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Maa to jesi bhi ho Maa hoti hai Maa
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Maa to jesi bhi ho Maa hoti hai Maa - 6th July 2011, 10:04 PM

Maa to Jesi bhi ho Maa hoti hai Maa,
Gehray Zakhmon ki dawa hoti hai Maa,
Maa ki duaon se Vazeer-e-Aala bnte hain,
Par Faqeeron ki bhi Maa hoti hai Maa,
Maa to jesi bhi ho Maa hoti hai Maa,
Gehray Zakhmon ki dawa hoti hai Maa,
Maa k har haq ko adaa kiya kis ne hai??
Uski har Aas ko poora kiya kis ne hai??
Pochta mai hun k ye sb kiya kis ne hai??
Maa se betay ko Juda kiya kis ne hai??
Kitne hi Pyar se paala tha Us ne bache ko?
Apna hissa bhi khilaya tha us ne bache ko?
Bhooke reh kr bhi Parhaya tha us ne bache ko?
Aaj bache ne usi Maa ko bhulaya q hai?
Apne bachon ko hi seene pe sulaya q hai?
Sirf begam k liye Maa ko Rulaya q hai??
Majaaz,
Unko Maaloom nahi kya hoti hai Maa?
Maa to jesi bhi ho Maa hoti hai Maa,
Gehray Zakhmon ki dawa hoti hai Maa.
Poet:Abid Afzal Majaaz.
S/O Khan Gul,
Location: Karachi Pakistan,
Book: Adhuray Khwab
Page Number: 36
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7th July 2011, 08:19 AM

This beautiful Poetry is for all Mothers From behalf of Abid Afzal Majaaz..Salam Mothers
   
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7th July 2011, 12:48 PM

maa jaisi bhi ho maa hoti hai..........bhai yaha...ye aapka jumla....;maa jaisi bhi ho' samjh nahi aaya

aisa jaan pad raha hai ki 'maa jaisi bhi ho maa hoti hai'.........jaise maa par meherbaani ki jaa rahi hai.....

aisa mujhse laga.

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7th July 2011, 01:37 PM

Thnx for reply zidd,
is sentence ka mtlb hai k Mother chahe jahan bhi ho,jesi bhi ho,mother hamesha mother hoti hai..Chahe khushi ho ya gham mother insan ka sath deti hai.is sentence main na smjhne wali baat bhai??
   
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7th July 2011, 03:27 PM

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Thnx for reply zidd,
is sentence ka mtlb hai k Mother chahe jahan bhi ho,jesi bhi ho,mother hamesha mother hoti hai..Chahe khushi ho ya gham mother insan ka sath deti hai.is sentence main na smjhne wali baat bhai??
hmmmmm

maa to jaisi bhi ho maa hoti hai..........

kya itna irregular inappropriate qualification valid hai?

agar koi kahe ki baccha kaisa bhi hai maa ka dulaara hai.....to baat samjh aati hai

magar kya iska ulat bhi possible hai?

ki maa kaisi bhi ho maa hoti hai? 'maa' kaisi bhi hai ya jaisi bhi hai....moot question ye hai ki kya ye kahna ya is tarah lahna literary dayre me hai?

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mai ye 100 percent kah sakta hu ki aapki first line jisne bhi pada hoga ek baar to use ajeeb sa kuch laga hi hoga
   
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7th July 2011, 06:36 PM

Ok thats ok,i m sorry yar 4 all users
   
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7th July 2011, 07:36 PM

Ok Frndz,jo bhi meri is poetry ko read karay,so please 1st sentence ki jaga kya sentence hona chahye ye bhi suggession dijieyga.
Because it is possible k mai yahan join krta hun aur meri sirf 1 book market ayi hai. Yahan 100% wo log bhi join krte honge jinki 8,10 ya is se b zyada
books market ayi hongi,
Baqi zidd bhai ap ye na samjhen plz k mujhe ap k reply bure lage honge,bhai main ne ye forum isi liey join kiya hai k yahan boht muhabat krne wale log milte hain,
aur phir sacha dost bhi to wahi hota hai jo insan ko galti btata hai,q k aik dost ka haq hai k dosray dost ko galti bataye,
Shayad mujh se pehle sentence main isi liey galti howi k main alfaaz ki oonch neech per utna hi yaqin nahi rakhta jitna zaat paat,rang nasal wagera pe mera yaqin nahi,q k Maa aik aisi hasti hai jiski tareef krne k liye mere Khayal main Alfaz ka sahara lene ki zarorat nahi q k maa ki tareef krne main dair nahi lagani chahye..
Baharhaal meri soch aik taraf kr k,
aap sb mujhe ache ache suggessions den tha k meri is nazam main ache se acha sentence as a 1st sentence add hojaye.
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