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Ankho me basi tasveer -
28th November 2010, 09:35 PM
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28th November 2010, 09:52 PM
wow thats really nice yaar...really i like this most...thanks
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28th November 2010, 09:53 PM
Hey Ashu cud you please let me know how to post new sharies ..i hv to post my new shayries and hope the people wud love my shayries ...
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29th November 2010, 02:31 AM
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Ji aap zaroor kuchh post kijiye .. hume aur baaki sab ko bhi aap ko padhanaa bahot achchha lagega ... Ji .. aap site pe Log In karne ke baad jis bhi Forum mai apni shayri post karna chaahate hai .. us Forum mai jaaiye .. aur .. left side top pe ... ek option rahega..  jahaan se aap apne shayri hum sab ke saath share kar sakte hai ... aap ko apni shayari ke liye jo Forum sahi lage wahaan ... apni shayaris post kijiye .. hume padhake bahot achchha lagega ... aur aap agar kuchh aesa post karte hai jo aap ka likha huaa nahi hai . jo aap sirf humaare saath share kar rahe hai .. to please uss ke niche ... writer ka naam pata ho to mention zaroori kijiyega .. aur writer ka naam naa pata ho to "Not Mine" likhaa kijiyegaa ...once again .. welcome to the site .. aur aap ki shayari ka intezaar rahegaa .. Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de, Aapki Dost: Gudia Jay Ambe Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani...... ------------------------------------------------------------ Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai, Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai, Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi, Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi. |
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29th November 2010, 02:38 AM
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kuchh dil ke kareeb lage ... dil ko chhoo liya kuchh shabdo ne ... very nice .. hume achchha laga aap ka likha .. ... aage aur bhi achchhi koshishe padhane milegi aap se ..yunhi likhati rahiye Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de, Aapki Dost: Gudia Jay Ambe Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani...... ------------------------------------------------------------ Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai, Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai, Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi, Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi. |
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29th November 2010, 08:28 PM
thanks so much anil ji
jo apko meri poetry pasand aai aap new thread ke through apni poetry post kar sakte ho as gudia ne btaya |
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29th November 2010, 08:29 PM
gudia ji tahe dil se shukriya aapka jo mere shabd apko pasand aaye
aasha hai aapke lafzo se bhi jald mulakat hogi |
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