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14th July 2007, 05:24 PM
Ankhon same tujh che,chataye tane hun sodhu chu..
Manzil mari tujh che,tenoj raston hu sodhu chu…
Tari aankhon maj kyak,maro prem hu sodhu chu
Tari vaaton ma kyak,maro ullekh hu sodhu chu..
Tari nazar ma kyak,maro chehro hu sodhu chu..
Tari neendar maj kyak,maru swapnu hu sodhu chu
Tara swash maj kyak,mari suwas hu sodhu chu..
Tara adharo paraj kyak,mara sur hu sodhu chu..
Tara chehra paraj kyak,jhalak joi che me premni..
Tethij apna Milan ni “khsitij” hu sodhu chu…
Isse pehle ki sab mujhse aake lade main jaisa bhi ho translated version yahin pesh karti hoon……..
Samne ho tum,fir bhi tumko dhundhti hoon mein
Manzil meri ho tum,uska raasta dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhari ankhon meinkahin apne liye pyar dhundhti hoon mein.
Tumahri bato mein kahin apna naam dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri nazaron mein kahin apna chehra dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri neendon main kahin apna swapna dhundhti hoon mein..
Tumhari saanson mein kahin apni dhadkan dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare labon pe kahin apne sur dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare chehre pe dekhi hain ek jhalak pyar ki
Isiliye apne Milan ki khsitij dhundhti hoon mein
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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14th July 2007, 05:31 PM
Samne ho tum,fir bhi tumko dhundhti hoon mein
Manzil meri ho tum,uska raasta dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhari ankhon meinkahin apne liye pyar dhundhti hoon mein.
Tumahri bato mein kahin apna naam dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri nazaron mein kahin apna chehra dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri neendon main kahin apna swapna dhundhti hoon mein..
Tumhari saanson mein kahin apni dhadkan dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare labon pe kahin apne sur dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare chehre pe dekhi hain ek jhalak pyar ki
Isiliye apne Milan ki khsitij dhundhti hoon mein
dear mausam......behad khoobsurat ahsaas padne ka mauka diya hai aapne....aapki poetry dil ko chu gaye aur pyar ka ahsaas kaisa hota hai...bahut acchi tarah bayaan kiya hai. ki pyar ki ek jalak se hi dil machal uth-ta hai....bahut khoob....aur ha yeh bahut accha kiya jo hindi mei.n bhi post kar diya....nahi to hum gujrati hi padtey rahtey...che...chu...hai na
yu hi likhti raho kush raho
duao.n ke saath
aapki diii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th July 2007, 12:07 PM
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Originally Posted by mausam
Ankhon same tujh che,chataye tane hun sodhu chu..
Manzil mari tujh che,tenoj raston hu sodhu chu…
Tari aankhon maj kyak,maro prem hu sodhu chu
Tari vaaton ma kyak,maro ullekh hu sodhu chu..
Tari nazar ma kyak,maro chehro hu sodhu chu..
Tari neendar maj kyak,maru swapnu hu sodhu chu
Tara swash maj kyak,mari suwas hu sodhu chu..
Tara adharo paraj kyak,mara sur hu sodhu chu..
Tara chehra paraj kyak,jhalak joi che me premni..
Tethij apna Milan ni “khsitij” hu sodhu chu…
Isse pehle ki sab mujhse aake lade main jaisa bhi ho translated version yahin pesh karti hoon……..
Samne ho tum,fir bhi tumko dhundhti hoon mein
Manzil meri ho tum,uska raasta dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhari ankhon meinkahin apne liye pyar dhundhti hoon mein.
Tumahri bato mein kahin apna naam dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri nazaron mein kahin apna chehra dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri neendon main kahin apna swapna dhundhti hoon mein..
Tumhari saanson mein kahin apni dhadkan dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare labon pe kahin apne sur dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare chehre pe dekhi hain ek jhalak pyar ki
Isiliye apne Milan ki khsitij dhundhti hoon mein
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mausam.. aap kii nazm behad achchhi lagii.. aur achchha huaa joo aap ne Gujraati ke saath saath hindi meiN bhii translate kiya.... verna main aap ko zaruur kahta... waise ooparwaale se fariyaad hai kii aap jo dhundh rahii haiN aap ko mil jaaye..
