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Tere ghar se mere ghar talak
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Tere ghar se mere ghar talak - 18th January 2006, 10:45 AM

Shayari.com ke sabhi saathiyon ko namashkaar,

Ye meri banaai paheli post hai, ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi,
Jab main likh raha tha tau ek kadi nahi jud paa rahi thi, tau meine kisi bade mashahoor shayar ka ek sher suna tha jo kuch aisa tha " mera dil to jal raha hai" aur bikhri hui hai roshni" theek se yaad nahi, so maine yahaaN usi apne andaaz meiN shaamil kiya hai.

Moderator sahab, ummeed hai ki maine aapka koi rule nahi toda hai.

arzhai.....


Mat pooch ke kya kya saha tere aagaaz se meri had talak,
Badnaam mera naam hai, tere ghar se mer ghar talak,

YuN bulaa ke apni bazm meiN, na is qadar zaleel kar,
Nahi jaa sakoonga teri qasam, tere ghar se meri ghar talak,

HaiN charaag gul jahaaN ke magar, mera dil to jal raha hi hai,
Bikhari hui hai roshani, tere ghar se mere ghar talak,

Hai marne se pahele ye iltezaa, use ek naza to maiN dekh looN,
Hai ye bheeD itni kyoN is qadar, tere ghar se mere ghar talak.


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18th January 2006, 10:50 AM

Anil ji...

Welcome to shayri.com

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