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1st December 2009, 07:50 PM
DostoN is mahine hameiN kul milaker 7 ghaleiN mili haiN...sabhi ghazaleiN lajawaab haiN...meri aur se sabhi members ko dil se daad.....
maiN sab se pahle un dostoN ki shukr-guzaar huuN jinhone 'Ghazal of the month' meiN hissa liya aur apnii ghazaleiN hameiN bheji...
chaliye ab aap gtm ki ghazaloN ka maza lijiye aur plzzzzzzzz apni kheemti votes se inhe nawaziye...
All the best to all the participants.
Shukriyah
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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1st December 2009, 07:54 PM
lo aane lagi hai sada dheere dheere
wo hone lage hain fida dheere dheere
khata hai ye meri pata hai ye mujhko
banegi wo meri qaza dheere dheere
bula kar mujhay mere kaano mai usne
tumhari hu.n mai ye, kaha dheere dheere
gira kar ke zulfo.n ko kaandhay pe poocha
hai kaisi ye shub, tu bata dheere dheere
abhi to mere, rang mai rangne lage hai.n
wo daalenge apni qaba dheere dheere
samajhne lagenge isharo.n ka matlab
to aane lagegi haya dheere dheere
younhi roothne mai manaane mai humko
kabhi tou aayega maza dheere dheere
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1st December 2009, 07:55 PM
Abhi kamsin ho zamaane se zaraa sambhal kar, dhiire dhiire,
Kaleja muh ko aata hai na chalo yuuN machal kar, dhiire dhiire.
Is masuumiyat ke sadqe jab wo kehta hai "maaruNgii haaN"
Ek makhmali chhuuan ki khatir kahe par amal kar dhiire dhiire.
Saraapa sang-e-marmar ka manzar hai uska alha.D shabab,
Dar hai na gir jaauN apne imaan se kahi fisal kar, dhiire dhiire.
Band kamre meiN le rahe gehri saaNse hum ishq se mehrum,
Abhi gayaa hai wo sandalii jism yahaaN se nikal kar dhiire dhiire.
Dhuley bhiigey chehre par laam ke manind chipke gesu uske,
Falaq ka helaal utar aaya jyuN peyshaani par chal kar dhiire dhiire.
(Laam=alphabet in Arabic/Urdu like reverse 6. Helaal=crescent moon, peyshaani=forehead)
Bekhayaali meiN bhi naa chhuuna mujhey ai maasuum sholay,
KahiiN jhalak na jaaye hasrateN aaNkhoN se ubal kar dhiire dhiire.
SardiyoN ki dhuup meiN, chat pe bhiige baaloN ko jhatakti wo,
Niiche kha.De mere chehre pe gire sholay pighal kar dhiire dhiire.
Khizaa meiN bhi bahaar chaa gaii, khushnumaa hui rut har suu,
Abhi dikha wo jharoke meiN, abhi nikla huuN behal kar dhiire dhiire
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1st December 2009, 07:58 PM
Uth rahe haiN rukhoN se, naqaab dheere dheere...!
Aa raha hai samajh karobare-ishq ka, hisaab dheere dheere...!
Inn sun-saaN vadiyoN ki sisak sun to zara...
kar raha hai tujhe ro ro koi, be-hijaab dheere dheere
Tere ishq me hai wafadaari ka yeh kaisa silla...?
Ke sulag raha hooN main, be-hisaab dheere dheere...!
Mere ashqoN ki keemat to kuch bhi na hai...
AankhoN se chal, hote haiN hoNtoN tak, Sharaab dheere dheere...
Samandar hai chup, iss bharam me na rehna...!
Le raha hai meri palkoN ka ye, sailaab dheere dheere...!
Rahe-ulfat meiN girna, hai diloN ka muqaddar...
Mujhe girke uth'ta dekhiye, aali-janaab dheere dheere...!
Mudda aNka hai aaj bhi, 'Ghalib' ki shokhi-e-tehreer ka...!
Ghazal tujhko bhi aayegi, 'e 'mast' taab dheere dheere...!