Mayank
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15th July 2007, 03:30 PM
Mausam didi:
jai mata ji..
su vaat chhe!! hu gujaraatii chhu to gujaraati maaj jawaab aapuu chhu tamne....Khare-Khar Khuub j sundar rachnaa laKhii chhe tame....dil ne bau j gamii....bas tamne etli j vinantii karuu chhu ke tame sadaay maate aamaj laKhtaa rehjo....maara taraf thii aa sundar rachnaa maate bauj baDhii subhakaamnaao..
khuSh raho..
aapno
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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16th July 2007, 09:31 PM
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Originally Posted by mausam
Ankhon same tujh che,chataye tane hun sodhu chu..
Manzil mari tujh che,tenoj raston hu sodhu chu…
Tari aankhon maj kyak,maro prem hu sodhu chu
Tari vaaton ma kyak,maro ullekh hu sodhu chu..
Tari nazar ma kyak,maro chehro hu sodhu chu..
Tari neendar maj kyak,maru swapnu hu sodhu chu
Tara swash maj kyak,mari suwas hu sodhu chu..
Tara adharo paraj kyak,mara sur hu sodhu chu..
Tara chehra paraj kyak,jhalak joi che me premni..
Tethij apna Milan ni “khsitij” hu sodhu chu…
Isse pehle ki sab mujhse aake lade main jaisa bhi ho translated version yahin pesh karti hoon……..
Samne ho tum,fir bhi tumko dhundhti hoon mein
Manzil meri ho tum,uska raasta dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhari ankhon meinkahin apne liye pyar dhundhti hoon mein.
Tumahri bato mein kahin apna naam dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri nazaron mein kahin apna chehra dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri neendon main kahin apna swapna dhundhti hoon mein..
Tumhari saanson mein kahin apni dhadkan dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare labon pe kahin apne sur dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare chehre pe dekhi hain ek jhalak pyar ki
Isiliye apne Milan ki khsitij dhundhti hoon mein
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wah mausam diii kia khoobsurat likha hai aapke pyar bharay ahsasaat bohat achay lagay itna sab kuch dhoond rahin hain kuch na kuch to mil hi gaya hoga na khush rahiye di aur yunhin likhti rahiye
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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16th July 2007, 09:47 PM
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Originally Posted by mausam
Ankhon same tujh che,chataye tane hun sodhu chu..
Manzil mari tujh che,tenoj raston hu sodhu chu…
Tari aankhon maj kyak,maro prem hu sodhu chu
Tari vaaton ma kyak,maro ullekh hu sodhu chu..
Tari nazar ma kyak,maro chehro hu sodhu chu..
Tari neendar maj kyak,maru swapnu hu sodhu chu
Tara swash maj kyak,mari suwas hu sodhu chu..
Tara adharo paraj kyak,mara sur hu sodhu chu..
Tara chehra paraj kyak,jhalak joi che me premni..
Tethij apna Milan ni “khsitij” hu sodhu chu…
Isse pehle ki sab mujhse aake lade main jaisa bhi ho translated version yahin pesh karti hoon……..
Samne ho tum,fir bhi tumko dhundhti hoon mein
Manzil meri ho tum,uska raasta dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhari ankhon meinkahin apne liye pyar dhundhti hoon mein.
Tumahri bato mein kahin apna naam dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri nazaron mein kahin apna chehra dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri neendon main kahin apna swapna dhundhti hoon mein..
Tumhari saanson mein kahin apni dhadkan dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare labon pe kahin apne sur dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare chehre pe dekhi hain ek jhalak pyar ki
Isiliye apne Milan ki khsitij dhundhti hoon mein
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Shukar hai bhagwaan ka.. ki unhone meri pyari Di ke top floor ki tube-light on kar di... hahaha
Acha kiya traslation de di... nahi to..... aap jaante hi ho...
Vaise bahut hi khoobsoorat ehsaas hain....
Lekin ek baat kahun... Sooraj ki roshni me dhoondna, sab jaldi mil jaayega.. hehehehehe
Take Care Di..
~Priii
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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17th July 2007, 12:30 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by mausam
Ankhon same tujh che,chataye tane hun sodhu chu..
Manzil mari tujh che,tenoj raston hu sodhu chu…
Tari aankhon maj kyak,maro prem hu sodhu chu
Tari vaaton ma kyak,maro ullekh hu sodhu chu..
Tari nazar ma kyak,maro chehro hu sodhu chu..
