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Ghazal: kyun thehri hai dil ki dharkan dekh lun... - 30th July 2011, 07:09 PM
aadaab dosto,

aaj phir haazir hun iss mehfil mein ek nayi peshkash ke saath..jaisi lage waisi bataa denaa..warna khamoshi ke bhi kai matlab nikalte haiN..aapki raaey ka intezaar rahega

arz hai..

kyun thehri hai dil ki dharkan dekh lun
tere rukh se hata ke chilman dekh lun

naate sab nipta ke taiyaar hun baitha
tujhe pur-sukoon pur-aman dekh lun

tune kaha to dikhaai samjhdaari maine
dunyaa tera maiN paagalpan dekh lun

salaahaa saal bas yeh ehatimaam kiya
toofaan se pehle nasheman dekh lun

khwahishoeN ki baarish ruk jaaye toh
umeed se seencha chaman dekh lun

zindagi ki zindagi bhar daleeleiN suni
ab maut ke bhi daar-o-rasan dekh lun

kaash itna sabr ho mujh meiN maalik
tera har aik numaaish-e-fan dekh lun

kabhi agar khud ko be-kafan dekh lun
kya kya hai mujh meiN dafan dekh lun

kehne ko bahot keh chuke ho “Bismil”
chup raho toh baat ka wazan dekh lun

Pradhyuman - Bismil

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rukh = face
chilman = curtain
salaahaa saal = year after year
ehatimaam = planning
nasheman = nest
daar-o-rasan = scaffolding and a noose
numaaish-e-fan = talent show

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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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aadaab dosto,

aaj phir haazir hun iss mehfil mein ek nayi peshkash ke saath..jaisi lage waisi bataa denaa..warna khamoshi ke bhi kai matlab nikalte haiN..aapki raaey ka intezaar rahega

arz hai..

kyun thehri hai dil ki dharkan dekh lun
tere rukh se hata ke chilman dekh lun

naate sab nipta ke taiyaar hun baitha
tujhe pur-sukoon pur-aman dekh lun

tune kaha to dikhaai samjhdaari maine
dunyaa tera maiN paagalpan dekh lun

salaahaa saal bas yeh ehatimaam kiya
toofaan se pehle nasheman dekh lun

khwahishoeN ki baarish ruk jaaye toh
umeed se seencha chaman dekh lun

zindagi ki zindagi bhar daleeleiN suni
ab maut ke bhi daar-o-rasan dekh lun

kaash itna sabr ho mujh meiN maalik
tera har aik numaaish-e-fan dekh lun

kabhi agar khud ko be-kafan dekh lun
kya kya hai mujh meiN dafan dekh lun

kehne ko bahot keh chuke ho “Bismil”
chup raho toh baat ka wazan dekh lun

Pradhyuman - Bismil
waah pur-sukoon pur-asar kalaam Bismil saab... kya kahne aapke andaaze bayaan ke just awesome....Likhte rahen aur yoonhi mahfil ko nai jaan dete rahen.. shukriyaa..

shaad...

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30th July 2011, 08:15 PM
kabhi agar khud ko be-kafan dekh lun
kya kya hai mujh meiN dafan dekh lun

kehne ko bahot keh chuke ho “Bismil”
chup raho toh baat ka wazan dekh lun

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Tamaam Ghazal Ke Khayaalaat Bhi Asardaar Rahe ... !

Umdaa Sher Nikaal Ke Laaye HaiN ... Iss Baar .... !

Dil se DheroN Daad Qubuul FarmaaYeN ... !



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31st July 2011, 09:16 PM
Shaad bhai/ Naresh ji,

bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka ki aap logoeN ko mere ashaar pasand aate hain..aapki daad mujhe tahe dil se kubool hai..yunhi saath dete rahiyega..

aapka dost,
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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1st August 2011, 02:28 AM
Yeh sher pasand aaya....

khwahishoeN ki baarish ruk jaaye toh
umeed se seencha chaman dekh lun

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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1st August 2011, 09:27 AM
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aadaab dosto,

aaj phir haazir hun iss mehfil mein ek nayi peshkash ke saath..jaisi lage waisi bataa denaa..warna khamoshi ke bhi kai matlab nikalte haiN..aapki raaey ka intezaar rahega

arz hai..

kyun thehri hai dil ki dharkan dekh lun
tere rukh se hata ke chilman dekh lun

naate sab nipta ke taiyaar hun baitha
tujhe pur-sukoon pur-aman dekh lun

tune kaha to dikhaai samjhdaari maine
dunyaa tera maiN paagalpan dekh lun

salaahaa saal bas yeh ehatimaam kiya
toofaan se pehle nasheman dekh lun

khwahishoeN ki baarish ruk jaaye toh
umeed se seencha chaman dekh lun

zindagi ki zindagi bhar daleeleiN suni
ab maut ke bhi daar-o-rasan dekh lun

kaash itna sabr ho mujh meiN maalik
tera har aik numaaish-e-fan dekh lun

kabhi agar khud ko be-kafan dekh lun
kya kya hai mujh meiN dafan dekh lun

kehne ko bahot keh chuke ho “Bismil”
chup raho toh baat ka wazan dekh lun

Pradhyuman - Bismil

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rukh = face
chilman = curtain
salaahaa saal = year after year
ehatimaam = planning
nasheman = nest
daar-o-rasan = scaffolding and a noose
numaaish-e-fan = talent show
Bismil sahab

