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tere hi bas mein -
31st May 2006, 10:26 PM
Aaj khud ko teri nazar se maine dekha hai........
apne husan ko aur sawarte maine dekha hai........ dekha hai aaj khud ko tere har khayal mein........ tere har sawal mein, tere har jawab mein........ aur khud ko teri nazm ke shabado mein dhalte dekha hai...... sach toh yeh hai ki maine aaj khud ko teri nazm bante dekha hai........ dekha hai khud ko tere pyar ke har rang mein..... jab bhi teri nazar se......... apni duniya ko maine inder-dhanush sa hote dekha hai..... teri gandho se, tere saparsho se,aur teri jhankaro se....... apne astitave ko bas tere hi bas mein maine dekha hai.................... |
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1st June 2006, 06:12 PM
Aaj khud ko teri nazar se maine dekha hai........
apne husan ko aur sawarte maine dekha hai........ dekha hai aaj khud ko tere har khayal mein........ tere har sawal mein, tere har jawab mein........ aur khud ko teri nazm ke shabado mein dhalte dekha hai...... sach toh yeh hai ki maine aaj khud ko teri nazm bante dekha hai........ dekha hai khud ko tere pyar ke har rang mein..... jab bhi teri nazar se......... apni duniya ko maine inder-dhanush sa hote dekha hai..... teri gandho se, tere saparsho se,aur teri jhankaro se....... apne astitave ko bas tere hi bas mein maine dekha hai.................... good one Ranjuji with regards ilesh |
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2nd June 2006, 10:35 AM
dear ranjana ji kalaam to masha allah bahot hi pyara hai.aur sach me thinking ki bhi daad deni padegi.sach me bahot acha hai .do keep writing.
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2nd June 2006, 03:00 PM
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ranjana jee i hv no words beside to say good... itne simple words me aapne bahut si baate kah di... apne dil ko ujagar kar diya mano. keep writing. regds, ARUN ====================================== Dil naa-umid to nahi, nakaam hi to hai. lambi hai gam ki shaam, magar yeh shaam hi to hai. ======================================= |
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Re: tere hi bas mein -
2nd June 2006, 04:13 PM
achhaaa likhaaa hai aapne :-)
U for ullas or ullas for U. with bepanah muhhabbat(the word itself contains ...THE WORLD!) |
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Re: tere hi bas mein -
2nd June 2006, 04:55 PM
"Aaj khud ko teri nazar se maine dekha hai........
apne husan ko aur sawarte maine dekha hai......" Wah....ye khayal kisi umda shayar k khayal se kam nahi Pyaar bhara bhara aagaz "dekha hai aaj khud ko tere har khayal mein........ tere har sawal mein, tere har jawab mein........ aur khud ko teri nazm ke shabado mein dhalte dekha hai...... sach toh yeh hai ki maine aaj khud ko teri nazm bante dekha hai........ " Sach mein bohat romantic hai MAa pyaar hi pyaar jhalakta hai  "teri gandho se, tere saparsho se,aur teri jhankaro se....... apne astitave ko bas tere hi bas mein maine dekha " Sabse pyari line ye hai ish poori rachna ki...behad khoobsurat Pata tha mera mood theek ho jayega bohat acha laga aapke ehsaasat padhkar jaladi aaiyega kuch naya lekar APka Beta Diggaj Quote:
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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3rd June 2006, 05:09 PM
ranjana ji,bahut khoob.bahut acha likha aapne,apne aap ko apne aashiq ki nazar se dekhne ka khayaal bahut ache se express kiyahai aapne
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har lamha pas bulaya hai tujhe, |
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har lamha pas bulaya hai tujhe, -
