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Mere naseeb ko ... (my new) - 5th January 2010, 12:25 PM


Mere naseeb ko parakhne ki justjuu kya hai
Tujhi pe marty hain zalim ye aarzuu kya hai

Meri vafaa ko be-vafaa samajhne walay
Ye mere naam per vafaa ki guftguu kya hai

Meri muhabbat ko thukra ke puuchtay ho
Main kaun hun aur meri aabruu kya hai

Aik phuul ko massal ke soochtay ho
Tere he hath per ye rang-o-buu kya hai

Mere hamsafar mujhay chorney k baad
Jataty ho manzil ke ruu-ba-ruu kya hai

Jab shiddat e dard kuch nahi Haider
Aankhon se ayyan ye lahuu kya hai


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5th January 2010, 01:08 PM

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Mere naseeb ko parakhne ki justjuu kya hai
Tujhi pe marty hain zalim ye aarzuu kya hai

Meri vafaa ko be-vafaa samajhne walay
Ye mere naam per vafaa ki guftguu kya hai

Meri muhabbat ko thukra ke puuchtay ho
Main kaun hun aur meri aabruu kya hai

Aik phuul ko massal ke soochtay ho
Tere he hath per ye rang-o-buu kya hai

Mere hamsafar mujhay chorney k baad
Jataty ho manzil ke ruu-ba-ruu kya hai

Jab shiddat e dard kuch nahi Haider
Aankhon se ayyan ye lahuu kya hai
bahut acche haider sahab..........tamaam ashaar bahut seedhr -saade magar phir bhi gehre bane hue hai..........
bahut acche lage
ye sher kyada khas pasand aaya

Aik phuul ko massal ke soochtay ho
Tere he hath per ye rang-o-buu kya hai

daad hazir hai..........
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7th January 2010, 03:27 PM

Haidar Sahab Aadaab,

Bade dino bad mehfil mein aaye hai sahab, achchi rahi aapki kalam bahut sadhe se lafzon mein likhi aur behad asardar ahsaas ko bayan karti aapki yeh kalam ka andaaz achcha laga.........

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bazm mein aate rahiye,
Khush rahiye,
Khuda hafez....


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8th January 2010, 02:10 PM

Thankx Zidd for appreciating my poetry with nice words :-)..
Salam Kwahish : G ap ne bilkul sahi farmaya... main bohat dinnon k baad yahan aya hun... Ap ne pehchaan liya mujhay, bohat achha laga :-)..
Daad deenay aur dua kernay ka bohat bohat shukriya !!
Ap appreciate kertay hain to ham bhi tuutay phuutay ilfaz ka sahara le ker aapki khidmat mein kuch likh jatay hain ...
Bohat shukriya !!!

w/Salam !!


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30th January 2010, 04:21 PM

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Mere naseeb ko parakhne ki justjuu kya hai
Tujhi pe marty hain zalim ye aarzuu kya hai

Meri vafaa ko be-vafaa samajhne walay
Ye mere naam per vafaa ki guftguu kya hai

Meri muhabbat ko thukra ke puuchtay ho
Main kaun hun aur meri aabruu kya hai

Aik phuul ko massal ke soochtay ho
Tere he hath per ye rang-o-buu kya hai

Mere hamsafar mujhay chorney k baad
Jataty ho manzil ke ruu-ba-ruu kya hai

Jab shiddat e dard kuch nahi Haider
Aankhon se ayyan ye lahuu kya hai
touchy lines.............. ! Gud work buddy


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30th January 2010, 07:05 PM

Bahut khub lage aapke sabhi ashaar........bahut saadgi se ........kahi gehraai tak le jaate ehsaas........superB Creation....dil se daad hazir hai......yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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1st February 2010, 09:05 PM

Thankx buddies for appreciating my poetry !!

hopefully u will see some good stuff from me ...

Thankx !!


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6th February 2010, 01:18 PM

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Mere naseeb ko parakhne ki justjuu kya hai
Tujhi pe marty hain zalim ye aarzuu kya hai

Meri vafaa ko be-vafaa samajhne walay
Ye mere naam per vafaa ki guftguu kya hai

Meri muhabbat ko thukra ke puuchtay ho
Main kaun hun aur meri aabruu kya hai

Aik phuul ko massal ke soochtay ho
Tere he hath per ye rang-o-buu kya hai

Mere hamsafar mujhay chorney k baad
Jataty ho manzil ke ruu-ba-ruu kya hai

Jab shiddat e dard kuch nahi Haider
Aankhon se ayyan ye lahuu kya hai

MASHALLAH..bohat khoob Haider saheb........her sher lajawaab hai...yuhi likhe rahiye,itna mushkil kaafiya hai ,phir bhi bohat hi insaaf ke saath her sher me istemaal kiya hai aapne...




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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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Thankz Zainy for such a beautiful wish ....
Thankx again !!


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