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5th August 2008, 02:36 PM
sare sayar dost ko meri Salam........yeh ek koshish hai meri apni kalam se....main na to sayar hun ...na mujhe itna labz ko sajana aate hain...kuchh apne dil main jo sabd ghar kiye hain unko ikatha karke ek nagma aapke samne pesh kar rahi hun.....galtiyan 100 honge ismain...per aap hume dil se maaf kariyega ......apna reply jarur dijiyega .........
Tere aangan main ek diya hoke jalna chahati hun
har sham tere paas main rehena chahati hun
Rafta rafta bikhar chuki hun tere pyar main
ab har sapna main sakar karna chahati hun
chahat ki safar to imtehan leta hai
main har imtehan dena chahati hun
tere pyar ke khatir yeh zalim
duniyan se bagawat karna chahati hun
bechain palkon se tere aane ke intezar karna chahati hun
tere mathe ki pasina apni aanchal se mitana chahati hun
koi sapne ki duniyan hai to le chal mujhko
main pariyon ki kahani tujhe sunana chahati hun
Pyar main do labz ab bol de mujhko
puri zindegi tere hawale karna chahati hun
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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5th August 2008, 03:20 PM
hi dost me tum se dosti karna chati hu
plz reply me byeeeeeeeeeee
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5th August 2008, 04:57 PM
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hi dost me tum se dosti karna chati hu
plz reply me byeeeeeeeeeee
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hume khusi hogi aapse dosti karke ....sukriya aapne hume dosti ke kabil to samjhe
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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bahut khoob diya jee -
5th August 2008, 05:03 PM
oye hoye...diya ji aapki poetry to pyar se bhari padi hai....vaise to sabhi ahsaas acche lage par last wali lines to behad acchi lagi.
Pyar main do labz ab bol de mujhko
puri zindegi tere hawale karna chahati hun
kaya baat hai....bahut khoob
yoon hi mahfil mein pyar ki mahak bikherti rahiye
kush rahiye
duao.n ke saath
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th August 2008, 05:04 PM
kya kare ab hum bhi teri dil me rahna chahte hai
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5th August 2008, 05:31 PM
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sare sayar dost ko meri Salam........yeh ek koshish hai meri apni kalam se....main na to sayar hun ...na mujhe itna labz ko sajana aate hain...kuchh apne dil main jo sabd ghar kiye hain unko ikatha karke ek nagma aapke samne pesh kar rahi hun.....galtiyan 100 honge ismain...per aap hume dil se maaf kariyega ......apna reply jarur dijiyega .........
Tere aangan main ek diya hoke jalna chahati hun
har sham tere paas main rehena chahati hun
Rafta rafta bikhar chuki hun tere pyar main
ab har sapna main sakar karna chahati hun
chahat ki safar to imtehan leta hai
main har imtehan dena chahati hun
tere pyar ke khatir yeh zalim
duniyan se bagawat karna chahati hun
bechain palkon se tere aane ke intezar karna chahati hun
tere mathe ki pasina apni aanchal se mitana chahati hun
koi sapne ki duniyan hai to le chal mujhko
main pariyon ki kahani tujhe sunana chahati hun
Pyar main do labz ab bol de mujhko
puri zindegi tere hawale karna chahati hun
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bohat khoob diya ji mashallah bohat acha likha hai apne,parh ker bohat acha laga.ayse he apne dil ki baten hum tak pochati rahiye ga.apna bohat khayal rakhna,
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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5th August 2008, 05:32 PM
sukriya Sunita ji hum sach main bahat khus hue aaj ...aap ke dua youn saath rahe .........
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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5th August 2008, 05:34 PM
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bohat khoob diya ji mashallah bohat acha likha hai apne,parh ker bohat acha laga.ayse he apne dil ki baten hum tak pochati rahiye ga.apna bohat khayal rakhna,
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sukriya aap ke janab aap ne waqt nikal ke dekhe ....
youn to hum sabke nazar main aam the
aap ne jo nazar dale humpe to onmol ho gaye
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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5th August 2008, 05:36 PM
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kya kare ab hum bhi teri dil me rahna chahte hai
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swagat hai aap ka ...............
dost to woh hai jo dil main rehete hain
band aankhon main bhi nazar aate hain
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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5th August 2008, 05:58 PM
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sukriya aap ke janab aap ne waqt nikal ke dekhe ....
youn to hum sabke nazar main aam the
aap ne jo nazar dale humpe to onmol ho gaye
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bohat khoob dia bohat acha shair likha hai apne.muje lagta hai app koi aam insan nahi ho.hum dosti ker sakte hain.
wayse main itni jaldi kisi se dosti nahi kerta per app ki shayri dekh ker pata nahi kyun mere dil ne kaha hai k app se dosti ki jaye.ager app ko bura na lagy to muje pvt msg ker k bata dena main intzar karon ga.