4th June 2006, 02:26 AM
baharon main ghataon main tujhay mehsos kiya,
jevan ki rahoon main tujhay mehsos kiya, meri sanson main rahey terey khayal se halchal, dil ki panahon main tumhay mehsos kiya, khushbo hi khushbo bikhar gai har sooo, main nay in hawaon main tujhay mehsos kiya, din kay ujalon main tujhay mehsos kiya, raat ki bahon main tujhay mehsos kiya, neend roth gai us raat mujh se, jis raat main nay tujhay mehsos kiya, chand bhi mujh par rashk karta hai, main nay jis main tujhay mehsos kiya, har lamha pas bulaya hai tujhay, tujh main kho kar tujhay mehsos kiya. saif |
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Re: har lamha pas bulaya hai tujhe, -
4th June 2006, 04:49 PM
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Bohat Khub saif saab -
4th June 2006, 11:27 PM
bohat achi soch hai saif saab, eik eik word ka pechay bohat kuch words chupay huway thay ,
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5th June 2006, 12:19 AM
janab khuram sahab & ranju jii , tariif k liye bahoot bahoot shukriya, waise hum shayer toh nahi hai, bas shayri ka shauk rakhte hai , aur kuch shayri aur gazal humare pass hai, joh hum aap ko bhej rahe hai , waise is group mein sabhi achche shayer hai aur is group k bahoot so shayeroon ki shayri & gazal humne padi hai sabi achcha likhte hai. hum kuch bhejna chahenge omid hai aap sabhi log pasand karenge
teri chah main had say guzar jaonga ek din piyar hota hai kia yeh dikhaon ga ek din teri sang dili ko sehtay sehtay main jaan say apni guzar jaon ga ek din apni sari chahtain tujh pay war kay pyaar karna tujhay bhee sikhaon ga ak din jee na payenga tu bhee ho kay juda mujh say aisa pyaar tujh say kar jaon ga ek din andhairon main hi dhoondhta reh jayenga mujh ko aisi bay rukhi dikhlaon ga ek din kho kay mujh ko pachtao gay bohat sanam tum wafa aisi tum say kar jaon ga ek din aisi deewangi say chahonga tujhey bhool jaongay tum bhee sara jahan ek din jaan teri bhee labon pay aa jay ga ban kay khak jab matti main mil jaon ga ek din |
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5th June 2006, 08:27 AM
kho kay mujh ko pachtao gay bohat sanam tum
wafa aisi tum say kar jaon ga ek din aisi deewangi say chahonga tujhey bhool jaongay tum bhee sara jahan ek din jaan teri bhee labon pay aa jay ga ban kay khak jab matti main mil jaon ga ek din nice .......beautiful............. tera yeh diwanapan mujhko bhi diwana bana dega ek din tere lafazo mein hai jo wafa ki kushbu........... woh mere chaman ko bhi meheka degi ek din...... hain labon per thahari hui si baate hain bahut....... woh sab aake sunanai hai tujhko............ khuda se bas yahi dua hai meri...... woh mujhko tujhse mila de ek din................ aapke jaisa toh nahi likh sakte hum......per jo dil mein aaya aapke in khubsurat lafazo ko pad ke woh likh diya...............kuch galat lage toh jarur bataye......accha lagega hame........ |
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reply:-kuch galat lage toh jarur bataye |
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reply:-kuch galat lage toh jarur bataye -
5th June 2006, 11:25 PM
ranju jii bahoot khub, bahoot achcha likha hai aap ne kya baat hai daad kabool kijiye