Mudda = meaning
aNka = an imaginary bird that doesn't exist in reality
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1st December 2009, 07:59 PM
mohabbat ka hua yeh anjaam dheere dheere
sar bewafaa ka lagaa ilzaam dheere dheere
mashhur hai woh raah-e-ulfat mein karke daga
hum wafaa karke hue badnaam dheere dheere
apne hi ashqon ke taabish mein jal rahe hai
bana zaher mere liye har jaam dheere dheere
kho mat jana in sinduri fizaaon mein kahi
kali raat ban jati hai har shaam dheere dheere
sitaaren ban kar chamakte nahi tah-umr koi
khakh mein milta hai har naam dheere dheere
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1st December 2009, 08:00 PM
dikhayegi rang ashiki dheere dheere
khalegi hamaari kami dheere dheere
hai chaane lagi bekasi is qadar ab
Ke tang aa gaya aadmi dheere dheere
gaye kya vo daman chuda berukhi se
Teharne lagi zindagi dheere dheere
falak bos siyaa(h) dhuaa kah raha hai
jali hai kahi jhopdi dheere dheere
yakeenan mile hai kahi do kinaare
badalne lagi rukh nadi dheere dheere
jaraasa nighahe jo badli unhone
sabhi ho gaye ajnabi dheere dheere
mere dil me kya kya sitam dhaa rahi hai
sitamgar teri khamshi dheere dheere
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1st December 2009, 08:01 PM
Aaj mujhe koi yaad Aayaa dheere dheere
Aaine ne chehra Dikhaayaa dheere dheere...
Uska tasawwur ankhoN mein der tak raha
Dil ko phir bahut Samjhaayaa dheere dheere...
Rakh ke faasla Jab woh Yaha se chale gaye
Us pal ko humne Bhoolaayaa dheere dheere...
Kal shab koi khawab chat per bhool aayaa
Jami yaadon ki aoss ko sukhaayaa dheere dheere...
Ankhon se jhalakte taare mujhse puch rahe hai
Ashq palko mai Kyon chhupaayaa dheere dheere...
Khushi-khushi ruswaai ka Zeher pee liya humne
Umar bhar yeh dard dil mai Dabaayaa dheere dheere...
Yaha ulfat ka dastoor ajeeb dekha humne
Jinhe chaaha ussne door hataayaa dheere dheere...
Jinhe paane ke liye chhod di saari duniyaa
Aane ka unhone intezaar karaayaa dheere dheere...
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1st December 2009, 08:02 PM
Chala huN maiN, chale ho tum dheere dheere…
Nazar bhi hogi yuN hi, nam dheere dheere…
Diwaane gar hai tanhai ke dono hum..
Hoga mehsoos dard-o-gham Dheere dheere…
Adhoora ishq tera tohfa mujh ko..
Khushi se jaa mila, maatam dheere dheere…
Thehar kar jaam hoNtoN se lagaana tum..
Chadega sar nasha, jaanam dheere dheere…
Kahaani phir koi le maud mushkil saa,..
jidhar ye nikle mera dam dheere dheere
Nahi ghamgeeN, gar hai zindagi taawil …
Gham-e-furqat bhi hoga kam dheere dheere
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8th December 2009, 12:47 AM
lo aane lagi hai sada dheere dheere
wo hone lage hain fida dheere dheere
hmm thoda sa kamzor hai .... par chalega ...!!
khata hai ye meri pata hai ye mujhko
banegi wo meri qaza dheere dheere
bahut achy .....
nice one
bula kar mujhay mere kaano mai usne
tumhari hu.n mai ye, kaha dheere dheere
khyaal bahut sundar hia
gira kar ke zulfo.n ko kaandhay pe poocha
hai kaisi ye shub, tu bata dheere dheere
pahle sa hi sundar khyaal
abhi to mere, rang mai rangne lage hai.n
wo daalenge apni qaba dheere dheere
thoda sa uljha laga ... dalenge qaba..... chhodenge qabaa hota to ... jayda cha lagta ...
apni qabaa chhod ke mera rang pahnenge woh ..
