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Post Es rishte ko - 28th December 2005, 12:30 PM

Jan-nna Chahte hai sager, yeh log
tera bar bar aane ka sabbab.
tera aana aur mere kinaron ko
choom jane ka sabbab.
kya kahoon mein en logon ko,
kya naam doo aapne es rishte ko.
her bar najdeek aana,
her bar bin kuch kahe,
chale jana.
eh sager, jara janne se phele,
tu batatta ja ,
tu kaun hai mera,
tera kya rishta hai mujhe se.
ke tere viyog mein sadhvee si ban gayi hoon mein,
tere pyar mein badnaam ho gayi hoon mein.
mere damman mein,tu aaker ek sham deta ja,
aaker mujhe aapne pyar ka naam deta ja.




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Her pal dekta hoon,
dharti ko aasma se milte huye,
her pal dikh jati hai isliyat mujhe.....
aur rah jata hoon bus yehi kahte huye......
shitiz yeh nahin hai,
SAGER tere aasma se pyar ki

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28th December 2005, 12:38 PM

bahaut umda sager...aapke ehsaas bahaut khoobsurti se aapne lafzon me piroye hain..yuhin likhte rahiyega aage bhi..apna khyaal rakhna.


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28th December 2005, 01:04 PM

apne se sawaal.. aur dilbar ki hasrat... bohat hi dil fareb rachna saager bhai

yuN hi likhte rehna humesha ...

tumhara apna

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28th December 2005, 11:45 PM

Thanks Farhana
thanks for reading these lines. Acha laga pad ker ke aapko pasand aayi..bus aap uhee saath dete rahe to hum likhte rahenge.... thanks again Farhana ...you take care for urself as well



Kunal bhaiya...thanks for stopping by and reading it..i m glad tht u like these lines...bus keep reading it like tht aur aapne bhai ka saath dete rehna...thanks alot... take care..





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Her pal dekta hoon,
dharti ko aasma se milte huye,
her pal dikh jati hai isliyat mujhe.....
aur rah jata hoon bus yehi kahte huye......
shitiz yeh nahin hai,
SAGER tere aasma se pyar ki
   
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29th December 2005, 10:18 AM

bahut hi ache sager bhai bahut pasand aaya likhte rahiye


meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi
   
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29th December 2005, 11:01 AM

Thanks MEHUL for reading these lines.... I m glad tht u liked it... keep reading it like this bro.....


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Her pal dekta hoon,
dharti ko aasma se milte huye,
her pal dikh jati hai isliyat mujhe.....
aur rah jata hoon bus yehi kahte huye......
shitiz yeh nahin hai,
SAGER tere aasma se pyar ki
   
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30th December 2005, 12:38 AM

nice wording sager jee....
keep up the gud work .... thanks for sharing with us.....

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