hain labon per thahari hui si baate hain bahut....... woh sab aake sunanai hai tujhko............ khuda se bas yahi dua hai meri...... woh mujhko tujhse mila de ek din................ ranju jii humne likha hai k hum shayer toh nahi hai per kuch achchi ghazal aur shayri humare pass hai joh aap sabo ko hum bhej rahe hai , arz hai Har lamha teree yaad kee khushbuu hai meray pass main is shehar main tanha hoon magar tuu hai meray pass jis shakhs ko chahoon teree suurat main badal doon yeh husan e tasawar hai kay jaduu hai meray pass rakhata hai sada jo meree raton ko munawar woh terey badan ka gul e khushbuu hai meray pass kia mujhko pasand ayengain is shehar kay naghmey tuu hai meree koyal teree kuukuu hai meray pass kia thamoon ga main jana kisee aur kee bahain pehnay huye kangan terey bazuu hain meray pass jab chahay qateel uskay najar tak mujhey lay jaye sochon k chamakta huwa jugnoo hai meray pass |
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6th June 2006, 01:33 AM
bara hosla hai aap ka saab, warna aj kal ka khudgarz zamanay mein tou log adhay raasty say he wapis aa jaty hein ...khair kuch ashaar aap ke nazer
kahien tum apni qismat ka likha tabdeel kar letay, to shyed hum bhe apna rastaa tabdeel kar letay, agar hum waqaee kam hosla hoty mohabat mein, marz barhnay say pehaly dawa dabdeel kar lety, tumhari tarha jeenay ka hunar aata to phir shyed, makaan apna wohi rakhtay pata dabdeel kar lety bohat dhundla gia yaadoun ke jhilmil mein dil-e- sada woh mil jata to hum yeah ayna tabdeel kar lety.... |
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6th June 2006, 02:33 AM
sachi baat hai ki kuch log beech raah akela ker ke chale jaate hain aj ke is zamaane me koi dil se ager kisi ko chahta hai to usko uske pyaar ka sila nahi milta sache pyaar ki ehmiyet uske jaane ke baad he pata chalti hai aur tab tek bohat dair ho jati hai sacha pyar sirf ek dafa dastak deta hai hai per khudgarzi me us pyaar ko ehmiyet aur izzet dena hum bhul jata hai aur sirf gham aur aansu reh jaate hain
janab kaif sahab, kuch aur ghazlein zuroor post keriyega meherabaaN hoke bula lo mujhe chaaho jis waqt maiN gaya waqt naheeN hooN ke fir aa bhee na sakooN zauf meiN taana-e-aGHayaar ka shikawa kya hai ? baat kuchch sar to naheeN hai ke uTha bhee na sakooN zehar milta hee naheeN mujhko sitamgar, warana kya qasam hai tere milne kee, ke kha bhee na sakooN |
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6th June 2006, 04:42 AM
salam khuram sahab & azra jii , khuram sahab bahoot hi khub likha hi aap ne
agar hum waqaee kam hosla hoty mohabat mein, marz barhnay say pehaly dawa dabdeel kar lety, tumhari tarha jeenay ka hunar aata to phir shyed, makaan apna wohi rakhtay pata dabdeel kar lety bhoot khub daad kabool kijiye aur azra jii kya baat hai , aise hi likhte raheye zehar milta hee naheeN mujhko sitamgar, warana kya qasam hai tere milne kee, ke kha bhee na sakooN aur azra jii aab baat rahi bech rah mein chordh jane ki toh hum itna hi kahenge k kuch log pyaar ko pyaar samajte hai aur kuch log pyaar ko majak joh bech rah mein chordh jatey shayad woh pyaar nahi karte yah fir os ki apni koi majboori arz hai Zindagi Main Meri Yeh Ajab Mour Hai Aya Who Shaks Bhi Kho Gaya Jisey Tha Mudaton Main Paya Uss Ka Masoom Sa Chera Meri Nigahon Ko Bhaya Iss Pasandeedgi Ney To Isqh Ka Hai Rogg Lagwaya Kabhi Jo Hasney Hasaney Ki Baat Kerta Tha Mujh Sey Aaj us Ki Narazgi Ney Mujhey Betahasha Rulaya Woo Na Mana To Pal Mein Bikher Jaon gi Main Dil Hota Hai Woh, Ghar Jo Ujjra To Kissi Ney Na Basaya Uss Ki Udassi Per Dil Ko Na Kyun Udaas Karoon Jee Ney Merey Bhi To Hai Ussey Shidat Sey Chaha Is Qader Aadat Hogaee Hai Mujhey Us Ki Kano Main Ahat Ati Hai, Nazar Ata Hai Dewaar Per Saya Khiyalon Main Tazaad Baton Main Khafgi Agaee Hai Darr Lagta Hai Mann Ko, Kahin Woo Ho Jaey Na Paraya Samney Labb Uss Key Khamosh Hojatey Hairani Key Warna Tasawur Mein Tha Main Ney Usey Khub Manaya |
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6th June 2006, 09:15 AM
sabne bahut sundar likha ......kaif .Azra and khurram ji aap sabka bahut bahut shukriya...................
