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senti - 17th September 2004, 11:22 PM

hoto par mohobat ke fasane nahin aaate
sahil par samander ke khazane aate
udne do parindo ko sokh hawa mein
fir lot ke bachpan ke zamane nahin aate

mat karo koi vada jise nibha naa sako
mat chaho use jise paa naa sako
pyar kisi ka kaha pura hota hai
pyar ka pehla aksar bhi adhura hota hai

raat kya dhali sitare chale gaye
gairo se kya gila jab apne chale gaye
jeet tu sakte the hum bhi pyar ki baazi
par tumhare liye hum haar te chale gaye
   
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very nice poem..
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very nice poem.. - 26th September 2004, 04:43 PM

bahot achha creation hai...especially the last line jeet to saktey they hum pyaar ki bazee......kisi ke khatir hartey jaana bhi asaan kaam nahi hai.....bahot himmat chaiye harne ke liye bhi....


iss ghar ke do hi makeen the, ek paid aur mein...ye hijr to kisi ki shararat mein reh gaya
   
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