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22nd March 2008, 04:13 PM
Wo main sochti hoon ki tu mera hai
per mere as pas andhera tha andhera hai
mere hathon kee lakiren khali hain
aur tujhe us ki bahon ne ghera hai
par main aaj sar jhukane ayi hoon
yahi bas tujhko batane ayi hoon
tujh ko apne in ansuon men
shiv kee tarah nahlane ayi hoon
toone jo bhi diya hai mujhe use
bhula nahi payoongi
main mere kinare ka ye pyar
tere liye hamesha nibhayoongi
mera dil rakhne ko toone mujhe
baar baar hansaya hai
toone mere ujda huya
dil k shahar phir basaaya hai
too shayed use hi chahta tha hamesha
par ye baat mujhe kabhi bata nahi saka
jis dil men rahene laga tha too
wo dil kabhi dukha nahi saka
ab darr lagata hai to un chahne walon se
jo tere as pas hain har din kinara badalte hain
too jis ke sath khada hai aaj mere hamdam
wo har din sahara badalte hain
jis udasi se guzri hoon main
too un ansoo-on men na aaye
too meri tarah har dard sah nahi pata
kabhi koyi tera dil na dukhaye
awaz na dena mujh ko kabhi beshak
kabhi mujhko, magar bhulana nahi
main mere ansoo khud ro loongi
too mujh ko kabhi rulana nahi
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22nd March 2008, 07:52 PM
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Originally Posted by sweetsapna
Wo main sochti hoon ki tu mera hai
per mere as pas andhera tha andhera hai
mere hathon kee lakiren khali hain
aur tujhe us ki bahon ne ghera hai
par main aaj sar jhukane ayi hoon
yahi bas tujhko batane ayi hoon
tujh ko apne in ansuon men
shiv kee tarah nahlane ayi hoon
toone jo bhi diya hai mujhe use
bhula nahi payoongi
main mere kinare ka ye pyar
tere liye hamesha nibhayoongi
mera dil rakhne ko toone mujhe
baar baar hansaya hai
toone mere ujda huya
dil k shahar phir basaaya hai
too shayed use hi chahta tha hamesha
par ye baat mujhe kabhi bata nahi saka
jis dil men rahene laga tha too
wo dil kabhi dukha nahi saka
ab darr lagata hai to un chahne walon se
jo tere as pas hain har din kinara badalte hain
too jis ke sath khada hai aaj mere hamdam
wo har din sahara badalte hain
jis udasi se guzri hoon main
too un ansoo-on men na aaye
too meri tarah har dard sah nahi pata
kabhi koyi tera dil na dukhaye
awaz na dena mujh ko kabhi beshak
kabhi mujhko, magar bhulana nahi
main mere ansoo khud ro loongi
too mujh ko kabhi rulana nahi
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wah dear bahut hi achha likha hai mujhe bahut hi pasand aaya bas aage bhi aise hi likhte rahena
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22nd March 2008, 08:27 PM
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wah dear bahut hi achha likha hai mujhe bahut hi pasand aaya bas aage bhi aise hi likhte rahena
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deaaaaaar thank you tumhe pasand aayi
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28th March 2008, 03:57 AM
SALAAM NAMASTE......
YOYOSIMRAN HERE...SUM1 NEW INTO UR WORLD....
AAP KI DUNIYA MEIN NAYI HOON.........
HOPIN KI MUJHE BHI IS DHUND AUR NASHE MEIN KHUDKO JAANNE KA MAUKA DE...
kuch likha hai................
kho gayi hoon jinko paane mein,
Dhoonde kya mujhko zamaane mein.
Ik fasana hai is hakikath mein,
Ek hakikath hai is afsane mein.
Kaise karu bayaan haal-e-dil mera,
Aankh roti hai kuch bathane mein.
Ab na lo imthihaan mera,
Raath hothi hai din bithaane mein.
Kashmakash hai mein hai jaan mei,
Shaayad sahi hoga ruk jaane mein.
Is mohabbath ko kya kahu main,
Khauf aatha hai paas jaane mein.