tujse bichar ke mera vajood kahan hai tu hai jahan mera wahi ashyiaan hai ....... tujhse bichar ke kaise rah saknage hum tum hi meri jindagi tu hi meri jaan hai paaya hai tujhko maine apni duao se tu hi ab meri jameen aur aasman hai dekhenge tera tasvur ko hum apne kahwabo mein tujhe alag ho ke na hum hai na mera koi nishaan hai... ranju ki kalam se ek chotti si koshish.................. |
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pyar me ruthna aur manana ek khubsuret ehsaas hota hai -
6th June 2006, 04:01 PM
Woo Na Mana To Pal Mein Bikher Jaon gi Main
Dil Hota Hai Woh, Ghar Jo Ujjra To Kissi Ney Na Basaya Uss Ki Udassi Per Dil Ko Na Kyun Udaas Karoon Jee Ney Merey Bhi To Hai Ussey Shidat Sey Chaha --------------------------------------------------------------------- bohat khoob kaif sahab ! jo sacha pyaar kerte hain woh apne ruthe hue pyaar ko manaane ki her mumkin koshish kerte hain pyaar mein ruthna aur manaana yeh ek khubsuret ehsaas hai kisi ki udaasi per khud udaas ho jaana aisa he yeh pyaar hota hai Arz Kiya Hai- pyaar ke raaste mein bahot mushkilien hain is mohabbat ke kal mein bahot takleefein hain hamari kismat ke kal mein hain sirf dooriyan kal humko rokegengi bahot si majbooriyan aaj shayad hum ek saath hain haryali mein par kal hum juda rahenge virani mein jazbaat damm tod dega ehsaas se pehle aur hum juda ho jayeinge milne se pehle..... !!! |
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6th June 2006, 11:45 PM
ranju jii & Azra jii tariif k liye shukriya , aur haan azra ji joh saccha pyaar karte hai woh apne ruthe hue pyaar ko mana hi lehte hai
ranju jii aur azra ji aap ne bahoot khub likha hai aur azra jii aap sacha pyaar karne wale ko kuch is tara bhi mana sakhte hai arz hai Main Mohabbat hoon Mohabbat karke dekh Main Mohabbat na doon to kehna Main Muskurahat hoon mujhe hansa ker dekh Na sajoon tere honton per to kehna Main Khushboo hoon mujhe mehsoos karke dekh Na mehkoon teri zindagi main to kehna Main Dil hoon mujhe soon ker dekh Na Dharkoon tere Dil main to kehna Main Phool hoon mujhe laga ker dekh Na mehkoon din raat to kehna Main Mohabbat hoon mujhe apna karke dekh Na banoo main teriiiiiiii to kehna |
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8th June 2006, 08:38 AM
nice one...............
thanks for sharing............ jabaat ho ya halat ho dhalte samaye mein nikhar jaayenge bahaoo.n mein hum ko bhar lo sanam jajabo se bhare hain bikhar jaayenge main toh sitaro mein uljhi nahi hun na hi hai aasman per meri nazar jameen per hai mere kadam ba kadam ghabarte hai kya hum kidhar jaayenge bahaao.n mein hum ko bhar lo sanam hum yuh hi bikhar jaaynge..........n/m |
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bahut khoobsoorat -
8th June 2006, 09:49 AM
tumahre khayal tumahre shabd sab bahut khoobsoorat hai. zindgee main tumahre geet aise hee asmano ko chhote rahen yahee kamana hai meree
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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