Phool Ban Ke "Muskurana" Hum Jante Hain..
Muskura Ke Gham Chupana Hum Jante Hain..
Log Mil Ke Khush Hote Hain Tu Kya Hoa..
Bina Mile "Rishta" Nibhana Hum Jante Hain..
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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5th August 2008, 06:13 PM
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bohat khoob dia bohat acha shair likha hai apne.muje lagta hai app koi aam insan nahi ho.hum dosti ker sakte hain.
wayse main itni jaldi kisi se dosti nahi kerta per app ki shayri dekh ker pata nahi kyun mere dil ne kaha hai k app se dosti ki jaye.ager app ko bura na lagy to muje pvt msg ker k bata dena main intzar karon ga.
Phool Ban Ke "Muskurana" Hum Jante Hain..
Muskura Ke Gham Chupana Hum Jante Hain..
Log Mil Ke Khush Hote Hain Tu Kya Hoa..
Bina Mile "Rishta" Nibhana Hum Jante Hain..
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Dear main bahat hi aam hun ...mujhe Hindi urdu dono achhi tarah se maloom nehin sayari ke labz samjhati hun isiliye apne eheshash ko labz main bayan karti hun.....
Riste ki baat jab maan main aaye
ek umid ki diya fir jalye
jab tak yeh mehfil chalti rahegi
humare dosti younhi Roshan rahe
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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5th August 2008, 06:34 PM
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Dear main bahat hi aam hun ...mujhe Hindi urdu dono achhi tarah se maloom nehin sayari ke labz samjhati hun isiliye apne eheshash ko labz main bayan karti hun.....
Riste ki baat jab maan main aaye
ek umid ki diya fir jalye
jab tak yeh mehfil chalti rahegi
humare dosti younhi Roshan rahe
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janab main es shair ko kya samjo k jab tak ye mahfil hai humari dost hai bas usk elawa khatam.app kya cheez ho ye muje app ki shayri se andaza ho gaya hai.app apne ehsasoon ko jis tarah likhti wo andaz muje bohat passand hain.apna khayal rkahna.UR FRIEND RIZI......
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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5th August 2008, 06:37 PM
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janab main es shair ko kya samjo k jab tak ye mahfil hai humari dost hai bas usk elawa khatam.app kya cheez ho ye muje app ki shayri se andaza ho gaya hai.app apne ehsasoon ko jis tarah likhti wo andaz muje bohat passand hain.apna khayal rkahna.UR FRIEND RIZI......
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oops aisi baat nehin janab ....hum humesha dosti nibahyenge ...hum yahan online rahe ya off line aap ke saath rahenge ...jab andhere main apna saya aap ke saath chor de ...tab ek Diya jalaye rakhna ...aur tabhi hume pass paoge ...dosti to dil main basne wala rista ...usse mehefil main ab kya bataun....
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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5th August 2008, 06:47 PM
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oops aisi baat nehin janab ....hum humesha dosti nibahyenge ...hum yahan online rahe ya off line aap ke saath rahenge ...jab andhere main apna saya aap ke saath chor de ...tab ek Diya jalaye rakhna ...aur tabhi hume pass paoge ...dosti to dil main basne wala rista ...usse mehefil main ab kya bataun....
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ahan batane ki zarurat nahi hai main samj gaya hon khair acha laga app se baat ker k.baat ye nahi k baat ho jaye bas app ki hamari dosti salamat rahe ye he dua hai meri ..
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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Aameen -
5th August 2008, 06:52 PM
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ahan batane ki zarurat nahi hai main samj gaya hon khair acha laga app se baat ker k.baat ye nahi k baat ho jaye bas app ki hamari dosti salamat rahe ye he dua hai meri ..
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Mujhse milne ke baad woh meri jaan ban gaye.........
mere saath jeene marne wali ek dastaan ban gaye......
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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5th August 2008, 07:17 PM
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Mujhse milne ke baad woh meri jaan ban gaye.........
mere saath jeene marne wali ek dastaan ban gaye......
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bohat khoob diya.
FOR U SPICAL
Mahakti Hui In Fizaon Mein Aa Jate Ho..
Kabhi Khushbu Ban Ke Hawaon Mein Aa Jate Ho..
Yeh Chahat Kabhi Bhi Kam Na Hui Ap Ki..
Hath Jab Bhi Uthaye Tu Duaon Mein Aa Jate Ho..
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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5th August 2008, 07:24 PM
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bohat khoob diya.
