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Yaad ki maala pirona dair tak - 22nd May 2013, 05:34 PM

Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab….!Dosto Kaafi Dino Baad Kuch Likh Paaya Huun, Ummiid Hai Ke Pasand Aaye Ga…. Aap Ahbaab Se Guzaarish Hai ke Apni Raaye Se Zaruur Nawaaziye Ga…

YAAD KI MAALA PIRONA DAIR TAK

Hasraton Ke Beej Bona Dair Tak
Baad Uske Rona Dhona Dair Tak

Pattharon Ke Beech Na Saalim Raha
Kaanch Ka Koi Khilona Dair Tak

Parrh Ke Uski Yaad Ki Tehreer Ko
Apne Ashkon Se Bhigona Dair Tak

Shayad Uske Dil Me Ho Chahat Meri
Main Ne Chhaana Kona Kona Dair Tak

Hai Mera Tanhaayi Me Ye Mashghala
Yaad Ki Maala Pirona Dair Tak

Aaj Mere Sar Talay Us Ne Dia
Apni Baanhon Ka Bichona Dair Tak

Ishq Hai Tum Se Mujhay Be-Intaha
Haan Yehi Mujh Se Kaho Na.! Dair Tak

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL




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23rd May 2013, 09:06 AM

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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab….!Dosto Kaafi Dino Baad Kuch Likh Paaya Huun, Ummiid Hai Ke Pasand Aaye Ga…. Aap Ahbaab Se Guzaarish Hai ke Apni Raaye Se Zaruur Nawaaziye Ga…

YAAD KI MAALA PIRONA DAIR TAK

Hasraton Ke Beej Bona Dair Tak
Baad Uske Rona Dhona Dair Tak

Pattharon Ke Beech Na Saalim Raha
Kaanch Ka Koi Khilona Dair Tak

Parrh Ke Uski Yaad Ki Tehreer Ko
Apne Ashkon Se Bhigona Dair Tak

Shayad Uske Dil Me Ho Chahat Meri
Main Ne Chhaana Kona Kona Dair Tak

Hai Mera Tanhaayi Me Ye Mashghala
Yaad Ki Maala Pirona Dair Tak

Aaj Mere Sar Talay Us Ne Dia
Apni Baanhon Ka Bichona Dair Tak

Ishq Hai Tum Se Mujhay Be-Intaha
Haan Yehi Mujh Se Kaho Na.! Dair Tak

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL

aadaab janaab Ahmad Shakil saaahab...

ek pur khuloos pur waqaar ghazal likh kar laaayen hain aap is baar bhii...

behad rawaan dawaaN, asarangez ghazal hai.............

likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye....

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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab….!Dosto Kaafi Dino Baad Kuch Likh Paaya Huun, Ummiid Hai Ke Pasand Aaye Ga…. Aap Ahbaab Se Guzaarish Hai ke Apni Raaye Se Zaruur Nawaaziye Ga…

YAAD KI MAALA PIRONA DAIR TAK

Hasraton Ke Beej Bona Dair Tak
Baad Uske Rona Dhona Dair Tak

Pattharon Ke Beech Na Saalim Raha
Kaanch Ka Koi Khilona Dair Tak

Parrh Ke Uski Yaad Ki Tehreer Ko
Apne Ashkon Se Bhigona Dair Tak

Shayad Uske Dil Me Ho Chahat Meri
Main Ne Chhaana Kona Kona Dair Tak

Hai Mera Tanhaayi Me Ye Mashghala
Yaad Ki Maala Pirona Dair Tak

Aaj Mere Sar Talay Us Ne Dia
Apni Baanhon Ka Bichona Dair Tak

Ishq Hai Tum Se Mujhay Be-Intaha
Haan Yehi Mujh Se Kaho Na.! Dair Tak

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
   
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab….!Dosto Kaafi Dino Baad Kuch Likh Paaya Huun, Ummiid Hai Ke Pasand Aaye Ga…. Aap Ahbaab Se Guzaarish Hai ke Apni Raaye Se Zaruur Nawaaziye Ga…

YAAD KI MAALA PIRONA DAIR TAK

Hasraton Ke Beej Bona Dair Tak
Baad Uske Rona Dhona Dair Tak

Pattharon Ke Beech Na Saalim Raha
Kaanch Ka Koi Khilona Dair Tak

Parrh Ke Uski Yaad Ki Tehreer Ko
Apne Ashkon Se Bhigona Dair Tak

Shayad Uske Dil Me Ho Chahat Meri
Main Ne Chhaana Kona Kona Dair Tak

Hai Mera Tanhaayi Me Ye Mashghala
Yaad Ki Maala Pirona Dair Tak

Aaj Mere Sar Talay Us Ne Dia
Apni Baanhon Ka Bichona Dair Tak

Ishq Hai Tum Se Mujhay Be-Intaha
Haan Yehi Mujh Se Kaho Na.! Dair Tak

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL

Ahmad Shakil sahab bhut hi achi ghazal se nawaaza hai aapne ghazal ke tamaam aashaar khoob aur bhut hi khoob rahe khass kar matla aur maqte ka jawaab nahi hai daad behad o behisaab paish e khidmat hai qubool farmaaiye

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30th October 2014, 05:52 PM

Ahmad bhai, aadaab

ek arsey baad aapse mukhaatib ho raha hooN aur is baat par bhi sharmiNdaa hooN ke aapki is nayaab Ghazal paDhne se bhi chook gaya

kya kamaal ki Ghazal raqm hui hai mashah allah

khaaksaar ki daad Tikaa lijiye

rab raakha
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab….!Dosto Kaafi Dino Baad Kuch Likh Paaya Huun, Ummiid Hai Ke Pasand Aaye Ga…. Aap Ahbaab Se Guzaarish Hai ke Apni Raaye Se Zaruur Nawaaziye Ga…

YAAD KI MAALA PIRONA DAIR TAK

Hasraton Ke Beej Bona Dair Tak
Baad Uske Rona Dhona Dair Tak

Pattharon Ke Beech Na Saalim Raha
Kaanch Ka Koi Khilona Dair Tak

Parrh Ke Uski Yaad Ki Tehreer Ko
Apne Ashkon Se Bhigona Dair Tak

Shayad Uske Dil Me Ho Chahat Meri
Main Ne Chhaana Kona Kona Dair Tak

Hai Mera Tanhaayi Me Ye Mashghala
Yaad Ki Maala Pirona Dair Tak

Aaj Mere Sar Talay Us Ne Dia
Apni Baanhon Ka Bichona Dair Tak

Ishq Hai Tum Se Mujhay Be-Intaha
Haan Yehi Mujh Se Kaho Na.! Dair Tak

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL


Ahmad Shakil Ji, behad khoobsurat ehsaas, sabhi asiyaar tareef ke Kabil hai, aapki ghazal es forum ke liye select hue hai, dil we mubarakbaad kabool kijiye


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mujhe opadh ek sukoon milaa khoobsoorat taheer hai


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6th November 2014, 05:59 PM

Janab Ahamad ali sahib,

Kya khub ghazal aapne likhi... padh ke bahut hi sukun mila.. padahte samay aisa lag raha tha maano ghazal ki dhun kaano mein sunayi pad rahi ho.. daad qubul karein..

shubhkamnao sahit,
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