Love,
SIMI
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28th March 2008, 10:11 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sweetsapna
Wo main sochti hoon ki tu mera hai
per mere as pas andhera tha andhera hai
mere hathon kee lakiren khali hain
aur tujhe us ki bahon ne ghera hai
par main aaj sar jhukane ayi hoon
yahi bas tujhko batane ayi hoon
tujh ko apne in ansuon men
shiv kee tarah nahlane ayi hoon
toone jo bhi diya hai mujhe use
bhula nahi payoongi
main mere kinare ka ye pyar
tere liye hamesha nibhayoongi
mera dil rakhne ko toone mujhe
baar baar hansaya hai
toone mere ujda huya
dil k shahar phir basaaya hai
too shayed use hi chahta tha hamesha
par ye baat mujhe kabhi bata nahi saka
jis dil men rahene laga tha too
wo dil kabhi dukha nahi saka
ab darr lagata hai to un chahne walon se
jo tere as pas hain har din kinara badalte hain
too jis ke sath khada hai aaj mere hamdam
wo har din sahara badalte hain
jis udasi se guzri hoon main
too un ansoo-on men na aaye
too meri tarah har dard sah nahi pata
kabhi koyi tera dil na dukhaye
awaz na dena mujh ko kabhi beshak
kabhi mujhko, magar bhulana nahi
main mere ansoo khud ro loongi
too mujh ko kabhi rulana nahi
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wah sapna ji bahut acha likha hai apne wake hi padhakar bahut khushi ho rahi hai aur isme apka ye share muje bahut pasnad aaya hai
par main aaj sar jhukane ayi hoon
yahi bas tujhko batane ayi hoon
tujh ko apne in ansuon men
shiv kee tarah nahlane ayi hoon
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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28th March 2008, 10:13 AM
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Originally Posted by yoyosimran
SALAAM NAMASTE......
YOYOSIMRAN HERE...SUM1 NEW INTO UR WORLD....
AAP KI DUNIYA MEIN NAYI HOON.........
HOPIN KI MUJHE BHI IS DHUND AUR NASHE MEIN KHUDKO JAANNE KA MAUKA DE...
kuch likha hai................
kho gayi hoon jinko paane mein,
Dhoonde kya mujhko zamaane mein.
Ik fasana hai is hakikath mein,
Ek hakikath hai is afsane mein.
Kaise karu bayaan haal-e-dil mera,
Aankh roti hai kuch bathane mein.
Ab na lo imthihaan mera,
Raath hothi hai din bithaane mein.
Kashmakash hai mein hai jaan mei,
Shaayad sahi hoga ruk jaane mein.
Is mohabbath ko kya kahu main,
Khauf aatha hai paas jaane mein.
Love,
SIMI
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wah dear bahut hi achi gazal likhi hai apne
aankh roti hai kuch bathane mai
ab na lo imthinaan mera
bahut acha likha hai apne aur bhi likhte rahiye dear magar app khud apni post banakar bheje ge na to aur bhi acha lagega taki apko koi reply kare vo direct apke pass hi pahoche
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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4th April 2008, 05:57 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by yoyosimran
SALAAM NAMASTE......
YOYOSIMRAN HERE...SUM1 NEW INTO UR WORLD....
AAP KI DUNIYA MEIN NAYI HOON.........
HOPIN KI MUJHE BHI IS DHUND AUR NASHE MEIN KHUDKO JAANNE KA MAUKA DE...
kuch likha hai................
kho gayi hoon jinko paane mein,
Dhoonde kya mujhko zamaane mein.
Ik fasana hai is hakikath mein,
Ek hakikath hai is afsane mein.
Kaise karu bayaan haal-e-dil mera,
Aankh roti hai kuch bathane mein.
Ab na lo imthihaan mera,
Raath hothi hai din bithaane mein.
Kashmakash hai mein hai jaan mei,
Shaayad sahi hoga ruk jaane mein.
Is mohabbath ko kya kahu main,
Khauf aatha hai paas jaane mein.
