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A Silent Tear -
29th December 2008, 01:31 AM
A tear in her eye wants to come out
It is just waiting for a reason for coming The reason it has now can’t be explained The reason which it won’t, need not be explained But today that tear wants to tell us a story which goes like this A boy gets mad in the love of a girl Keeps his proposal in front of her Waiting for the girl to respond to it The girl had questions to clear and a fear of loosing She asks GOD what to do GOD said “don’t worry, go ahead, I am with you” The girl said “yes” to him, After all GOD was with her so there was nothing to fear But hey wait the boy had another story to tell He had a girlfriend long back ago She came back suddenly some moments ago The boy was confused what to do To go back to his love or to continue He decided to go back and said sorry to the girl He said we will always be good friends and the best of pals The girl cried and cursed herself on what she did How could she just say “yes” to him? She did not know him since long And she had an intuition that he will go away She asked GOD why he misled her. GOD had no answer and nor did she As she was asking herself now what is her destiny She lost touch with him and cried alone Repenting on the decision she made on her own She had given herself a big blow. She yet prayed well for the boy, Keeping her thoughts away from him. One day she is startled to see her mail She got a message from that boy. The boy was sorry on what he did That she was not worth it He said “if you do bad u face bad” And that is what happened to me I am sorry girl for what I did And I can’t ever forgive myself on this I am not saying this as I want to come back But as I am feeling all this Just wanted to say you sorry again And that we can again be friends The girl was angry and she was hurt As she had lost the hope of him coming back But she yet thought to forgive the boy As that was the best punishment she could give to him They became friends again and enjoyed each moment But the girl could not forget that love inside her The boy responded to her feelings twice But it converted back the same way in a very short while. That love started coming between their friendship The boy could not say yes as the girl was not “his type” The girl couldn’t control her feelings as she was in love The boy started ignoring her and hurting her to the core He said either u mend your way or I will be forced to go out of way The girl couldn’t do anything and her life became hell It became worse when the boy said “u r nothing but a pain in my neck” She couldn’t tolerate the disrespect she got from him Her only fault was that she loved him Rejection is a feeling which cannot be treated It is best way to hurt someone’s feelings The story here is not yet over The tear is yet to fall It’s silently waiting for a reason to come out But the reason alone is not enough Even if the tear comes out, will it help the girl in any way? No it won’t as it would just be a drop of water The tear here isn’t that water that comes out of the eyes It is the pain that is waiting to come out from her heart Through the valley of the eyes The tear is hidden, yet so locatable The tear is silent yet so painful Friendnidhi - A silent tear Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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5th January 2009, 01:03 PM
Nidhi,
wonderfully written... very nice... |
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6th January 2009, 09:55 PM
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Thankyou ver much  Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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16th January 2009, 10:21 AM
good written...............................
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26th January 2009, 03:47 PM
its an amazing story........
veri nice * * * * * * * *kehkashan |
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9th April 2009, 12:50 PM
Yaar is story ne mere mind ko hila k rakh diya hai...
Kyaa kahuu, kuch samajh nahi aa raha... Ye story meri life se kafi had tak milti julti hai... Story me sara fault ladke ka hai... Story ko padh k mere muh se bas ek he lafz nikla... KAAAAAASSSSSHHHHHHH |
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hi -
10th April 2009, 03:10 PM
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Sincere apologies for replying late...thankyou for the compliment Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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10th April 2009, 03:12 PM
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Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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10th April 2009, 03:13 PM
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The circumstances are faulty and not the person... Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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10th April 2009, 03:15 PM
agar koi relation work out na kar raha ho tau har mumkin koshish karni chahiye taki kabhi kassh na kehna pade....
Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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10th April 2009, 03:17 PM
somewhere someone is made for me
my dreams, my blessings all for him somewhere someone is waiting for me my past, my future all for him Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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10th April 2009, 03:22 PM
Waise Nidhi ji,
aapki post me aaj ka CHANAKYA chupa hua hai, usne apne dukh ko ro kar waste nahi kiya even usne us insult k dukh ko apne dil me sahej k rakha aur waqt aane par takhta he palat diya... Aise log bahut khatarnaak hote hain jo gham ko pee jate hain aur rokar aansu waste nahi karte.  |
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10th April 2009, 03:43 PM
Mujhe yeh sab tau nahi pta bas itna kahungi
Barbadiyon ka shok manana fizul tha barbadiyon ka jashn manane chale gaye (not mine) aur aisa kaha jata hai Aansu nahi hote dikhane ke liye woh tau bane hai ankho mein chupane ke liye ankhein hoti hai band sirf is wajah se taki chupa lo apna gam is zamane se hansi ati hai hoton par woh chupaye nahu chupti zamane ko hansa do isi mein hai sachi khushi Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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10th April 2009, 03:55 PM
Achhi thinking hai aapki...
