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muhabbat or doree -
20th May 2002, 04:11 AM
tamam nazireen ,
assalamu alikum ...... pehli martaba ghazal pesh kar raha hon ummid he ke pasand aae ge ....or sab se aham bat ye he ke ... aap logon ki tanqeed khule dil se qabool ki jaae ge ...isi tarah insan seekhta he ghazal he : tujhe mana he mene ae sanam shams-o-qamar apna jahan ko chor kar... tujh ko chuna he ham safar apna tujhe dekha .. hoee ulfat ..... dua ki wasl-o-qurbat ki dua mangee he mene .... ae dua .... dikhla asar apna hon men aazad par mahsoos hota he qafas men hon judaee or wahshat he ..... watan apna na ghar apna baree mushkill labon par muskurahat le ke aata hon howa hota he andar se jahan ....... zer-o-zabar apna adam se ur ke aaya hon .... parinda hon muhajir hon faqat tera sahara he ... na tan apna ..... na par apna tujhe pagal kahe khalqat ... na kar parwah sagar jee onhen bas yad karna .... kam he sham-o-sahar apna sagar kashmiri |
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20th May 2002, 04:51 AM
sagar saheb
aadaab pehle to maiN aapko mehfil meiN aane ke liye khushamded kehna chahuNgaa doosre aapki Ghazal paDhii...mashah allah bohat pasaNd aayi.....aapka zor-e-qalam har misrey se numaayaN ho raha hai...zaahir hai ki aap kaafi arsey se likh rahe haiN.....yahaN tashriif laane ke liye hamara shukriya aur ek behadd shaandaar Ghazal kehne par hamari mubarkbaad kabool farmaayeiN ummiid hai ai'Ndaa bhii aapke khoobsuurat kalaam paDhne ko mileNgey maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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20th May 2002, 06:16 AM
sagar sahab
maiN bhii aap kaa is mehfil meiN isteqbaal kartaa huN. aap ke kalaam se bahut lutfandoz huey. zaahir hai ke aap ko sher kahtey huey arsaa ho gaya hai. aaiNdaa bhii aap ke kalaam kaa intezaar rahey gaa. Feroz |
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Mashallah! -
23rd May 2002, 12:37 AM
BAhut khoob sagar ji!!!Saare sher bahut khoobsurat haiN magar ye 3 ashaar bahut hi pasand aaye!!!
 tujhe mana he mene ae sanam shams-o-qamar apna jahan ko chor kar... tujh ko chuna he ham safar apna tujhe dekha .. hoee ulfat ..... dua ki wasl-o-qurbat ki dua mangee he mene .... ae dua .... dikhla asar apna tujhe pagal kahe khalqat ... na kar parwah sagar jee onhen bas yad karna .... kam he sham-o-sahar apna Wah Wah!!! Zor-e-kalam aur ziyaada! Regards, Shumaila kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!! |
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tamam dost -
25th May 2002, 11:39 PM
salam dosto ..
men tamam ahbab ka shukriya ada karta hon ....aapne meri himmat afzaee ki or ghazal pasand farmaee .... hamesha aapke mashwaron ka muntazir rahonga ....... maikash ji ......shumila ji or feroz ji ....mehrabani aapki .. faqat ..... sagar kashmiri |
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