Love,
SIMI
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thanks simi for your beautiful reply
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4th April 2008, 05:40 PM
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Originally Posted by sweetsapna
Wo main sochti hoon ki tu mera hai
per mere as pas andhera tha andhera hai
mere hathon kee lakiren khali hain
aur tujhe us ki bahon ne ghera hai
par main aaj sar jhukane ayi hoon
yahi bas tujhko batane ayi hoon
tujh ko apne in ansuon men
shiv kee tarah nahlane ayi hoon
toone jo bhi diya hai mujhe use
bhula nahi payoongi
main mere kinare ka ye pyar
tere liye hamesha nibhayoongi
mera dil rakhne ko toone mujhe
baar baar hansaya hai
toone mere ujda huya
dil k shahar phir basaaya hai
too shayed use hi chahta tha hamesha
par ye baat mujhe kabhi bata nahi saka
jis dil men rahene laga tha too
wo dil kabhi dukha nahi saka
ab darr lagata hai to un chahne walon se
jo tere as pas hain har din kinara badalte hain
too jis ke sath khada hai aaj mere hamdam
wo har din sahara badalte hain
jis udasi se guzri hoon main
too un ansoo-on men na aaye
too meri tarah har dard sah nahi pata
kabhi koyi tera dil na dukhaye
awaz na dena mujh ko kabhi beshak
kabhi mujhko, magar bhulana nahi
main mere ansoo khud ro loongi
too mujh ko kabhi rulana nahi
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bahu saras lakhyu chhe sapna jee tame
regards
manu
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4th April 2008, 11:11 PM
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wah sapna ji bahut acha likha hai apne wake hi padhakar bahut khushi ho rahi hai aur isme apka ye share muje bahut pasnad aaya hai
par main aaj sar jhukane ayi hoon
yahi bas tujhko batane ayi hoon
tujh ko apne in ansuon men
shiv kee tarah nahlane ayi hoon
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Thank you dinu tumhe pasand aayi
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wo mani sochti hoon -
6th April 2008, 07:37 PM
bahut khoob likha he
mahoobat karnese gam hi milte ha dost
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7th April 2008, 07:32 PM
MANISHA TUME KAHA MOHBBAT KARNE SE GUM HI MILTE HAIN PER EK BAAT BATAU KI YE GUM HI TO ZINDGI ME BAHUT KUCH KUCH KARNE KI CHAHAT JAGATE HAIN
REPLY ME kaushik.ved@indiatimes.com
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samjho zindgi ko -
10th April 2008, 03:05 PM
me shayri com ka naya user hoon is tarah ki site ke bare me pehle maloom na tha tumhara shayarana to dekha gajab ka tha lekin pyar ke bare me shayad aap jyada serious hain per mein kahna chahta hoon ki aakhir kya pyar me itne doob kar zindgi kaise kat ti hai pya ke alava bhi zindgi me bahut kuch pana hai ye kalug hai dosto yahaan jeet usi ki hai jo kisi ke pyar me na pad kar doordrasthi se zindgi ko pahchane or agar pyar hi karna hai to desh ke liye karo kisi ek insaan ke liye nahi
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10th April 2008, 06:44 PM
hello sweetsapna,
main apko peheli bar hi r....e de rahi hun.
lekin maine jab bhi apka nam padha na ,
muze bda accha laga,turant r....e karneka mann kiya.
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ye nam muze kuch jadahi yad rahta hain,
wo isliye .kyuki sapna mere boy frend ki wife ka nam hain.
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14th April 2008, 09:12 PM
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bahut khoob likha he
mahoobat karnese gam hi milte ha dost
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gham milte hai tab hi hum jan sakte hai
thanks for your reply dear
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14th April 2008, 09:14 PM
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me shayri com ka naya user hoon is tarah ki site ke bare me pehle maloom na tha tumhara shayarana to dekha gajab ka tha lekin pyar ke bare me shayad aap jyada serious hain per mein kahna chahta hoon ki aakhir kya pyar me itne doob kar zindgi kaise kat ti hai pya ke alava bhi zindgi me bahut kuch pana hai ye kalug hai dosto yahaan jeet usi ki hai jo kisi ke pyar me na pad kar doordrasthi se zindgi ko pahchane or agar pyar hi karna hai to desh ke liye karo kisi ek insaan ke liye nahi
thought by aakhi kab tak(ek aawaj hindustaan ki ) kaushik.ved@indiatimes.com
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har ek ki soch alag hoti hai dear desh ke liye to hum bane hi hai
or duniya ka dastoor bhi hai or pyar karna ghuna bhi nahi na
agar kuch pyar me bhi itna chahte hai to kya hai
thanks for your sujav dear
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14th April 2008, 09:18 PM
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hello sweetsapna,
main apko peheli bar hi r....e de rahi hun.
lekin maine jab bhi apka nam padha na ,
muze bda accha laga,turant r....e karneka mann kiya.
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ye nam muze kuch jadahi yad rahta hain,
wo isliye .kyuki sapna mere boy frend ki wife ka nam hain.
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hi prity tum khush hona dear mera pyar bhi kisika hi hoghyaa hai fir bhi pyar karba chhoda nahi mene , har ek ki majborri hoti hai wo tum bhi janti ho jo hum chhate hai wo nahi hota. bas chahna nhai chodna to tum bhi khush rahogi?
achha laga sunke ke mere naam se kisiki yaad to aayi .
thanks dear hamesha khush rahe
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