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मैं दाल मखानी में घी थोड़ा मिला दूँ तो - 7th March 2015, 03:37 PM

नानी की रसोई की फिर याद करा दूँ तो
मैं दाल मखानी में घी थोड़ा मिला दूँ तो

फ़ाल्गुन का महीना है, होली का बहाना है
तू भूल ग़िले सारे, शिकवे मैं भुला दूँ तो

यह भांग भी होली पर झूमेंगी नशे में धुत,
ले नाम तिरा इसमें , जल थोड़ा मिला दूँ तो

कैसे हैं ये रासायन, चमड़ी ही जला डालें,
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बगिया की महक तुझको फीकी न लगे कहना ,
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नानी की रसोई की फिर याद करा दूँ तो
मैं दाल मखानी में घी थोड़ा मिला दूँ तो

फ़ाल्गुन का महीना है, होली का बहाना है
तू भूल ग़िले सारे, शिकवे मैं भुला दूँ तो

यह भांग भी होली पर झूमेंगी नशे में धुत,
ले नाम तिरा इसमें , जल थोड़ा मिला दूँ तो

कैसे हैं ये रासायन, चमड़ी ही जला डालें,
चल छोड़ गुलालों को, जल पान करा दूँ तो?

बगिया की महक तुझको फीकी न लगे कहना ,
गर बादे-सबा तुझको , घर उनका दिखा दूँ तो

चांदी की मिरी ज़ुल्फ़ें चमकेंगी घटा बन कर,
गर ग्रीस ज़रा सी मैं बालों पे लगा दू तो

ग़ज़लें ये मिरी शायद , फूलों सी महक जाएँ ,
इनको मैं अगर तेरी यादों से सजा दूँ तो
Ek alag andaaz, hatke..
Bohot baDhiya janaab.
Aate raheiN.
Khair andesh.


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Nakul ji

Ye peshkash bohot hatke thi...aur bohot bohot pasand aaai

Daad kubul farmaiyega

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Nakul jee aapka ye andaaz bahit accha laga mujhe...yun heemehfil ko roshn karte rahiye...



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Waaah....Bahut khoob ...
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नानी की रसोई की फिर याद करा दूँ तो
मैं दाल मखानी में घी थोड़ा मिला दूँ तो

फ़ाल्गुन का महीना है, होली का बहाना है
तू भूल ग़िले सारे, शिकवे मैं भुला दूँ तो

यह भांग भी होली पर झूमेंगी नशे में धुत,
ले नाम तिरा इसमें , जल थोड़ा मिला दूँ तो

कैसे हैं ये रासायन, चमड़ी ही जला डालें,
चल छोड़ गुलालों को, जल पान करा दूँ तो?

बगिया की महक तुझको फीकी न लगे कहना ,
गर बादे-सबा तुझको , घर उनका दिखा दूँ तो

चांदी की मिरी ज़ुल्फ़ें चमकेंगी घटा बन कर,
गर ग्रीस ज़रा सी मैं बालों पे लगा दू तो

ग़ज़लें ये मिरी शायद , फूलों सी महक जाएँ ,
इनको मैं अगर तेरी यादों से सजा दूँ तो

wahhhhhhhhhh...bahut majja aaya, Naani ki rasoi bhi yaad aaye aur Holi bhi


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