Keep it up chalo bye and take care |
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10th April 2009, 04:13 PM
thanks.........................
bye tc Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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hey nidhi u r amazing writer |
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hey nidhi u r amazing writer -
25th May 2009, 11:35 PM
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i felt like that as i absorbed myself in to it. keep writing dear best wishes manu |
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9th June 2009, 09:22 AM
nidhi jii
how r u? I read this post n I just loved it but then I cudnt reply u tooo ... now when its came in front of me just didnt wnat 2 miss this chance ...without replying u .... u r a great writer ... as it is never easy to put ur heart in words.... keep up good working]] waiting for ur next post tooo take care mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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16th November 2009, 11:33 PM
I am sorry to reply so late
i dont write often these days... thankyou for your compliments and support just posted something new which i just wrote.. hope u like it.. thanks again Regards Nidhi Quote:
Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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silent tear -
19th November 2009, 01:02 PM
very feely and emotive
long as the suffering of those who know... well done cheers |
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20th November 2009, 11:22 PM
Thanks..
Keep coming Regards Nidhi Agarwal Quote:
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hi -
20th November 2009, 11:23 PM
Thanks..
Keep coming Regards Nidhi Agarwal Quote:
Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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28th November 2009, 11:18 PM
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It's a painful but a beautiful tale... It's not love, but the man who fail... Love...? For some it's never there... The fate is most of the times deceitful, And one often gets one's share... When ever suitable, we go and grab the neck of God... But was it really God? Who didn't warn about the fraud.... There is a saying which goes like this- Once bitten twice shy... But if one fall again n again, what's left there to cry? Always know your cards before you begin the game... If you know other's as well, it's not a shame... I know for love, game is not an apt name... But my dear we live in such a world Where no one stops to accept the blame... The aim is not make fun of anyone's love... Just wanted to say, take care, you are as tender as a lovely dove... Past should be left behind and one should move ahead... It's all over, for love, a lot is said.... Get up and wash your eyes... The world outside is beautiful, and the time? Don't worry It always flies........ Take care and take this in a positive stride, I sincerely apologize in case if I have hurt your sentiments.... A friend, Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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29th November 2009, 12:00 AM
HI Nidhi.....
Nice one !!!Very Touching!!! .....vikram bhai.....has said it all....let the tear fall....pain shd not be nurtured. U take care dear Best Wishes Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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3rd December 2009, 11:12 PM
hey thanks for coming,
ur poem was really good too..and hey what is this forgive and all..this is one forum where everybody has the right to express so..thanks yar Regards Nidhi Quote:
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3rd December 2009, 11:17 PM
Thanks amit...
keep coming.............................. Quote:
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9th February 2010, 12:28 AM
A silent Tear Continued...
The tear is still looking for a way to come out as now it is as dry as a desert Someone has said - The human body is made of water but when it is hurt blood comes out And the human heart is pumping with blood but when it is hurt - water comes out.. the continuation is the end to the above as now there is nothing more to come things were going just the same the girl was still trying to make him hers. but the boy has now found his mate he went back to his home town one day the girl asked him the reason he said he is just going to sign some documents but something somewhere was fishy the girl loved him so much she could sense a differnt change which had come the girl asked him r u getting married at last and is it yr enagagement that u r going so fast the boy said comeone u think so much there is nothing as such if there is something he will let her know as he does consider her a friend after all she got no news from him for many days was afraid also if everythng was ok but in between she came to know the boy had got enagaged just few days ago she was broken..broken to the core now she did not know where to go the girl was waiting for the boy to tell her but the boy was still playing a game with her. it was not his fault also the girl loved him so dearly that he had no other way left he just could not hurt her after all he did consider her his friend somedays after the girl totally broke someone told her that it is a love marriage the girl was hurt to the core she asked him where was she wrong she loved him like no one wud have loved him but still he had the guts to hurt her the boy said whatever it is what has she to do with it that he had told her that between us nothing is fixed all contacts broke between them now there was nothing left afterall but the boy did contact her once told that no dear it is not love the marriage is fixed by his parents though he knew it from start he just cud not tell her bcoz he did not want to hurt her.. mayb he can never understand love as there is nothing more painful then seeing ur love go away the boy said girl pls forget everything i will send u my marriage card just come and enjoye everything how could he just say such a thing cud he even feel the pain he was giving to her the girl said no she wont come to his marriage she cant see his love going away from her like this the boy had send his marriage card to her still what could the girl do but just cry seeing her love go away she could just sigh today finally the day has come when he would be going away from her now there would be no contact between them as the boy would be starting a new life yes today is the day of the boys marriage and the stupid girl was just waiting fr a magic to happen she forgot that magic happens in reel life but this life is real..and no magic happens hear she wanted to cry but she couldnt the tears and the feelings have both dried up so dear friends the ending to it comes at last there would be nothing left to say... Regards Nidhi Agarwal Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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