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Love ehsaas - 14th March 2008, 02:12 PM

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ehsaas khwabo se bhara hua,
saagar ke bundo se saja hua,
gehra hain ye kaalli nazro ki tarah
dil mein na jaane kise basata hua,
umeedo ki patang ki dor thamta hua,
paayal ki ghunghroo ki tarah chhanakta hua,
chahat ki laali ko sajaata hua,
lehro ki maujo pe naachta hua,
nazro se armaano ko chhupaata hua,
kisi ke khayalo ke pichhe bhagta hua,
pata nahin kiski aahat pe nazrein jhukata hua,



ehsaas pyar se pyara hain
har kisi ke dil mein samaya hain
jo pyar ko samajhta hain
jo do pyar karnewaale ke dilo mein har pal apna aashiya banata hain
   
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15th March 2008, 11:59 AM

Tumhe jub milain kabhi fursatain mere dil se bojh utaar do
Main bohat dino se uddas hoon mujhe koi shaam uddhar do

Mujhe apne roop ki dhoop do, k chamak sakain mere khaal-o-khad
Mujhe apne rang main rang do, mere sare zung utaar do

Kisi aur ko mere haal se na ghurz he na koi wastaa
Main bikhar gaya hoon samet lo,main bigur gaya hoon sanwaar do

Meri wehshatoon ko barha diya,hai judaiyoon k azaab ne
Mere dil pe hath rakho zara,meri dhurkhanoon ko karar do

Tumhain suba kaisi lagi kahooo meri khushion k diyar ki
Jo bhuli lagi to yaheen rahoo, isay chahaton se nikhaar do

Wahan ghar main kon hai muntazir k ho fikar der suwair ki
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15th March 2008, 08:16 PM

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ehsaas
ehsaas khwabo se bhara hua,
saagar ke bundo se saja hua,
gehra hain ye kaalli nazro ki tarah
dil mein na jaane kise basata hua,
umeedo ki patang ki dor thamta hua,
paayal ki ghunghroo ki tarah chhanakta hua,
chahat ki laali ko sajaata hua,
lehro ki maujo pe naachta hua,
nazro se armaano ko chhupaata hua,
kisi ke khayalo ke pichhe bhagta hua,
pata nahin kiski aahat pe nazrein jhukata hua,



ehsaas pyar se pyara hain
har kisi ke dil mein samaya hain
jo pyar ko samajhta hain
jo do pyar karnewaale ke dilo mein har pal apna aashiya banata hain

very nice Muskaan,
very touching
WO KAHATE HAIN
mere ehsaase dil me, koi ehsaas hi nahi hai,
is ehsaas pe lekin mujhe bilkul yakin nahi hai
   
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aapne wakai me bahut aacha likha hai

mujhe aacha laga..


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Tumhe jub milain kabhi fursatain mere dil se bojh utaar do
Main bohat dino se uddas hoon mujhe koi shaam uddhar do

Mujhe apne roop ki dhoop do, k chamak sakain mere khaal-o-khad
Mujhe apne rang main rang do, mere sare zung utaar do

Kisi aur ko mere haal se na ghurz he na koi wastaa
Main bikhar gaya hoon samet lo,main bigur gaya hoon sanwaar do

Meri wehshatoon ko barha diya,hai judaiyoon k azaab ne
Mere dil pe hath rakho zara,meri dhurkhanoon ko karar do

Tumhain suba kaisi lagi kahooo meri khushion k diyar ki
Jo bhuli lagi to yaheen rahoo, isay chahaton se nikhaar do

Wahan ghar main kon hai muntazir k ho fikar der suwair ki
Bari mukhtasar si yeh raat hai isay chaandni main guzaar do
kya likha haibhai vaah vaah ji dil to bhar aaya ...

pahli do laaine bahot impressive hain ..

aap ki shayari ko ek sher arz hai .. raaz na dil ka hum kholenge , gum jo mile to khud ro lenge. mujhse tum roothoge nahi bas itne se hi khush ho lenge.

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