samajhne lagenge isharo.n ka matlab
to aane lagegi haya dheere dheere
nice one .... very nice
younhi roothne mai manaane mai humko
kabhi tou aayega maza dheere dheere
kabhi to..... hmm ye cha nahi laga future ki bata na karke present ki karte to jayda acha lagta
acha flow hai
nice one liked
bhool-chook maaf
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[quote=zainy;375885]Abhi kamsin ho zamaane se zaraa sambhal kar, dhiire dhiire,
Kaleja muh ko aata hai na chalo yuuN machal kar, dhiire dhiire.
brillient ... aakhi zamen aur zubaan achi hai ... shayeri karne se pahle aapne shayri ko pakka zaroor kiya hai
Is masuumiyat ke sadqe jab wo kehta hai "maaruNgii haaN"
Ek makhmali chhuuan ki khatir kahe par amal kar dhiire dhiire.
katl.............. lambi bahar hai magar lafz toota nahi na hi khyaal..
maarungi haan ka expression ..... aap khyaal aur bahar dono ke sath talemel acha karte hai...
Saraapa sang-e-marmar ka manzar hai uska alha.D shabab,
Dar hai na gir jaauN apne imaan se kahi fisal kar, dhiire dhiire.
mhm lamba sa khinch gaya ....
Band kamre meiN le rahe gehri saaNse hum ishq se mehrum,
Abhi gayaa hai wo sandalii jism yahaaN se nikal kar dhiire dhiire.
hmmm
Dhuley bhiigey chehre par laam ke manind chipke gesu uske,
Falaq ka helaal utar aaya jyuN peyshaani par chal kar dhiire dhiire.
vere creative ,,,,,, yun laga jaise mussbir rahe ho shayer se pahle
(Laam=alphabet in Arabic/Urdu like reverse 6. Helaal=crescent moon, peyshaani=forehead)
Bekhayaali meiN bhi naa chhuuna mujhey ai maasuum sholay,
KahiiN jhalak na jaaye hasrateN aaNkhoN se ubal kar dhiire dhiire.
again nice one
SardiyoN ki dhuup meiN, chat pe bhiige baaloN ko jhatakti wo,
Niiche kha.De mere chehre pe gire sholay pighal kar dhiire dhiire.
nice
Khizaa meiN bhi bahaar chaa gaii, khushnumaa hui rut har suu,
Abhi dikha wo jharoke meiN, abhi nikla huuN behal kar dhiire
nice one
mujeh lagta hai badi bahar ne khyaalo ko kam sundar kar diya
fir bhi achy lage khyaal
haan jaise ki mai agar aapko sahi pahchaan raha hun to
aapke hisaab se ye waisi nahi .... "lekin agar aap wahi hain to"
woh nahi hai to honsle ki daad deta hun ....
bhool-choook maaf
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8th December 2009, 12:58 AM
Inn sun-saaN vadiyoN ki sisak sun to zara...
kar raha hai tujhe ro ro koi, be-hijaab dheere dheere
wah acha kaha aapne
Tere ishq me hai wafadaari ka yeh kaisa silla...?
Ke sulag raha hooN main, be-hisaab dheere dheere...!
hmmm shikbaa jayaj hai janaab
Mere ashqoN ki keemat to kuch bhi na hai...
AankhoN se chal, hote haiN hoNtoN tak, Sharaab dheere dheere...
khayal acha hai doosra misra aur refine kare to aur maja ayaga
Samandar hai chup, iss bharam me na rehna...!
Le raha hai meri palkoN ka ye, sailaab dheere dheere...!
jabardast ...... pahla misra to sateek hai .....
aur bhi kamaal
repss iske liye de nahi panunga lekin
ye pyaar wale reps hai ..
Rahe-ulfat meiN girna, hai diloN ka muqaddar...
Mujhe girke uth'ta dekhiye, aali-janaab dheere dheere...!
hmm acha hai
Mudda aNka hai aaj bhi, 'Ghalib' ki shokhi-e-tehreer ka...!
Ghazal tujhko bhi aayegi, 'e 'mast' taab dheere dheere...!
aah aise sher mujhe aksar achy lagte hai aur aapne nibhayee bhi bahut khoob hai
bhool-chook aap bhi kare maaf
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Aaj mujhe koi yaad Aayaa dheere dheere
Aaine ne chehra Dikhaayaa dheere dheere...
hmmm
Uska tasawwur ankhoN mein der tak raha
Dil ko phir bahut Samjhaayaa dheere dheere...
bahut behtar ..........
aaj bhi dil ne ik tamanna ki
aaj fir humne dil ko samjhaya
Rakh ke faasla Jab woh Yaha se chale gaye
Us pal ko humne Bhoolaayaa dheere dheere...
hmm acha hai chalega ....