FOR U SPICAL
Mahakti Hui In Fizaon Mein Aa Jate Ho..
Kabhi Khushbu Ban Ke Hawaon Mein Aa Jate Ho..
Yeh Chahat Kabhi Bhi Kam Na Hui Ap Ki..
Hath Jab Bhi Uthaye Tu Duaon Mein Aa Jate Ho..
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patzad me bahar lekar aayenge,
khamoshi me ikrar lekar aayenge,
jab bhi pukaroge pyar se mera naam to,
maut se bhi sanse udhar lekar aayenge...
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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5th August 2008, 07:32 PM
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patzad me bahar lekar aayenge,
khamoshi me ikrar lekar aayenge,
jab bhi pukaroge pyar se mera naam to,
maut se bhi sanse udhar lekar aayenge...
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wah bohat khoob kya kehna hai tumhara nice yaar dil ko chu gya ye shair to....
Zindagi Ke Har Mor Pe Sunheri Yaadon Ka Ehsas Rehne Do..
Surur Dil Mein Or Mithas Zuban Pe Rehne Do..
Yehi Falsafa Hai Jeene Ka..
Na Raho Udas Na Kisi Ko Udas Rehne Do.
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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5th August 2008, 07:46 PM
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wah bohat khoob kya kehna hai tumhara nice yaar dil ko chu gya ye shair to....
Zindagi Ke Har Mor Pe Sunheri Yaadon Ka Ehsas Rehne Do..
Surur Dil Mein Or Mithas Zuban Pe Rehne Do..
Yehi Falsafa Hai Jeene Ka..
Na Raho Udas Na Kisi Ko Udas Rehne Do.
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baat wohi ho jo dilko chhu jaye ........
Har sagar k do kinare hote hain
Kuch log jaan se bhi pyare hote hain
yeh zaruri nahin har koi pass ho
dur rehe kar bhi koi bahat khas hote hain
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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5th August 2008, 07:52 PM
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baat wohi ho jo dilko chhu jaye ........
Har sagar k do kinare hote hain
Kuch log jaan se bhi pyare hote hain
yeh zaruri nahin har koi pass ho
dur rehe kar bhi koi bahat khas hote hain
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nice to meet u diya aj pahla din tha bohat acha laga tum se baat ker k.main pvt main app se kuch pouch sakta hon,.
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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5th August 2008, 08:05 PM
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nice to meet u diya aj pahla din tha bohat acha laga tum se baat ker k.main pvt main app se kuch pouch sakta hon,.
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koi sikayat ya sikwa hai to besak bata sakte hain ........hume koi yetraaz nehin
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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6th August 2008, 01:51 PM
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koi sikayat ya sikwa hai to besak bata sakte hain ........hume koi yetraaz nehin
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na koi shikayat hai na koi shikwa or ho be nahi sakta hai
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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6th August 2008, 01:54 PM
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na koi shikayat hai na koi shikwa or ho be nahi sakta hai
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sukriya ........
pehele sochte the hum jiyenge kis keliye
aapse milke aisa laga ..........
abhi to bahat kuchh baki hai pane keliye
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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6th August 2008, 01:58 PM
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sukriya ........
pehele sochte the hum jiyenge kis keliye
aapse milke aisa laga ..........
abhi to bahat kuchh baki hai pane keliye
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kya kehna hai app ki shayri bohat khoob mashallah.khush raho.
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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6th August 2008, 02:02 PM
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kya kehna hai app ki shayri bohat khoob mashallah.khush raho.
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jab jab hum dil ke baat unhe kehene lagte hain
woh kehete hain ...yeh labz pehele se suna suna sa lagta hai
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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6th August 2008, 02:15 PM
bahut acha likha hai aapne
bas meter ka khyaal rakhe
keep writing
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bahut acha likha hai aapne
bas meter ka khyaal rakhe
keep writing
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aapne humare nagme dekhe bahat bahat sukriya hum aapke baat yaad rakhenge .......
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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6th August 2008, 02:31 PM
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jab jab hum dil ke baat unhe kehene lagte hain
woh kehete hain ...yeh labz pehele se suna suna sa lagta hai
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uff hoo ab kuch nahi kahon ga her baat per aik shair pagal ker don gi.or shair be ayse k dil per lagen aa ker.
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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6th August 2008, 02:38 PM
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uff hoo ab kuch nahi kahon ga her baat per aik shair pagal ker don gi.or shair be ayse k dil per lagen aa ker.
