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log har mo.D pe ruk ruk ke sambhalate kyuu.N hai.n
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log har mo.D pe ruk ruk ke sambhalate kyuu.N hai.n - 27th January 2005, 09:13 AM

log har mo.D pe ruk ruk ke sambhalate kyuu.N hai.n
itanaa Darate hai.n to phir ghar se nikalate kyuu.N hai.n

mai.n na juganuu huu.N diyaa huu.N na ko_ii taaraa huu.N
raushanii vaale mere naam se jalate kyuu.N hai.n

niind se meraa ta'alluq hii nahii.n baraso.n se
Khvaab aa aa ke merii chhat pe Tahalate kyuu.N hai.n

mo.D hotaa hai javaanii kaa sambhalane ke liye
aur sab log yahii.n aake phisalate kyuu.N hai.n

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27th January 2005, 10:20 AM

hi lokesh,
superb. well said buddy. if read accurately each word has a meaning. wow really written so well. kuch yaad aaya well writing a post on this very soon. do check it out.keep the flames of ur words high buddy. keep smiling n all the best for ur further posts too. keep it up!
   
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27th January 2005, 10:35 AM

Nice one Dear Vaaiz!

This one is one of my favourites... sepcially the first and the last sher...I have Sms it to a lot of my friends..... thanks for sharing it here


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27th January 2005, 10:45 AM

Vaaiz sahaab..Adaab..

Huzoor bohot bohot shukriya aapka iss gazal ko phir se yaad dilaane ka.... "Rahat Indori" sahaab ka kalaam hai aur "Jagjit Singh" sahab ne apni dilkash awaaz se iss gazal ko mano zindagi ka ek hissa sa bana diya tha kuch saal pehle... abb to masroofiyat hi zindagi baan gayee hai..lekin aapne yahan post karke ek hichki ke saath yaad dila dee phir se...Shukriya....aapka. Dua go.


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28th January 2005, 05:38 PM

Ab Rahat indori ji ka kya kaheen saheb, bahut hi aacha likhte hain. Unka eek aur kalam peesh hai, jo mujhe bahut pasand hai...

kitanii pii kaise kaTii raat mujhe hosh nahii.n
raat ke saath ga_ii baat mujhe hosh nahii.n

mujh ko ye bhii nahii.n maaluum ki jaanaa hai kahaa.N
thaam le ko_ii meraa haath mujhe hosh nahii.n

aa.Nsuo.n aur sharaabo.n me.n guzar hai ab to
mai.n ne kab dekhii thii barasaat mujhe hosh nahii.n

jaane kyaa TuuTaa hai paimaanaa ki dil hai meraa
bikhare bikhare hai.n Khayaalaat mujhe hosh nahii.n

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