Tari neendar maj kyak,maru swapnu hu sodhu chu
Tara swash maj kyak,mari suwas hu sodhu chu..
Tara adharo paraj kyak,mara sur hu sodhu chu..
Tara chehra paraj kyak,jhalak joi che me premni..
Tethij apna Milan ni “khsitij” hu sodhu chu…
Isse pehle ki sab mujhse aake lade main jaisa bhi ho translated version yahin pesh karti hoon……..
Samne ho tum,fir bhi tumko dhundhti hoon mein
Manzil meri ho tum,uska raasta dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhari ankhon meinkahin apne liye pyar dhundhti hoon mein.
Tumahri bato mein kahin apna naam dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri nazaron mein kahin apna chehra dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri neendon main kahin apna swapna dhundhti hoon mein..
Tumhari saanson mein kahin apni dhadkan dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare labon pe kahin apne sur dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare chehre pe dekhi hain ek jhalak pyar ki
Isiliye apne Milan ki khsitij dhundhti hoon mein
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mausam taraa lagan thayi gayaa chhe ,have kone shodhe chhe? budhhu?
have kaun aavi bhool biji vakhat kare
maate have rehvaa de shodhvaa nu ane gotvaa nu ,koik ne to baksh
haaaaaaa haaaaaaa haaaaaaaa
regards
manu
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17th July 2007, 12:56 PM
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dear mausam......behad khoobsurat ahsaas padne ka mauka diya hai aapne....aapki poetry dil ko chu gaye aur pyar ka ahsaas kaisa hota hai...bahut acchi tarah bayaan kiya hai. ki pyar ki ek jalak se hi dil machal uth-ta hai....bahut khoob....aur ha yeh bahut accha kiya jo hindi mei.n bhi post kar diya....nahi to hum gujrati hi padtey rahtey...che...chu...hai na
yu hi likhti raho kush raho
duao.n ke saath
aapki diii
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Di ,
hmmm di pyar ke ehsaas to pasand ane hi the... haan hindi mein to post karna hi tha na warna pichli baar ki tarah sabko PM karna padhta...heeeee.aur yeh kya hain che...chu...
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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17th July 2007, 12:59 PM
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mausam.. aap kii nazm behad achchhi lagii.. aur achchha huaa joo aap ne Gujraati ke saath saath hindi meiN bhii translate kiya.... verna main aap ko zaruur kahta... waise ooparwaale se fariyaad hai kii aap jo dhundh rahii haiN aap ko mil jaaye..
Mayank
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shukriya janab ka jise humari nazam acchi lagi....Humare liye uparwale se fariyaad ki uske liye hum apke shukraguzaar hain.........
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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17th July 2007, 01:17 PM
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Mausam didi:
jai mata ji..
su vaat chhe!! hu gujaraatii chhu to gujaraati maaj jawaab aapuu chhu tamne....Khare-Khar Khuub j sundar rachnaa laKhii chhe tame....dil ne bau j gamii....bas tamne etli j vinantii karuu chhu ke tame sadaay maate aamaj laKhtaa rehjo....maara taraf thii aa sundar rachnaa maate bauj baDhii subhakaamnaao..
khuSh raho..
aapno
Dhaval
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jai mata di dhaval....
hasto vari guj post par guj maj jawab apvanu ne....sachi vaat kav ghani badhi poems guj ma lakhi che pan translate nathin thathi etle post nathi kari.. translate karvu is the toughest thing....
take care..
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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17th July 2007, 04:29 PM
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wah mausam diii kia khoobsurat likha hai aapke pyar bharay ahsasaat bohat achay lagay itna sab kuch dhoond rahin hain kuch na kuch to mil hi gaya hoga na khush rahiye di aur yunhin likhti rahiye
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haan bas samjho mil hi gaya ..haan ab mujhe bhi lagta hain dhundhna kuch jyada ho gaya..... tum yaha aayi accha laga..hamesha ati rehna...
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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17th July 2007, 04:33 PM
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Shukar hai bhagwaan ka.. ki unhone meri pyari Di ke top floor ki tube-light on kar di... hahaha
Acha kiya traslation de di... nahi to..... aap jaante hi ho...
Vaise bahut hi khoobsoorat ehsaas hain....
Lekin ek baat kahun... Sooraj ki roshni me dhoondna, sab jaldi mil jaayega.. hehehehehe
Take Care Di..
