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9th April 2015, 08:17 PM
Bad.dua mein meiN bhi dua sa asar hota hai,
Dene wale ki neeyat mein kasar hota hai.
Phool tau sajaye the unki mayyat pe,
Rang gehra bhi tab beassar hota hai,
Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.
Ghum ko chupane ke liye munh phera,
jane kaise zamane ko khabar hota hai.
Dil ko pathar bana liya pee ker aansu,
Phir bhi dil mein dard tau magar hota hai.
Jitna bhi bar bar muskura lun mejfil mein,
Surkh chehra mera sab ki nazar hota hai
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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10th April 2015, 03:13 AM
Sanjay bhai
Namaste
Ghazal ke ehsaas mujhe bejhad pasand aayen...dil se daad..khush rahiye
Duaaon ke saath ijaazat
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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10th April 2015, 11:25 AM
Bahut khoob ehsaas sanjay jee.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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11th April 2015, 10:45 PM
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Sanjay bhai
Namaste
Ghazal ke ehsaas mujhe bejhad pasand aayen...dil se daad..khush rahiye
Duaaon ke saath ijaazat
Aapka
Dhaval
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Dhaval bhau Shukriya aapka jo tavajo dee apne meri ghazal ko.
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
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11th April 2015, 10:47 PM
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Bahut khoob ehsaas sanjay jee.....
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Madhu ji aap ki kya baat hai ..aap itna samay deti hain aur sab ko perti hain.
Tahe dil se shukriya aapka ..
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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12th April 2015, 09:00 AM
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Bad.dua mein meiN bhi dua sa asar hota hai,
Dene wale ki neeyat mein kasar hota hai.
Phool tau sajaye the unki mayyat pe,
Rang gehra bhi tab beassar hota hai,
Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.
Ghum ko chupane ke liye munh phera,
jane kaise zamane ko khabar hota hai.
Dil ko pathar bana liya pee ker aansu,
Phir bhi dil mein dard tau magar hota hai.
Jitna bhi bar bar muskura lun mejfil mein,
Surkh chehra mera sab ki nazar hota hai
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waaahhh janaab waahhh kyaa kahne.... beintehaan khoobsurat kalaam likhaa hai aapne..... bahot hi zyaada pasand aayaa mujhe personally aapkaa ye kalaam....
ek do baaten dhyaan rakhne waalii hain, ke sahi jagah pe sahii lafz, gender ke hisaab se istemaal kiye jaaen, like hotaa hai fit hogaa ya hotii hai... dekh lijiyegaa ek baar.....
shukriyaaa
Shaad...
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13th April 2015, 03:06 AM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Bad.dua mein meiN bhi dua sa asar hota hai,
Dene wale ki neeyat mein kasar hota hai.
Phool tau sajaye the unki mayyat pe,
Rang gehra bhi tab beassar hota hai,
Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.
Ghum ko chupane ke liye munh phera,
jane kaise zamane ko khabar hota hai.
Dil ko pathar bana liya pee ker aansu,
Phir bhi dil mein dard tau magar hota hai.
Jitna bhi bar bar muskura lun mejfil mein,
Surkh chehra mera sab ki nazar hota hai
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Bahut khoob Sanjay ji, umdaa ehsaas rahe aapki is peshkash mein.
Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.
Yeh sher aah nikaal le gaya dil se, daad qubool farmiYeGaa
Qasid
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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13th April 2015, 05:30 PM
Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.
Ghum ko chupane ke liye munh phera,
jane kaise zamane ko khabar hota hai.
Jitna bhi bar bar muskura lun mejfil mein,
Surkh chehra mera sab ki nazar hota hai
Sanjay jee...
Dard ka aik bada sa libaada ohhday ... aap ki yeh pur-soz kaawish jigar ky aar paa ho gayii...
kia kahooN... aah per waah bhi nahi kar sakta...
bas khush rahiye .. salamat rahiye... likhte rahiye
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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13th April 2015, 09:45 PM
Sanjay jee...very nice...liked it....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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10th May 2015, 04:59 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
waaahhh janaab waahhh kyaa kahne.... beintehaan khoobsurat kalaam likhaa hai aapne..... bahot hi zyaada pasand aayaa mujhe personally aapkaa ye kalaam....
ek do baaten dhyaan rakhne waalii hain, ke sahi jagah pe sahii lafz, gender ke hisaab se istemaal kiye jaaen, like hotaa hai fit hogaa ya hotii hai... dekh lijiyegaa ek baar.....
shukriyaaa
Shaad...
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Shukriya Shoaib bhai ,,,jo apne itni bareeki se harz sher ko tawajjo di ..
Hamdam
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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10th May 2015, 05:01 PM
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Bahut khoob Sanjay ji, umdaa ehsaas rahe aapki is peshkash mein.
Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.
Yeh sher aah nikaal le gaya dil se, daad qubool farmiYeGaa
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Mast bhai aap ka pyar aur hausala wazaee ke liye dil se shukriya ..
Hamdam
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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