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Saaz ka dard (my own poetry to my sad love with Batool)
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Sad Saaz ka dard (my own poetry to my sad love with Batool) - 1st February 2010, 09:49 PM


Saaz ka dard gehra hai aur raag mein koi to0l nahi
Baithay hain tamashai yahan bazm ka maho0l nahi

Aye meri zaat ke mohsin itna mujh pe ahsaaN na ker
Main Vafaa karun to jurm ho, beVafaa tujhy qabo0l nahi

Gham apna mujhay na de sako ae meri khushi ke malik
Maana ke main fazo0l hun magar itna bhi fazo0l nahi

Meri be-basii ko choro0 apni saadgii to dekho0
Kitney Khulo0s se kah gae ho tum meri Bato0l nahi

Dil ki baazi kheela hun ye jaan ker main "Haider"
Dil ka kheel kheelny mein unka koi uso0l nahi


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2nd February 2010, 08:50 PM

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Saaz ka dard gehra hai aur raag mein koi to0l nahi
Baithay hain tamashai yahan bazm ka maho0l nahi

Aye meri zaat ke mohsin itna mujh pe ahsaaN na ker
Main Vafaa karun to jurm ho, beVafaa tujhy qabo0l nahi

Gham apna mujhay na de sako ae meri khushi ke malik
Maana ke main fazo0l hun magar itna bhi fazo0l nahi

Meri be-basii ko choro0 apni saadgii to dekho0
Kitney Khulo0s se kah gae ho tum meri Bato0l nahi

Dil ki baazi kheela hun ye jaan ker main "Haider"
Dil ka kheel kheelny mein unka koi uso0l nahi
ap girah bahut acchi lagaate hai...........
daad hazir hai.........

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2nd February 2010, 08:53 PM

daad..bahut khoobsurat gajal kahi hai apne likhte rahen,sukriya


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2nd February 2010, 09:15 PM

Thankz Zidd and thankx Baagi for appreciating my poetry ...
Thankx for using such precious words !!!


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