Kal shab koi khawab chat per bhool aayaa
Jami yaadon ki aoss ko sukhaayaa dheere dheere...
acha hai
Ankhon se jhalakte taare mujhse puch rahe hai
Ashq palko mai Kyon chhupaayaa dheere dheere...
nice one achi koshish hia bahyee
Khushi-khushi ruswaai ka Zeher pee liya humne
Umar bhar yeh dard dil mai Dabaayaa dheere dheere...
wah ji daad
Yaha ulfat ka dastoor ajeeb dekha humne
Jinhe chaaha ussne door hataayaa dheere dheere...
ha ha
dhere dhere
kambhakt halaal ishq mai bhi chal pada hai ab
Jinhe paane ke liye chhod di saari duniyaa
Aane ka unhone intezaar karaayaa dheere dheere..
acha hai
dhere dhere kafiye ko asaan kar diya hia aapne ...
likhte rahe
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8th December 2009, 01:06 AM
dikhayegi rang ashiki dheere dheere
khalegi hamaari kami dheere dheere
acha hai
hai chaane lagi bekasi is qadar ab
Ke tang aa gaya aadmi dheere dheere
waah waaaahhhhhh
maien abhi tak jitni ghazal padhi hai usme bas ishq dard hi tha
ab kuch naya pan aaya hai .....
ghazal ko sahi mayne mai laye ho janaab
pyaar ke 3 reps aapko pradaan kiye jate hain
gaye kya vo daman chuda berukhi se
Teharne lagi zindagi dheere dheere
nice one
falak bos siyaa(h) dhuaa kah raha hai
jali hai kahi jhopdi dheere dheere
nice one .... bahut achy
yakeenan mile hai kahi do kinaare
badalne lagi rukh nadi dheere dheere
bahut badhiyaa ..... kafi himamat wale hai aap
jaraasa nighahe jo badli unhone
sabhi ho gaye ajnabi dheere dheere
hmm nice one
mere dil me kya kya sitam dhaa rahi hai
sitamgar teri khamshi dheere dheere[/quote]
ye sher mai kuch kam sa hai.... pata nahi kyaa ..
fir bhi aapne bahut naya likha
ek sher doosre se kuch an kuch alag tha ...
ye mujehs abse jayda pasand hai
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8th December 2009, 01:08 AM
[quote=zainy;375887]mohabbat ka hua yeh anjaam dheere dheere
sar bewafaa ka lagaa ilzaam dheere dheere
aapka matla sabse khaas laga ........
mashhur hai woh raah-e-ulfat mein karke daga
hum wafaa karke hue badnaam dheere dheere
achi girah hia ..... bahut acha kaha hai
apne hi ashqon ke taabish mein jal rahe hai
bana zaher mere liye har jaam dheere dheere
nice one again
kho mat jana in sinduri fizaaon mein kahi
kali raat ban jati hai har shaam dheere dheere
ahaa
bahut achy bahut achy
reps 2 pyaar wale
sitaaren ban kar chamakte nahi tah-umr koi
khakh mein milta hai har naam dheere dheere
reps 3 pyaar wale
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8th December 2009, 01:13 AM
Chala huN maiN, chale ho tum dheere dheere…
Nazar bhi hogi yuN hi, nam dheere dheere…
aapka bhi matla sundar hia
Diwaane gar hai tanhai ke dono hum..
Hoga mehsoos dard-o-gham Dheere dheere…
bahut achy ... kasa huaa khayal hai ... bahut behtar
reps 3
Adhoora ishq tera tohfa mujh ko..
Khushi se jaa mila, maatam dheere dheere…
ahaa
khushi se ja mila matam dhere dhere
aapne redeef ki sahi mayne diya hai ...
reps 3
Thehar kar jaam hoNtoN se lagaana tum..
