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26th October 2010, 02:10 AM
Intzaar shehar ka haseen manjar hai charon taraf haseeno ka mela hai fiza me mastiyon ka aalam hai fir bhi banda akela hai..... is tanhai se lagne laga hai darr na khud ki khabar hai na zamane ki phikr abb aasan nahi rah gaya hai dagar aa bhi jao saath mere ban jao mere humsafar..... tanha dil ka tumhe bhi hoga ehsaas hakikatan kuch majburiyan hai apne paas sitmgar itne beraham to tum bhi nahi tere dil me bhi hogi milan ki aas..... alfaazo ko maine kagaz pe utara hai armaano ko in palkon pe sanwara hai teri berukhi abb bardasht nahi hoti mujhse mera to har lamha bas tumhara hai.... mumkin hai tumhe pata na ho kis kadar hai mujhe tera intzaar meri chahat pe shayad yakin na ho chalo isse bhi kiya maine iqraar..... ae ajnabi apni mohabbat par lekin nacheej ko itna to hai etbaar pakar is masoom nadaan aashiki ko tum bhi na kar sakoge kabhi inkaar.... ye kya...! lafzon me is kadar izhaar karke kyun khud ko bechain kiya jaa raha hoon apni tahayion se larte larte yun laga, khud ko aur tanha kiye jaa raha hoon.... chalo abb, Haal-E-Dil ka bayaan to chalta rahega, banda tujhse yun hi baatein karta rahega. khud to so jati hai,mujhe bhi sone de zaalim, is intzaar me na jaane kitni raatein jaagta rahega........  |
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28th October 2010, 01:13 AM
masha allha so nice ji bahuth khoob____
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29th October 2010, 10:26 AM
Hello ........BEAUTIFUL so so sweet shayri "INTZAR" I like it .........thanks for sharing that..........
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30th October 2010, 06:36 PM
thanks..........4 ur compliments.............
if u 've something ur mind then share with me.........I'm trying 2 collect them as my next poem............ have u read my poem...'jine ki aasha'.........it is my inspirational poem and now I'm posting my next poem which is about our LIFE .........& its various aspect..... |
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26th November 2010, 01:25 AM
hiii, sneha ji waise maine yahan bhi apne baare me halka sa bataya hai.........kyunki poetry ki achhi baat yahi hai .....jo aapke mann me thought hai bas aap unhi ko likhte ho..........hai na......
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26th November 2010, 01:29 PM
bahut khoob............................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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26th November 2010, 06:34 PM
Very Nice Poetry ...................... !
 YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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27th November 2010, 10:42 AM
Hiiiiiiii puregold ji......ooooooooh.... to ye baat he,,,,,,,,us poetry me aap ke dil ki baat he.........per app akele kyo he ......please reply me......
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27th November 2010, 02:56 PM
aapka sawaal puchhne me to jawab nahi............
ok main aapko batata hoon....... " manzile bhi uski thi rastaa bhi uska tha........ ek main akela tha kafila bhi uska tha.... saath saath chalne ki soch bhi uski thi... phir raasta badlne ka faisla bhi uska tha..... aaj kyun akela hoon aaj kyun akela hoon...... dil sawaal puchhta hai log to uske the kya Khuda bhi uska tha.............." hope ki aapko aapka jawaab mil gaya hoga............ aapne apne baare me kuch nahi bataya............. |
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27th November 2010, 03:02 PM
@ Ishq.........
thanks............ bye......Radhe Radhe |
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27th November 2010, 03:04 PM
@ naresh.........
Thanks Naresh ji.............. aap painting bhi karte hain kya??????? |
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27th November 2010, 06:22 PM
Hiiiiii pure gold ji.........I'm confused ......... please reply me......wait.....
Kya logo ko sachchi dosti nahi bhati......... Kya dost ko dost kahna gunah he,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, mumkin hai tumhe pata na ho kis kadar hai mujhe tera intzaar meri chahat pe shayad yakin na ho chalo isse bhi kiya maine iqraar..... sorry Zainy ji......... |
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27th November 2010, 08:22 PM
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Not fair Sneha ji, Jab ek baar aapko warn kar diya gaya hai ke threads per personal bateiN na karein, tou behtar hai aap is baat ka khayaal rakhiye, aap "private message" me apni bateiN kar sakte haiN warna majburan mujhe sakht qadam uthana padega... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th December 2010, 04:43 PM
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