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Love Das mere dil vich ki ni amiye - 1st January 2011, 05:20 PM
Das mere dil vich ki ni amiye

Maaye ni maaye, mere dil diaa jaandiye,
das mere dil vich ki ni amiye das mere dil vich ki ?
maaye ni maaye..........

chup-chaap akkha bhari kyu tu vekhe menu,
khol ek baar tu jubaan, meri amiye....
ni amiye das mere dil vich ki ?
maaye ni maaye.......................

jad mai choti c kardi c eh sawaal,
aaj kare eho sawaal meri dhee,
ni amiye das mere dil vich ki ?
maaye ni maaye...............

bol na saka mai haami bhar na saka,
kive dassa haal dil da hai ki ?
ni bachiye, kive dassa haal dil da hai ki ?
maaye ni maaye.........................

9 mahine tenu khokh vich rakhiya,
adhi adhi raati tenu modhe la chukiya,
hun hoye tu 14 variya di,
dil mere nu paindi hai kho :-(
ni bachiye kive dassa haal dil da hai ki ?
maaye ni maaye mere dil diaa jaandiye,
das mere dil vich ki ni amiye das mere dil vich ki ?

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2nd January 2011, 02:01 PM
Sunita ji ik badi khaas gall hai tuhadi kalam wich..... BhavanaawaaN nu inn binn utaar laindey ho kagaz te.... ik aurat atey dhee da rishta ennaa k dhooga hai ki shayad onha nu khud vi os dhungaee da andazaa nahi hunda... Rab karey tuhaadee eh ehsaas di parakh eddaaN hi bani rahey

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25th January 2011, 11:37 PM
Bahuuuuuut khooooooob sunita ji

sachi hi Ma jiha duniya te koi hor rista nahi
Rabba har bache nu Ma da piyar devi

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ahm ahm mam ji.........really bahut hi vdhia likhia ji kya baat hai.....maa te dhee da rishta te ohna dia glla. . .ek dhee apni maa nal hi apne sare dukh sukh fol skdi hai ji hora di wjyae
   
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1st April 2011, 12:28 PM
ma mere lai makka mera ma mere lai hajj ..
rabb ton vaderi ma meri jihne jeen da sikhaya chajj..


bahut bahut bahut hi kamaal da likhea hai tusi Sunita ji...
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mam are u there?.........i want to talk wid u ji
   
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Sunita ji ik badi khaas gall hai tuhadi kalam wich..... BhavanaawaaN nu inn binn utaar laindey ho kagaz te.... ik aurat atey dhee da rishta ennaa k dhooga hai ki shayad onha nu khud vi os dhungaee da andazaa nahi hunda... Rab karey tuhaadee eh ehsaas di parakh eddaaN hi bani rahey
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Bahuuuuuut khooooooob sunita ji

sachi hi Ma jiha duniya te koi hor rista nahi
Rabba har bache nu Ma da piyar devi
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ahm ahm mam ji.........really bahut hi vdhia likhia ji kya baat hai.....maa te dhee da rishta te ohna dia glla. . .ek dhee apni maa nal hi apne sare dukh sukh fol skdi hai ji hora di wjyae
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ma mere lai makka mera ma mere lai hajj ..
rabb ton vaderi ma meri jihne jeen da sikhaya chajj..


bahut bahut bahut hi kamaal da likhea hai tusi Sunita ji...
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dosto...sab ton pehla maiN tuhade to muaafi chahundi haa, ki tusi menu aine pyar naal padiya te maiN tuhada shukriya bhi adda na kariya. maiN te bhul hi gye si ki maiN es tarah da kuj likhiya bhi hai, aaj es fourm te aaye taa nazar gye es poetry te.

tuhada sab da bahut bahut shukriya...te tuhanu sab nu maiN miss bhi kardi haa SDC te.

Tilak ji, Heer, ABabbu ji te Vimal...dil to shukriya.



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22nd November 2014, 11:27 PM
Bahot he vadiya likhde ho madam..
mere valon bhi bahuti mubarakhan ji.
Do din pehle he join kitta te bahot vadiya lag reha ji.
Koshish karangey seniors ton sikh k likhiye, umeed hai marg darshan karoge.

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Bahot he vadiya likhde ho madam..
mere valon bhi bahuti mubarakhan ji.
Do din pehle he join kitta te bahot vadiya lag reha ji.
Koshish karangey seniors ton sikh k likhiye, umeed hai marg darshan karoge.

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Sagar Ji......SDC the tuhada dil to suwagat hai, baad changa lag reha hai ki tusi Pehli post hi mere thread te kiti.

Tusi aithe aao te apni likhi poetry post kro, tuhada likhiya padna saanu changa lgega, umeed hai tuhada SDC naal safar bahutttt hi vadiya rhega.

God bless u

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1st December 2014, 11:42 AM
Ahha ha ..Sunita ji ..bahut gehra khayal pesh keeta tusiN .You deserve reps +for it.

Maanva thandiyaN chanvaN , chanvaN kaun kare. Maan de dil da haal bayan kita tusi..

Bahut vadhoyaa likhiya ji..

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