meri raay -
14th July 2004, 11:41 AM
Kaifi ji...aapne sher bahut hi achchha likha hai....ise parhkar kuchh hamaare bhi zehen me aa gaya...agar gustaakhi na samjheiN to arz karta hooN....
Haseen chehre hi nahi...aksar
Buri surat wale bhi Dil tod jaate haiN...
Ham...ham oroN ki baat nahi karte 'Ey Dil'
Aksar apne Aksh (reflection) se hi chot khaate haiN.
or haaN jagjeet singh ji ki gaayi ek Ghazal ka ek shar bhi to hai...
Achchhi surat waale saare...
Pat.thar Dil ho mumkin hai...
Ham to us din raay deiNge....
Jis din dhokha khaaeiNge...
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
- Chaand
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