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yeh mehefil hai janab yahan to har baat sayari ban jata hai ......
baithe hain honton ko siye
bahat pachhtaoge aap
akshar pyar jaag uthte hain
aise khamoshiyon ke baad .......NM
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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6th August 2008, 02:55 PM
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yeh mehefil hai janab yahan to har baat sayari ban jata hai ......
baithe hain honton ko siye
bahat pachhtaoge aap
akshar pyar jaag uthte hain
aise khamoshiyon ke baad .......NM
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oh ho kya kehna hai janab bohat khoob bohat acha likha hai.ye shair muje wayse he bohat passand hai.apna khayal rakhna.
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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6th August 2008, 02:58 PM
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oh ho kya kehna hai janab bohat khoob bohat acha likha hai.ye shair muje wayse he bohat passand hai.apna khayal rakhna.
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hume apna khayal rakhne ko kehekar
woh khud bekhayal ho rahe hain ............
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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mahfil-e-tanhai
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6th August 2008, 04:09 PM
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hume apna khayal rakhne ko kehekar
woh khud bekhayal ho rahe hain ............
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wah wah kya kehna hia bohat khoob
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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6th August 2008, 09:30 PM
nazar uthaye to gunah kar baithe
nazar jhukaye to khata kar baithe
katil nigahein jo unpe padi
yeh khuda hum yeh kya kar baithe .........
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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mahfil-e-tanhai
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9th August 2008, 01:50 PM
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Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
nazar uthaye to gunah kar baithe
nazar jhukaye to khata kar baithe
katil nigahein jo unpe padi
yeh khuda hum yeh kya kar baithe .........
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uff ALLAH kya baat hai bohat khoob janab kya baat hai bohat umda parh ker bohat bohat acha laga hai.so sweet of u
Mera Bus Chale Tu Ap Ki Yaadein Kharid Loon..
Apne Jeene Ke Waste Ap Ki Baatein Kharid Loon..
Kar Saken Jo Her Waqt Deedar Ap Ka..
Sab Kuch Luta Kar Wo nigahen Kharid Loon..
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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Adhoori Aas
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9th August 2008, 01:52 PM
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sare sayar dost ko meri Salam........yeh ek koshish hai meri apni kalam se....main na to sayar hun ...na mujhe itna labz ko sajana aate hain...kuchh apne dil main jo sabd ghar kiye hain unko ikatha karke ek nagma aapke samne pesh kar rahi hun.....galtiyan 100 honge ismain...per aap hume dil se maaf kariyega ......apna reply jarur dijiyega .........
Tere aangan main ek diya hoke jalna chahati hun
har sham tere paas main rehena chahati hun
Rafta rafta bikhar chuki hun tere pyar main
ab har sapna main sakar karna chahati hun
chahat ki safar to imtehan leta hai
main har imtehan dena chahati hun
tere pyar ke khatir yeh zalim
duniyan se bagawat karna chahati hun
bechain palkon se tere aane ke intezar karna chahati hun
tere mathe ki pasina apni aanchal se mitana chahati hun
koi sapne ki duniyan hai to le chal mujhko
main pariyon ki kahani tujhe sunana chahati hun
Pyar main do labz ab bol de mujhko
puri zindegi tere hawale karna chahati hun
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Pyar main do labz ab bol de mujhko
puri zindegi tere hawale karna chahati hun
bahut umda kalam hai diya ye tumhaara dil se daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega
shukriyaa
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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9th August 2008, 01:54 PM
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Originally Posted by dilip200
Pyar main do labz ab bol de mujhko
puri zindegi tere hawale karna chahati hun
bahut umda kalam hai diya ye tumhaara dil se daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega
shukriyaa
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sukriya Dillip ji ...........bas dil ki baat kalam ne kagaz pe utara hai baki ...........
yaadon main tasvuur me tum hi tum hote ho
Ek baar tum bhi keh do ki tum bhi mere khwab sajate ho
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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9th August 2008, 05:54 PM
Mere rooh meri jind jaan ho
Jo na khatm ho wo armaan ho
Ankhon ka noor dil ka qaraar ho
Mere honton pe saji muskaan ho
Mere jazbaaton ki pehchaan ho
Khuda ka bheja farmaan ho
Is dil main muhafiz khazaana ho
Mere dil ke arman mera imaan ho
Pyaar main zindagi muqtasar lage
Aise lagta hai dil ke mehmaan ho
Ishq main tere muskuraake jeene lagi
Khwahishen jisne jagaai wo insaan ho..nm
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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30th August 2008, 11:49 PM
Tere Ishq Mie Main Ab Khud Se Bhi Pyaar Karta Hoon
Hallat Aisi Hai Meri Ab to Sapno Main Bhi
Tera Hi Khwaab Dekha Karta Hoon..nm
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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