Chadega sar nasha, jaanam dheere dheere…
khush khaas nahi
Kahaani phir koi le maud mushkil saa,..
jidhar ye nikle mera dam dheere dheere
mhm acha sher hai daad
Nahi ghamgeeN, gar hai zindagi taawil …
Gham-e-furqat bhi hoga kam dheere dheere
ye kuch uljha sa laga
main hi nahi samjh paya hun shyaed
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8th December 2009, 01:14 AM
vote kise dun mushkil mai hun
isliye abhi vote ke sarvadhikaar surkhsit rakha hun
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10th December 2009, 07:56 PM
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Abhi kamsin ho zamaane se zaraa sambhal kar, dhiire dhiire,
Kaleja muh ko aata hai na chalo yuuN machal kar, dhiire dhiire.
Is masuumiyat ke sadqe jab wo kehta hai "maaruNgii haaN"
Ek makhmali chhuuan ki khatir kahe par amal kar dhiire dhiire.
Saraapa sang-e-marmar ka manzar hai uska alha.D shabab,
Dar hai na gir jaauN apne imaan se kahi fisal kar, dhiire dhiire.
Band kamre meiN le rahe gehri saaNse hum ishq se mehrum,
Abhi gayaa hai wo sandalii jism yahaaN se nikal kar dhiire dhiire.
Dhuley bhiigey chehre par laam ke manind chipke gesu uske,
Falaq ka helaal utar aaya jyuN peyshaani par chal kar dhiire dhiire.
(Laam=alphabet in Arabic/Urdu like reverse 6. Helaal=crescent moon, peyshaani=forehead)
Bekhayaali meiN bhi naa chhuuna mujhey ai maasuum sholay,
KahiiN jhalak na jaaye hasrateN aaNkhoN se ubal kar dhiire dhiire.
SardiyoN ki dhuup meiN, chat pe bhiige baaloN ko jhatakti wo,
Niiche kha.De mere chehre pe gire sholay pighal kar dhiire dhiire.
Khizaa meiN bhi bahaar chaa gaii, khushnumaa hui rut har suu,
Abhi dikha wo jharoke meiN, abhi nikla huuN behal kar dhiire dhiire
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Beautiful. Excellent. No need for CGI, it creates the imagery right in front of you. Haven't read such a description of beauty since very long time.
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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10th December 2009, 09:52 PM
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Beautiful. Excellent. No need for CGI, it creates the imagery right in front of you. Haven't read such a description of beauty since very long time.
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Oh Mayoos sahab aapko yahan dekhaker badi khushi huyi....... Agle month aap bhi perticipet karna zarur......... yeh meri guzarish hai aapse.........
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11th December 2009, 09:05 PM
Kyon meraa kachraa karwaane par tule ho. Upar ghazalon ki quality dekhee hai maine, sab ek se badhkar ek hain.
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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Kyon meraa kachraa karwaane par tule ho. Upar ghazalon ki quality dekhee hai maine, sab ek se badhkar ek hain.
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Mayoos shaab khud ko kam tolker aap ne mujhe sharminda kar diyaa...... Think positive be positive............ Haan mana ke aap bher mein nahi likhenge aur yahan kitni gazalen bher mein hia yeh bhi main janta hun...... Then aap kyun participet nahi karna chahte.....
Zarur participet karna next month, it's not only request, It's my order too......
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14th December 2009, 12:25 PM
My Vote goes to this "awesome composition" :-
dikhayegi rang ashiki dheere dheere
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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14th December 2009, 03:57 PM
sabhi ne bahut accha likha hai........... behad khubsurat............ all the best to all................
yeh gazhal padke bahut hi accha laga......... behad umda jazbaat, behtareen
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Originally Posted by zainy
Aaj mujhe koi yaad Aayaa dheere dheere
Aaine ne chehra Dikhaayaa dheere dheere...
Uska tasawwur ankhoN mein der tak raha
Dil ko phir bahut Samjhaayaa dheere dheere...
Rakh ke faasla Jab woh Yaha se chale gaye
Us pal ko humne Bhoolaayaa dheere dheere...
Kal shab koi khawab chat per bhool aayaa
Jami yaadon ki aoss ko sukhaayaa dheere dheere...