Sanjidgi ka naya muqam hai yeh nazm behad khoobi se pirooya hai ise...

daad qubool farmaaiYee

-aapka apna


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1st August 2011, 08:28 PM
Sajid bhai,

Sher pasand karne ke liye behad shukriyaa aapka...ab lekin sher ko sher nahi kahunga jab tak ki behr seekh na lun..yehi dilli khwahish hai..lagta hai zidd bhai ko phir pareshaan karna padega aur iss baar circle complete karunga

khush aur aabaad rahiye..god bless.

Mast sahaab,

kya aapka takhallus hamesh mast raha hai? aage bhi? kyunki aap kaafi time se SDC par hai aur yeh ho nahi sakta ki main aapko jaanta nahi theek se..

sir, aapki daad mujhe tahe dil se qubool hai.. aage bhi aapke saath ki umeed rahegi..

khush aur aabaad rahiye..god bless.

aapka dost,
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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salam - 8th August 2011, 02:51 AM
janab muhtraham praduman sahab kafi arse baad yahan se guzra apki ghazal pe nazar gai aur tareef k beghair raha nahi gaya janab in nacheez ki daad kabool farmaiye huzoor nihyaat umda kalaam pesh kia hai apne shukriya dost....

Chal parin hain kashtiyaan samandar dur hai kinaara.....
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara....

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8th August 2011, 01:33 PM
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aadaab dosto,

aaj phir haazir hun iss mehfil mein ek nayi peshkash ke saath..jaisi lage waisi bataa denaa..warna khamoshi ke bhi kai matlab nikalte haiN..aapki raaey ka intezaar rahega

arz hai..

kyun thehri hai dil ki dharkan dekh lun
tere rukh se hata ke chilman dekh lun

naate sab nipta ke taiyaar hun baitha
tujhe pur-sukoon pur-aman dekh lun

tune kaha to dikhaai samjhdaari maine
dunyaa tera maiN paagalpan dekh lun

salaahaa saal bas yeh ehatimaam kiya
toofaan se pehle nasheman dekh lun

khwahishoeN ki baarish ruk jaaye toh
umeed se seencha chaman dekh lun

zindagi ki zindagi bhar daleeleiN suni
ab maut ke bhi daar-o-rasan dekh lun

kaash itna sabr ho mujh meiN maalik
tera har aik numaaish-e-fan dekh lun

kabhi agar khud ko be-kafan dekh lun
kya kya hai mujh meiN dafan dekh lun

kehne ko bahot keh chuke ho “Bismil”
chup raho toh baat ka wazan dekh lun

Pradhyuman - Bismil

--------------------------------------------------------------
rukh = face
chilman = curtain
salaahaa saal = year after year
ehatimaam = planning
nasheman = nest
daar-o-rasan = scaffolding and a noose
numaaish-e-fan = talent show
Ji Bhaut Sunder.................

khwahishoeN ki baarish ruk jaaye toh
umeed se seencha chaman dekh lun

zindagi ki zindagi bhar daleeleiN suni
ab maut ke bhi daar-o-rasan dekh lun

kaash itna sabr ho mujh meiN maalik
tera har aik numaaish-e-fan dekh lun

kabhi agar khud ko be-kafan dekh lun
kya kya hai mujh meiN dafan dekh lun

kehne ko bahot keh chuke ho “Bismil”
chup raho toh baat ka wazan dekh lun


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janab muhtraham praduman sahab kafi arse baad yahan se guzra apki ghazal pe nazar gai aur tareef k beghair raha nahi gaya janab in nacheez ki daad kabool farmaiye huzoor nihyaat umda kalaam pesh kia hai apne shukriya dost....
Salman bhai aadaab,

kaise hain aap? yeh to meri khushnaseebi hai ki aapko yeh mamooli si koshish pasand aayi..aapki daad dil se kubool hai..aage bhi aapke saath ki umeed rahegi..

god bless u..khush aur aabaad rahiye..

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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
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Ji Bhaut Sunder.................

khwahishoeN ki baarish ruk jaaye toh
umeed se seencha chaman dekh lun

zindagi ki zindagi bhar daleeleiN suni
ab maut ke bhi daar-o-rasan dekh lun

kaash itna sabr ho mujh meiN maalik
tera har aik numaaish-e-fan dekh lun

kabhi agar khud ko be-kafan dekh lun
kya kya hai mujh meiN dafan dekh lun

kehne ko bahot keh chuke ho “Bismil”
chup raho toh baat ka wazan dekh lun
radhika ji shukriyaa dil se

god bless u...aapka dost,
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
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12th October 2011, 07:02 PM
I had read this long time back, did not comment at that time. But I have to admire this one


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kya kya hai mujh meiN dafan dekh lun

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21st October 2011, 11:33 PM
Thanks Ajnabi and mayoos. i wld be more dan happy to know that your kind of readers have read my composition..nd your appreciation means a lot to me..thanks once again..

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