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najaney kyun -
5th June 2006, 04:26 AM
Najaney Kyun
Najaney Kyun Dil Laga Letey Hain Laug Khud ko yuun hi saza detey hain laug . . Jab koi pass ho to kadar nahin kartey Door koi chala jaey to sada detey hain laug.. Jabb mill jaey safar main naya hum-safar koi Per kyun purani rafaqat ko bhula detey hain laug Gham bhi detey hain or kehtey hain bhool jao Humari chahat ka yeh sila detey hain log .. |
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5th June 2006, 08:18 AM
wah!! kya baat hai ...bahut khub Kaif ji..............sach aur sundar likha aapne...........
Jab koi pass ho to kadar nahin kartey Door koi chala jaey to sada detey hain laug.. Jabb mill jaey safar main naya hum-safar koi Per kyun purani rafaqat ko bhula detey hain laug beautiful ........... ranju |
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reply:-najaney kyun |
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reply:-najaney kyun -
6th June 2006, 02:07 AM
Tariif k liye shukriya ranju jii
arz hai Ab Na Hogi Wo Subah Na Us Sham Ka Aana Hoga, Ab Na In Rahon Pe Woh Dost purana hoga. Ab na Mehkegi Hawa na Chalegi Ghata, Ab Na Sawan Ki Us Barish main Nahana Hoga. Shamm Hote Hi Sitare Jo TimTimate The, Ab Na Unka Koi falak pe Thikana Hoga. Ab Na Aayegi bahar Aur na Mehkegi kali, Na kisi Phool ka Kanto se yarana Hoga. Ab Na Ruthega koi Na ManayeGa use, na kisi baat pe koi Bahana Hoga. |
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6th June 2006, 09:05 AM
bahut khub Kaif ji..................
hum unhi raho per karnge sadke jahan se teri raha gujar hogi ........... wahi rangeen hogi meri subhe jahan shaam teri basar hogi.............. palake meri wahi tham ke re jayangi sanam jahan per thahri hui teri bas ek jhalak hogi ruth jaaye toh humko mana lena sanam teri aarzu hi ab meri justju hogi........................... yeh hai kuch lines ranju ki kalam se ...kaisi lagi aapko batana .......  |
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7th June 2006, 01:12 AM
bahoot khub ranju jii aap bhi kamal ka likhte hai
palake meri wahi tham ke re jayangi sanam jahan per thahri hui teri bas ek jhalak hogi ruth jaaye toh humko mana lena sanam teri aarzu hi ab meri justju hogi bahoot khub ranju jii arz hai Apna dil paish karoon, apni wafa paish karoon Kuch samajh main nahi ata , tujhe kya paish karoon Terey milney ki khoshi main koi naghma chairoon Ya terey dard-e-judai ka gilla paish karoon Merey khwaboon main bhi tu, merey khayaloon main bhi tu Konsi cheez tujhe, tujh se juda paish karoon Jo terey dil ko lubha lay, woh adaa mujh main nahi Kyun na tujh ko koi teri hii adaa paish karoon |
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7th June 2006, 11:49 AM
bahut khoob kaif
main bhi is soch me hun tujhko main kya pesh karun dil o jaan tere hain pehle se ki khyalon me tu hai mere ujde hue veerane ki ek bahar hai tu soch hai tujh se judi sari khushi tujh se hai dhoondati hun koi ek cheez jo teri na ho dil se chahti hun ki main tujhko bhi kuchh pesh karun AISA HI KOI KHWAB HAMARA BHI KOI THA |
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gud one ! |
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gud one ! -
7th June 2006, 04:58 PM
very nice & lovely words. keep it up
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reply :-kya pesh karoo |
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reply :-kya pesh karoo -
7th June 2006, 07:07 PM
bahoot khub tabassum jii
main bhi is soch me hun tujhko main kya pesh karun dil o jaan tere hain pehle se ki khyalon me tu hai tabassum jii hum chahte hai k aap sirf aapni ghazaley pesh karein,bahoot hi achcha jawab likha hai aap ne arz hai teray hontoon pay saj jaon dua honay ko ji chahey mere duniya bhula ker bas tera honay ko ji chahey yun sab kay saamney athkaylian kerti hai yeh mujh say ke mera be-irada hi hawa honay ko ji chahey tu merey roothney per is tarah mujh ko manati hai kabhi to bay wajah tujh say khafa honey ko ji chahey kabhi tujh say milay bin zindagi be-kaar lagti hai kabhi tujh say bicharnay ko juda honay ko ji chahay |
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8th June 2006, 08:22 AM
bahut khub Kaif ji.........
kuch toh hai tere liye mere dil mein abhi bhi ek aag hai yeh ishaqe ki jo bujhi nahi hai abhi bhi mujhe yaad hai ek ek lafaj tere hontho se nikla hua kya tere dil main bhi hai mere liye daba hua payar abhi bhi woh ruthana mera woh manana tera fir mera maan jaana aur khud se ruth jaana tera mujhe yaad hai abhi bhi.............. jo rishta tujhe thaa joda usko kaise bhule woh chalakata hua teri aankho ka khumar mujhe yaad hai abhi bhi................. ranju koshish......... |
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WAH |
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8th June 2006, 09:57 AM
Jab koi pass ho to kadar nahin kartey
Door koi chala jaey to sada detey hain laug.. kaif jane kyon ye ek sachhayee see lagee jab kabhee khud ko tanha sa pata hoon aise alafz mujeh ajamate hain aisee baton ko main ajamata hoon jinhe kabhee mere siwa kcuh soojhta nahee tha mere siwa unhe ab fursat hee fursat hai dekhiye un ke dil se ab aur kahan jata hoon aise alafz mujeh ajamate hain aisee baton ko main ajamata hoon Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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9th June 2006, 05:11 PM
bahut khoob kaif ji,bahut acha likha aapne.likhte rahiye yunhin.
Jab koi pass ho to kadar nahin kartey Door koi chala jaey to sada detey hain laug.. bahut acha laga yeh sher. |
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10th June 2006, 03:02 AM
ranju jii , Anil sahab & akeli jaan bahoot bahoot shukriya aap sabo ka joh aap ne humari bheji hue najm ko pasand kiya hai
Anil sahab aap ne bhi bahoot khub likha hai , aap k likhe hue kalam ko padne k baad aisa lagta hai jaise koi dil per gaira jakam hoo jinhe kabhee mere siwa kcuh soojhta nahee tha mere siwa unhe ab fursat hee fursat hai dekhiye un ke dil se ab aur kahan jata hoon aise alafz mujeh ajamate hain aisee baton ko main ajamata hoon ranju ji aap ne bhi bahoot khub likha hai ,aur aap k likhe hue ghazal se bas pyaar hi pyaar jalakta hai kuch toh hai tere liye mere dil mein abhi bhi ek aag hai yeh ishaqe ki jo bujhi nahi hai abhi bhi arz hai chandni raat baaki hai bhi aur nahi bhi aankhon mein neend baaki hai bhi aur nahi bhi yeh jo ishq k jaam tu mujhe de rahe hai ismein tera pyar saaqi hai bhi aur nahi bhi jab se maine tumhe apnana socha hai mere ander bebaari hai bhi aur nahi bhi dunyia mein pyaar karne wale hai bahoot zindagi bar saat nibane wale hai bhi aur nahi bhi |
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