yuu.N hijaab me.n
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hayaa ne rok liyaa jazb-e-dil ne khii.nch liyaa
chale vo tiir kii suurat khii.nche kamaa.N kii tarah


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kyaa husn ne samjhaa hai kyaa ishq ne jana hai
ham khaaknasheeno kii thokar men zamaana hai


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vo naqaab Khud uThaate to kuchh aur baat hotii
[Aga Hashr]


Aaj Suntae Hein Woh Benaqab Aayein Gae
Urr Kae Shakhon Sae Sarae Gulaab Aayein Gae



Mehki Mehki Hawayein Nasheeli Fiza
Aaj Baadal Bhee Pee Kae Sharab Aayein Gae

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ruuh ko dard milaa dard ko aa.Nkhe.n na milii.n
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Aaj Suntae Hein Woh Benaqab Aayein Gae
Urr Kae Shakhon Sae Sarae Gulaab Aayein Gae


Mehki Mehki Hawayein Nasheeli Fiza
Aaj Baadal Bhee Pee Kae Sharab Aayein Gae

Raat Lenae Lagi Khul Kae Angrrayian
Meri Aankhon Mein Ab Unkae Khawab Aayein Gae.


lagataa hai ka_ii raato.n se jaagaa thaa musavvir
tasviir kii aa.Nkho.n se thakan jhaa.Nk rahii hai
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