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15th November 2014, 12:20 AM
Adab ki Shaan meN meraa salaam Qabool kiyaa jaaye !
dostoN Khaas aap saaHebaan ki Khaatir aik meHfil bulaa rahaa huuN, ummid kartaa huuN ki aapki jaanib se poori tavvajo haasil hoNgii. hum Shuruaat kareNge aur aap janaab apne jaZbaat.. Sher , Qitta, Ghazal, yaa naZm ke Zar'iiye hi bayaaN kareNge. jee aap log bilkul Theek samjhe hum ees thread par sirf Shaa'iiree meN hi baat kareNge, chaahe wo daad hoN ya maShwaraa. jawaab pe jawaab bhi ho saktaa hai aur sawaal bhi...apnaa haal-e-dil izhaar kiyaa jaa sakta hai yaa TooTe dil ka marham talaasgaa jaa saktaa hai... maqsad sirf aik hai sab ke saath baiTh ke aik bahut achChhaa waQt guzaarnaa. Sher aapka apnaa ho saktaa hai yaa kisii aur kaa par jiskaa bhi ho naam pataa honaa chaahiye, naam bhi nahiiN maalum to "not mine" liKhnaa hamaara farz bantaa hai. maiN sabhee aam-o-Khaas ko Qalam aazmaaish ki daawat de rahaa huuN...ummid kartaa huuNhum sab ko bahut mazaa aayeN kuChh taazaah aSh'aar se Shuruaat kartaa huuN ummid hai andaaz pasand aayegaa... kaise kaheN tumhe ki tumhe chaahate haiN hum tumse hi bin kahe ki tumhe maaNgate haiN hum din kaaTte hai ik mulaaqaat ki zid meiN raatoN ko ullooN ki tarah jaagate haiN hum yaaroN ne to banaa bhi liyaa riShtaa-e-bhaabhii dete raho safaaiiki bas jaanate haiN hum andaaz hai chaahat kaa meri maan bhii jaao hoNge hazaar hum se bahot maanate haiN hum iNtezaar rahegaa... aapka hi |
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15th November 2014, 12:39 PM
Bazm meiN aakar sabko salaam karte haiN ham,
kshitiz, aapke es thread ki tareef karte haiN ham  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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15th November 2014, 01:57 PM
taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee |
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15th November 2014, 02:45 PM
Daad daaman pe nahi aapke lagne denge
Hum nishaaN apne.. sanam saath liye jaaenge |
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15th November 2014, 07:09 PM
Hamare saaye se mohabbat karne wale,
Aaj hamse apne nishaaN bhi maangte hain.... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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16th November 2014, 09:23 AM
kyaa silsilaa shuru hai kiyaaa aapne bhaiyaa,
SDC ko nayaa makaam diyaa aapne bhaiyaa..... Shaad... |
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16th November 2014, 07:01 PM
Chalte hue mukaam koi mil hi jaayega
Tuu saath de ya na ye koi aur baat hai |
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19th November 2014, 09:58 AM
haal kaisa hai janab aap sab ka,
kyu aata nahi khayal es thread ka ? .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th November 2014, 01:16 PM
सुनीता दी
थोड़ा filmy है पर फिलहाल इसी से काम चलाइये हाल क्या है दिलों का न पूछो सनम आपका मुस्कुराना गज़ब ढा गया  |
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19th November 2014, 01:56 PM
Ek muskrahat hi le aati hai paas sabko yanha..
aap bas usi ko dil se jo baantate rahein.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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19th November 2014, 03:35 PM
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Kshitiz, Madhu aap khush rho, ham roz yahaN aate raheNge, aapki khushi ke liye ham yu hi dear muskurate raheNge .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th November 2014, 06:36 AM
Sunita ji aap ke muskurahat ke sadke lau hum bhi aa gaye ,
Apne chaman ke kuch phool aapke darwaze pe saja gaye. Ho sake tau in phoolon ko pyar se guldaste mein laga dena , Jab yaad aye humhari inhe dekh ker phir muskura dena |
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20th November 2014, 09:49 AM
tohfa kabool hai hame Sanjay ji aapka, le aaya bazm meiN nikhaar ek sher aapka .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd November 2014, 06:58 AM
Wah aapne huzoor kya bazm sajaayi hai
'Mast' ko dekhiye taqdeer yahan laayi hai Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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26th November 2014, 08:04 PM
मस्त कहता हूँ जिन आँखों को चुरा लेते हो
थाम के हाथ मेरा पास ना आने वाले |
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27th November 2014, 11:27 AM
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"Thama hai tera haath, na chodeNge kabhi, hote hoNge aur, jo daaman chuda jaate hai" -Sunita Thakur .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th November 2014, 01:04 PM
Gar chhoot gaya daman tau dil toot jayega ,
phir tu kaise apni kasme aur vaade nibhayega. khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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27th November 2014, 01:47 PM
Wo chaahatee hongii mujhe khud se bhi zyaadaah hai yaqeeN
shaayad tabhii usne merii kasme kabhii khaayi nahiiN |
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27th November 2014, 10:48 PM
Hum bhi to zaalim uski is adaa pe mar gaye
Shab-e-intezaar mein maare sharm woh aayi nahiN Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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27th November 2014, 11:02 PM
Dewanee haya ko adaa na samazhna..
Vo teer katil ne zehar me buzhaya hai.. Bhushan Joshi |
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3rd December 2014, 01:53 AM
तेरे दीदार को तरसे जो ..ज़िन्दा हैं तो क्या ज़िन्दा
ज़हर खाया तेरी खातिर जो मर जाते तो क्या गम था |
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3rd December 2014, 10:32 AM
"dil diya aitbaar ki hadd thi, jaan di tere pyar ki hadd thi, mar gye ham khuli rhi aankhe, yeh tere intejaar ki hadd thi" -nm .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd December 2014, 01:00 PM
uff marne ki baat kehkar kshitiz tune yeh kya kiyaa
kisko kisne kiya ruswaa is baat mein kya dam tha? Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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3rd December 2014, 02:55 PM
Yeh pyaar kya hai cheez is mein bhalaa kyaa baat hai
main faasalaa rakhtaa huun ke is se merii yaaree nahiin |
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3rd December 2014, 02:59 PM
Hum sochte they pyar meiN guzar lenge zindagee ,
Unko humara jhoota pyaar bhi nagavara hua khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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3rd December 2014, 10:01 PM
Guzar jayegi zindgi dard k sahare hi sahi..
badnaseeb hain jinhe na mili ye daulat bhi. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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6th December 2014, 04:14 PM
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"muje dard se shikwa nahi hai, eh mere Khuda ! bas dard meiN muskurane ki taqat detey rehna" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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7th December 2014, 11:01 PM
Log kehte haiN use deewana jo hardam hasta rehta hai, Koi na jane ke kaise vo dard ko hasee mein pirota hai. Khulee ankhon mein din raat vo sapne sanjota hai , Dil ka dard dil mein dafn kar vo sada muskurata hai, khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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1st May 2015, 07:26 PM
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Tumhare andaaz se humen alag hi pyaar hai... humesha aisa lagta hai ke saamne baithkar gaa rahe ho yeh nazm... Bahut hi khoobsurat shuruaat ki aapne... Vaise aap gayab kahaan ho? Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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