Ankhon se jhalakte taare mujhse puch rahe hai
Ashq palko mai Kyon chhupaayaa dheere dheere...
Khushi-khushi ruswaai ka Zeher pee liya humne
Umar bhar yeh dard dil mai Dabaayaa dheere dheere...
Yaha ulfat ka dastoor ajeeb dekha humne
Jinhe chaaha ussne door hataayaa dheere dheere...
Jinhe paane ke liye chhod di saari duniyaa
Aane ka unhone intezaar karaayaa dheere dheere...
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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Aapki dost
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14th December 2009, 04:31 PM
Gtm per is baar kafi acchi voting huyi hai....dekhkar bohat khushi ho rahi hai.................
sabhi contestants aur baqi members jinhoney abhi tak voting nahi ki hai, meri un sab se guzarish hai ke woh bhi jald se jald apna vote dein....
shukriyaH.................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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14th December 2009, 08:03 PM
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Originally Posted by kwahish
Mayoos shaab khud ko kam tolker aap ne mujhe sharminda kar diyaa...... Think positive be positive............ Haan mana ke aap bher mein nahi likhenge aur yahan kitni gazalen bher mein hia yeh bhi main janta hun...... Then aap kyun participet nahi karna chahte.....
Zarur participet karna next month, it's not only request, It's my order too......
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jab mazaak hi banna hai to comedy like doonga
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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14th December 2009, 11:42 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
Chala huN maiN, chale ho tum dheere dheere…
Nazar bhi hogi yuN hi, nam dheere dheere…
Diwaane gar hai tanhai ke dono hum..
Hoga mehsoos dard-o-gham Dheere dheere…
Adhoora ishq tera tohfa mujh ko..
Khushi se jaa mila, maatam dheere dheere…
Thehar kar jaam hoNtoN se lagaana tum..
Chadega sar nasha, jaanam dheere dheere…
Kahaani phir koi le maud mushkil saa,..
jidhar ye nikle mera dam dheere dheere
Nahi ghamgeeN, gar hai zindagi taawil …
Gham-e-furqat bhi hoga kam dheere dheere
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awesome , fantastic
you are the best boss
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18th December 2009, 10:29 AM
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Originally Posted by janumanu
Inn sun-saaN vadiyoN ki sisak sun to zara...
kar raha hai tujhe ro ro koi, be-hijaab dheere dheere
wah acha kaha aapne
Tere ishq me hai wafadaari ka yeh kaisa silla...?
Ke sulag raha hooN main, be-hisaab dheere dheere...!
hmmm shikbaa jayaj hai janaab
Mere ashqoN ki keemat to kuch bhi na hai...
AankhoN se chal, hote haiN hoNtoN tak, Sharaab dheere dheere...
khayal acha hai doosra misra aur refine kare to aur maja ayaga
Samandar hai chup, iss bharam me na rehna...!
Le raha hai meri palkoN ka ye, sailaab dheere dheere...!
jabardast ...... pahla misra to sateek hai .....
aur bhi kamaal
repss iske liye de nahi panunga lekin
ye pyaar wale reps hai ..
Rahe-ulfat meiN girna, hai diloN ka muqaddar...
Mujhe girke uth'ta dekhiye, aali-janaab dheere dheere...!
hmm acha hai
Mudda aNka hai aaj bhi, 'Ghalib' ki shokhi-e-tehreer ka...!
Ghazal tujhko bhi aayegi, 'e 'mast' taab dheere dheere...!
aah aise sher mujhe aksar achy lagte hai aur aapne nibhayee bhi bahut khoob hai
bhool-chook aap bhi kare maaf
Janumanu
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Janumanu bhai,
bahut bahut shukriya.......aapke reps mile bhi aur ab wo dil ke andar band kar liye haiN...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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21st December 2009, 11:56 AM
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Originally Posted by nalinmehra
sabhi ne bahut accha likha hai........... behad khubsurat............ all the best to all................
yeh gazhal padke bahut hi accha laga......... behad umda jazbaat, behtareen
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Nalin Ji....aapka meri koshish ko sarahane aur ijazat afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya....aainda bhi aap aise hi saath dete rahenge....khush rahiye....
apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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