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8th August 2010, 03:32 PM
mehangai de is daur vich santan de sunehr bhawikh
lai aurat nu bhi marad de barabar bhajj doud karani pendi hai.te unjh vi jamane de badalde swroop karan aurat bhi apni ek alag pehchan chaundi hai is tej raftar jindgi naal bhajdi aurat di mamta di avaj banan di koshish kiti hai. preet ji ne keha ke koi panjabi vich kavita likho is lai apni hi maa boli vich, smarpit ne eh bhab, ohna working women nu, jo shayad inj hi mehsoos kardian hongian. maa ta akhir ma hundi hai ajj bhi thandi chhan hundi hai je oh apni hond pachhane ta us di mamta hai ruldi je oh apni, mamta hi sanbhe usdi hond hai hathon khussdi* (kho jana) apni santaan de chanane kall lai din raati oh viount* banoundi (planing) kai guna ho gai jo mehangai tanhio peyo* naal kandha miloundi (father) ek muskan aulad di tak ke thakan* oh din di laundi hai (thakavat) maa ta akhir ma hundi hai ajj bhi thandi chhan hundi hai ma di mamta kaun pchhane ma di peedh nu ki koi jaane ban afsar bhawain roab jamabe bache de dukh to kumlave peedh koi ohda jaaia jhalle book- book bhar athru, oh rondi hai maa ta akhir ma hundi hai ajj bhi thandi chhan hundi hai jad ma hundi hai adhiapak bacheian* nu oh path padaundi (students) "main haan balak bibba rana" jad eh kavita padh sunaundi dil ohda pya ghar nu bhajda usda bibba crech vich rulda soch ke oh pachhtoundi hai maa ta akhir ma hundi hai ajj bhi thandi chhan hundi hai jad ma hundi hai ek doctor marijan de vich waqat vitoundi usdi laaddo* ohnu bulave (daughter) gallan de naal dil parchoundi hathon chhad teeke te vattian* (tablets) jad oh ghar nu vapas aundi ro ro ke so gai, jo laaddo chukk usnu,sinne naal laundi hai maa ta akhir ma hundi hai ajj bhi thandi chhan hundi hai godi vich khidouna chahundi lad oh badhe ladouna chahundi kamman de vich rul gai lori dudh sukia, mamta kurlaundi hai maa ta akhir ma hundi hai ajj bhi thandi chhan hundi hai ki koi ma di mamta samjhe ki koi usnu aa dharvasse dohra jiwan ji ji thakki ki koi usnu dewe dilasse apni mamta da hai mull us nu par oh apne faraz nibhaundi hai maa ta akhir ma hundi hai ajj bhi thandi chhan hundi hai |
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8th August 2010, 09:41 PM
sorry dosto edit karan di koshish kitti per fair bhi kuj galtian reh hi gaiyan te
hun edit da option bhi khatam ho gya es lai gustakhi maaf karna ji |
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11th August 2010, 08:30 PM
aj tuhadi kavita pad ke akhan nam hogyian.....
menu yaad hai school time ch aksar menu jad school ton vapis aake ghar da lock aap hi kholna painda si te fer aap hi lunch garm karke khana painda si tan bahut gussa aunda si....aksar comparison hojanda si..ke meri os saheli di mma tan ode lye garm garm khana bnake rakhdi hai...te meri mom tan ghre hi ni hunde...aksar man ch swal uthde...mom job kyun karde ne....roj kyun 5 bjde hi tution wale bche aajande ne..... but jiven jiven umar vadh di gyi tan ehsas hunda gya ke....eh masheeni jindgi ,ma sirf te sirf apne bachya lye jeen te mjbur hai....apne sukh chdd ke...sirf apne bchya de sukh lye....aj mein jis vi mukam te hai....apne parents karke hai....ma bap da karz bcha puri jindgi ni utar sakda....bas koshish rhegi ke apna har farz bakhoobi nibhavan...ik din.es bhaj nath di dunia ton ma nu door lejake kahangi bs ma...hun hor nhi....hun meri vari hai...te oh din jald hi aayega....  |
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12th August 2010, 07:33 AM
SSA Rashmi ji
bahut bahut bahut hi vadhia likhia hai tusiN.........bahut bahut dhanwad ke tusiN meri gall da maan rakhia......Loveleen ji ne jo keha maiN bilkul us naal agree karda haaN......rabb da shukar hai ke ohne ajje vi kujh rishtiaN nu kisse vi taraN de swarath te dikhave toN mehfooz rakhia hoeya hai......thx once again Rashmi ji..........eddaN hi likhde raho......khush raho..........apn akhyal rakhna...............  ਹਾਂ ਮੈਂ ਵੀ ਜਾਣਦਾ ਹਾਂ ਇਖਲਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ ਸਭ ਰਿਸ਼ਤਿਆਂ ਦੀ ਸੀਮਾ ਹਰ ਸਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ ਰੁਕਦਾ ਨ ਖੂਨ ਇਹ ਨੇ ਦਿਲ ਚਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ ਕੀ ਰੱਤ ਦੇ ਪੁਤਲਿਆਂ ਨੇ ਚੱਟਾਨ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਜਿਉਣਾ ਬੇਦਾਗ ਨੇ ਉਹ ਸਾਰੇ ਬੱਸ ਦਾਗਦਾਰ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਉਹ ਲਿਸ਼ਕਦੇ ਨੇ ਸ਼ੀਸ਼ੇ ਮੈਲੀ ਨੁਹਾਰ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਖੁਦ ਹੀ ਧਿਆਨ ਮਾਰੋ, ਕਿੰਨਾ ਕਠਿਨ ਹੈ ਯਾਰੋਂ, ਏਨੇ ਖੁਦਾਵਾਂ ਅੰਦਰ ਇਨਸਾਨ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਜਿਉਣਾ |
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21st August 2010, 01:53 PM
wah wah wah kya baat hai rashmi ji bhot sunder kavita hai'.....  If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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29th August 2010, 12:53 PM
Rashmi ji ik sawaal bahut dinaaN toN merey man wich aa rihaa si.... Ajj di samaajik bantar wich bahut tezi naal badlaav aa rihaa hai... saadiaaN sammassiaanwaaN, saadey rujheveiN, Saadiaan zimmedaariaaN wi badal rahiaaN han. Lekin fer vi eh badlaav saadey shayaraaN diaaN rachanaawaaN wich os sachaaee naal nazar nahi aaunda. Sab shayar bas ajj de paripeksh di tulna puraaney naal kerkey ruk jaandey han. Te aam taur te puraanaa paripeksh haavi renhdaa hai.... rashmi ji di eh koshish leek ton hat ke si.... Khaas taur te eh misra....
"Ajj vi thandi chaaN hundi hai" Kadey kadey ik misra hi enna kujh aakh jaandaa jo shayad kaee panney na keh sakan. Khush raho rashmi ji... |
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4th September 2010, 04:37 PM
Rasmi ji kinna sohna lagda hai k ajj v ithhe punjaabi ch likhan waale moujood haige....kidaaN tusi maaN da kitta samjhaya hai..aapni eh rachna de raahi.....maaN da kitta jadd jadd yaad aaounda hai akhaaN aap hi num ho joundiyaaN han...dil touN daad tuhaddee kayii
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