~Priii
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nahin main raat ko dhundhungi woh bhi lantern leke... haaa tumhare dar se hi translation diya hain warna mujhe pata tha tum mannewali nahin thi...
tum bhi apna khyal rakhna..
tumhari di..
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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17th July 2007, 04:41 PM
kar di na mcp wali batein....
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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17th July 2007, 05:55 PM
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Originally Posted by mausam
Ankhon same tujh che,chataye tane hun sodhu chu..
Manzil mari tujh che,tenoj raston hu sodhu chu…
Tari aankhon maj kyak,maro prem hu sodhu chu
Tari vaaton ma kyak,maro ullekh hu sodhu chu..
Tari nazar ma kyak,maro chehro hu sodhu chu..
Tari neendar maj kyak,maru swapnu hu sodhu chu
Tara swash maj kyak,mari suwas hu sodhu chu..
Tara adharo paraj kyak,mara sur hu sodhu chu..
Tara chehra paraj kyak,jhalak joi che me premni..
Tethij apna Milan ni “khsitij” hu sodhu chu…
Isse pehle ki sab mujhse aake lade main jaisa bhi ho translated version yahin pesh karti hoon……..
Samne ho tum,fir bhi tumko dhundhti hoon mein
Manzil meri ho tum,uska raasta dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhari ankhon meinkahin apne liye pyar dhundhti hoon mein.
Tumahri bato mein kahin apna naam dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri nazaron mein kahin apna chehra dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri neendon main kahin apna swapna dhundhti hoon mein..
Tumhari saanson mein kahin apni dhadkan dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare labon pe kahin apne sur dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare chehre pe dekhi hain ek jhalak pyar ki
Isiliye apne Milan ki khsitij dhundhti hoon mein
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mausam ji ko raj ka adaab......aapki nazam parhi or mehsoos ki har ehsaas ko khud jeekar dekha bhut sakoon mila....is khub surat nazam par meri daad kabool karna........or yun hii likhti rehna.........raj.....
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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18th July 2007, 02:40 PM
MAUSAM JI ADDAB bahut khoob likha hay apne alfaz aur andaz behtreen rahey bahut accha likha hay apne ese hi likhte rahey.apna khayal rakhiye.........DHANEYEWAD
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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19th July 2007, 02:39 AM
Mausam Ji!
Khubaj saras rachna, ghana samay pachi aa site per avta j aavi majani rachna vanchvano labh madel...dadh ney patra chey!!
Rajan!!
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17th January 2009, 01:15 PM
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Originally Posted by mausam
Ankhon same tujh che,chataye tane hun sodhu chu..
Manzil mari tujh che,tenoj raston hu sodhu chu…
Tari aankhon maj kyak,maro prem hu sodhu chu
Tari vaaton ma kyak,maro ullekh hu sodhu chu..
Tari nazar ma kyak,maro chehro hu sodhu chu..
Tari neendar maj kyak,maru swapnu hu sodhu chu
Tara swash maj kyak,mari suwas hu sodhu chu..
Tara adharo paraj kyak,mara sur hu sodhu chu..
Tara chehra paraj kyak,jhalak joi che me premni..
Tethij apna Milan ni “khsitij” hu sodhu chu…
Isse pehle ki sab mujhse aake lade main jaisa bhi ho translated version yahin pesh karti hoon……..
Samne ho tum,fir bhi tumko dhundhti hoon mein
Manzil meri ho tum,uska raasta dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhari ankhon meinkahin apne liye pyar dhundhti hoon mein.
Tumahri bato mein kahin apna naam dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri nazaron mein kahin apna chehra dhundhti hoon mein
Tumahri neendon main kahin apna swapna dhundhti hoon mein..
Tumhari saanson mein kahin apni dhadkan dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare labon pe kahin apne sur dhundhti hoon mein
Tumhare chehre pe dekhi hain ek jhalak pyar ki
Isiliye apne Milan ki khsitij dhundhti hoon mein
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tamara ehsaas to mane bahuj gamya pan te thi ye wadhu mane aa 2 line behad pasand aavi che
Tara swash maj kyak,mari suwas hu sodhu chu..
Tara adharo paraj kyak,mara sur hu sodhu chu..
bahuj saras lakhiyu che
tamne waachwa sache sara lage che
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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