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Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye - 3rd September 2011, 03:05 AM

Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye

Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye


Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye


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Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye

Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye


Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
I say a say an excellent piece of shayrana expression! A just read t multiple times its a book completed in two stanzas and a bit! Quality posting!


Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!


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5th September 2011, 01:21 AM

Thank u very much Ajnabi


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5th September 2011, 08:05 AM

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Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye

Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye


Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
beautiful write -------- poetic very poetic
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9th September 2011, 09:29 PM

Thank you very much Janumanu ji .. ...................


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Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye

Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye


Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye

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15th December 2011, 04:38 PM

Beautifuly written... expression of feelings at its best....

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye


Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..


Ek tere bagair hai Zindagi ki Gujar…..
Bata main kya karu….
Sare zamane ki Mohabbat leker…..

   
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15th December 2011, 06:53 PM

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Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye

Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye


Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
Bahut Sundar !

Ehsaas AchChhe HaiN ... Mubaaraqbaad !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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21st December 2011, 10:58 PM

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Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye

Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..

Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
Good one..... loved the above ashaar

Reminds me of the below couplets by a renowed Poet "Sarwar Raz"

Dhoondaa hi nahin humne koi tumhara hum Sar,
Haan ! tum kaho, tumko koi hum sa nazar aaya.

   
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