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Cool Tishnagi – Krishan Aadib - 16th August 2009, 10:04 AM

Nasha unka sharab jaisa tha,
Rang unka gulab jaisa tha.

Hum bhi padte the Roz o Shab usko,
Chehra uska kitab jaisa tha.

Lab pe likhi thi tishnagi kis ne?
Sara manjar sharab jaisa tha.

Hum ne dekhe hai raat faqat ki,
Lamha lamha ajab jaisa tha.

Baad muddat k hum mill uss se,
Kul bisra jo khab jaisa tha,

Jism pani to ek sehra tha,
Faiz uska shab jaisa tha.


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16th August 2009, 01:28 PM

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Nasha unka sharab jaisa tha,
Rang unka gulab jaisa tha.

Hum bhi padte the Roz o Shab usko,
Chehra uska kitab jaisa tha.

Lab pe likhi thi tishnagi kis ne?
Sara manjar sharab jaisa tha.

Hum ne dekhe hai raat faqat ki,
Lamha lamha ajab jaisa tha.

Baad muddat k hum mill uss se,
Kul bisra jo khab jaisa tha,

Jism pani to ek sehra tha,
Faiz uska shab jaisa tha.
anil sahab........
kya kehne apke..........
bahut accha likha hai..........
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28th August 2009, 12:16 AM

Thanx, But Maine Tiitle Pe Likhne wale Ka naam Mention Kia Hai

Krishan Aadib


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