tutte khamb

[D33P]

adke har kandiyali thor nal ,reshmi socha di bas leer reh jandi a.
mere supnea de raah ch har var, aake meri taqdeer kheh jandi a.

shadea ni khehda kde,aas rakhi sda poori.
maapno ni htea ,kde main ambraa di doori.
khamb main khilare har var,
pairi zanjeer reh jandi a.

bhatke hoe raahiyaan nu fikar haini gum jaan da.
darr hai ta bas ,darr mud piche aaun da.
rakh k talli te nikle c jo,
ohna lyi ta iko hi lakeer reh jandi a.

sach hai k kitia khud ,khud nal bewaffaiyean ne.
par teria v bndiaay'n, deniaay'n kuj ta safayiaan ne.
sanu mildi a sja,
chup teri har var hi tasveer reh jandi a.

d33P

[Dhaval]

deep jee:

namaste!

punjabi thodi thodi samjh mein aati hai... ees koshish ke ehsaas dil ko chhu jaayen aise hain... aate rahiye... likhte rahen aage bhee

khush rahen... apnaa khayaal rakhen

duaaon kesaath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval

[sanamdeep]

bhatke hoe raahiyaan nu fikar haini gum jaan da.
darr hai ta bas ,darr mud piche aaun da.
rakh k talli te nikle c jo,
ohna lyi ta iko hi lakeer reh jandi a.

bohat wadia jnab

[tilakji]

deep ji ki aakhaaN.... bas ikko gall kahjaangaa ki dhanwaad tuhaadaa mud parat aauna daa.... U R aesome... main 3 saal tuhaadey illlakey wichb reh ke mudd ayeyaa .. atey tusi vi 3 saal kujh nahi post kitaa... tuhanu contact karan di koshsish vi keeti.. par tusi bahut bzy si.... khair koi gall nahi, koi gilaa nahi... bass dhanwaad tuhaadey phir kalam chukk lain daa....