this must has happen to you -
2nd August 2005, 01:34 AM
umar ki rah mai insan badal jata hai,
waqt ki andhi maitufan badal jata hai,
sochta hu tumse itna pyar na karu,
lekin tumhara khyal aate hi irada badal jata hai..................
Really nice buddy!
bahaut acacha likha hai tumne...sahi mai 4 lines sab dil ka haal kah gayi...uhin likhte raho hamesha...all teh best
keep Smiling
Palak
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Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai
Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai
Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar
Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai