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mire baagh e dil meN jo khaar haiN, tiree rahmateN haiN, sitam naheeN! |
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mire baagh e dil meN jo khaar haiN, tiree rahmateN haiN, sitam naheeN! -
11th September 2010, 11:24 AM
doston ko Id aur vinayak chaturthi ki mubaarak baad! kuchh ashaar pesh e khidmat haiN. mulaaizah farmaaye!
mire baagh e dil meN jo khaar haiN, tiree rahmateN haiN, sitam naheeN! "jise tere gham se ho waasitah, woh khizaaN bahaar se kam naheeN!" - Shakeel Badayuni woh jo mazhaboN ne dikhayee thee, rakhaa maine us pe qadam naheeN, maiN maqam e dil kaa huN raah_gir, miree raah dair o haram naheeN! yeh har ik janam nayaa pairhan, kabhee is badan, kabhee us badan! mujhe aglii baar nah bhejiyo, "naheeN iske baad janam naheeN!" nah hee ranj o gham kaa aseer hai, nah masar'ratoN se ameer hai, woh jo khud se ho gayaa aashanaa, use kaif o gham kaa bharam naheeN! zaraa baaz aa! woh hee naimateN, kaheeN ashq ashq rulaa nah de, jinheN toone zaa'e kiyaa sadaa, tire waasite jo aham naheeN! |
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11th September 2010, 11:42 AM
yeh har ik janam nayaa pairhan, kabhee is badan, kabhee us badan!
mujhe aglii baar nah bhejiyo, "naheeN iske baad janam naheeN!" Wahhhhh dheer bhayeeeeeeeee wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
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11th September 2010, 12:05 PM
Dheer Sahab ! Aadaab ! Eid Aur vinayak chaturthi ki aapko bhi bahut bahut mubaaraqbaad ... !
Aapki Nayi peshkash ke Sabhi ashaar Padhte hi besaaqta muh se nikalta hai Wah ..wah ...wah ... ! ek se badh ke ek ...sher pesh kiye hai ... aapne ! kisi ek ko khaas kehna mushkil hoga... zindagi ke bahut kareeb ka ehsaas karaati ...aapki Qalam mujhe behad pasand aai....tahe dil se daad hazir hai...aise hi behtar qalaam ke saath humeshaa aate rahen... likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen... duaaon ke saath...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th September 2010, 12:53 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob.......dil se daad....lajawaab aur ye sher bahut hi pasand aaya woh jo mazhaboN ne dikhayee thee, rakhaa maine us pe qadam naheeN, maiN maqam e dil kaa huN raah_gir, miree raah dair o haram naheeN! duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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11th September 2010, 04:17 PM
Dheer ji, namaste!
Aapko bhii dheroN mubarakbaad Eid aur Vinayak Chaturthii kii!...  Ek baar fir se bahut achchhii ghazal kahi hai aapne. daad aur mubarakbaad kabuul keejiye! Saare sher's dil ko chhoo gaye, par ye do sher's dil me utar gaye. nah hee ranj o gham kaa aseer hai, nah masar'ratoN se ameer hai, woh jo khud se ho gayaa aashanaa, use kaif o gham kaa bharam naheeN! zaraa baaz aa! woh hee naimateN, kaheeN ashq ashq rulaa nah de, jinheN toone zaa'e kiyaa sadaa, tire waasite jo aham naheeN! Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Dheer ji. aage bhii saath banaye rakhiyega. |
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11th September 2010, 09:32 PM
Dheer bhaiya:
Pranaam! aapki Ghazal bahot hi behterin rahii.n.. aapko paRhnaa aik alag hi baat haii.. yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan baRhaate rahe.n! dil se daad! KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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12th September 2010, 12:53 PM
Speechless Work............rep+++++
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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12th September 2010, 02:39 PM
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Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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12th September 2010, 03:39 PM
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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12th September 2010, 03:41 PM
doston ko Id aur vinayak chaturthi ki mubaarak baad! kuchh ashaar pesh e khidmat haiN. mulaaizah farmaaye!
aapko bhi vinayak chaturti aur eid ki dohri mubarakbaad... aapki ghazal nazar nawaaz huyi.....kuch baate zehn me aayi....so pooch raha hu....karam nawaazi ka mutamanni mire baagh e dil meN jo khaar haiN, tiree rahmateN haiN, sitam naheeN! "jise tere gham se ho waasitah, woh khizaaN bahaar se kam naheeN!" - Shakeel Badayuni aapke ulaa me jo dusra 'hain' hai...vo `mashkook o mayuub nazar aa raha hai...tasalli talab hai... aapke nazariyaat ka besabri se intezaar rahega.....kyuke is mas'ale ka jawaab mai bahut dino se dhund raha hu.... woh jo mazhaboN ne dikhayee thee, rakhaa maine us pe qadam naheeN, maiN maqam e dil kaa huN raah_gir, miree raah dair o haram naheeN! ula misre me'raah' ki kami khalti hai zara.... agar aisa ho to? woh jo mazhaboN ne dikhayee rah=thee ke badle? maqam e dil me shayad typo ho gaya hai.....(maqaam)? mere khayaal se lafz 'raahgeer' hai....raahgir nahi is lihaaj se ye wazn se kharij hai yeh har ik janam nayaa pairhan, kabhee is badan, kabhee us badan! mujhe aglii baar nah bhejiyo, "naheeN iske baad janam naheeN!" tewar badal gaye sahab....  ...aisa munaasib hai?meter par asar nahi hoga? taktee me hone ke bavjuud? kyuki adaa karte huyee tone change karna hoga.... nah hee ranj o gham kaa aseer hai, nah masar'ratoN se ameer hai, woh jo khud se ho gayaa aashanaa, use kaif o gham kaa bharam naheeN! yaha sahab zara ' kaif o gham ' samaj nahi aaya ya to kaif e gham hota ya khauf 0 gham hota.......ya khauf e gham... zaraa baaz aa! woh hee naimateN, kaheeN ashq ashq rulaa nah de, jinheN toone zaa'e kiyaa sadaa, tire waasite jo aham naheeN! aapke aakhiri sher ne allama iqbal sahab ke jawaab-e- shikwa ki yaad taaza kar di |
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12th September 2010, 06:05 PM
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12th September 2010, 06:13 PM
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namaste! aapkee muhabbat aur zar'rah_nawaazee hai ke aapne har ek sher par dil khol ke daad luTaayee. is faraaG_dili ke liye behad shukriya! dua go Dheer |
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12th September 2010, 06:18 PM
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radhe radhe, daad sar aankhon par! khairandesh dheer |
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12th September 2010, 06:19 PM
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darj ashaar pasand farmaane ke liye bahut dhanyavad. ummeed hai bazm aise hee rawaaN rahegee. dheer |
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12th September 2010, 06:22 PM
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jai shree krishna! yeh meraa saubhagya hai ke shaairee ke zariye tum jaise dost aur qadr_daan milte haiN. shaan e bazm to mere binaa bhee khoob raushan hai aur khudaaraa aise hee raushan raheN! koshish yeh hee rahegee kii is raushnee kaa faaidah maiN bhee uThaataa rahuN. tumhara Dheer |
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12th September 2010, 06:23 PM
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12th September 2010, 06:24 PM
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.. woh to sar aankhoN par.behad shukriyaa dheer |
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12th September 2010, 06:26 PM
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12th September 2010, 07:09 PM
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yeh ek taalib e ilm kaa mukhtasar waqt meN mukhtasar ilm ke saath kahee gayaa adnaa saa kalaam thaa saheb jiske har sher ko ahl e ilm behtar banaa sakte haiN. aise kalaam par aapne apne taasuraat zaahir kiye, wo hee mere liye kisee daad se kam naheeN. iltijaa hai ke aise hee saath dete rahe taake ilm kee nayee raaheN khultee raheN. khairandesh aur aapkaa chhoTaa bhaai Dheer |
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jee dheer sahab .....ek baar phir pranaam... mujhe 'hain' ke wazn par shak aur aib mehsuus hua ( mashkook o maayoob) kyuke aapne dusre 'hain' ko sakit bana diya hai......so yehi poochna tha ki ye munasib hai?......aitraaz wazn ke lihaaj se tha.....dusri koi baat nahi... dobara 'hain' ki wazahat farmaaye zahmat ke liye shukriya baki wazahat ke hai uske liye bahut shukriya....hamaare ilm me bhi bahut izaafa hua .... ek baar phir behad shukriya regards |
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ab baat mere samajh aaye ..aap doosare 'haiN' ko short (digitally 1) lene kee or ishaaraa kar rahe haiN..jahaaN tak meraa khayaal hai, is tarah kaa istemaal jaaez hai. misaal ke taur par yeh sher (1222 1222 1222 1222) mare jaate haiN terii bevafaa_ii dekhane vaale chiraaG e subh hai shaam e judaa_ii dekhane vaale! -- Daag Dehlvi maine kaheeN is par aitraaz naheeN dekhaa. agar aisaa kisee ahl e ilm ne kahaa hai to ye mere liye bhee seekhne waalee baat hogee. is par mujhe zaroor likhiyegaa. khairandesh |
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ye mera confusion theek karne ka.... mai bahut dino se is masle par phasaa hua tha....ek baar raziaji ne Bhi isi tarah 'hain' istemaal kiya tha aur maine unse bhi poocha tha...magar vo jawaab dena bhuul gayin shayad mujhe pata nahi kyu 'hain' ke adaigi par shak hai....bus dimaag me khurapaat hai yu samjh lijiye.....magar jab daag sahab ne bandhaa hai to phir discussion wahi khatm .........once again thanks a lot.... regards |
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13th September 2010, 12:35 PM
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woh jo mazhaboN ne dikhayee thee, rakhaa maine us pe qadam naheeN, maiN maqam e dil kaa huN raah_gir, miree raah dair o haram naheeN! yeh har ik janam nayaa pairhan, kabhee is badan, kabhee us badan! mujhe aglii baar nah bhejiyo, "naheeN iske baad janam naheeN!" nah hee ranj o gham kaa aseer hai, nah masar'ratoN se ameer hai, woh jo khud se ho gayaa aashanaa, use kaif o gham kaa bharam naheeN! zaraa baaz aa! woh hee naimateN, kaheeN ashq ashq rulaa nah de, jinheN toone zaa'e kiyaa sadaa, tire waasite jo aham naheeN! ji saare hi ashaar bhaut khoob rahe..............ye kuch khaas raha....very nice........ yeh har ik janam nayaa pairhan, kabhee is badan, kabhee us badan! mujhe aglii baar nah bhejiyo, "naheeN iske baad janam naheeN!" Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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13th September 2010, 04:04 PM
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maiN maqam e dil kaa huN raah_gir, miree raah dair o haram naheeN! yeh har ik janam nayaa pairhan, kabhee is badan, kabhee us badan! mujhe aglii baar nah bhejiyo, "naheeN iske baad janam naheeN!" nah hee ranj o gham kaa aseer hai, nah masar'ratoN se ameer hai, woh jo khud se ho gayaa aashanaa, use kaif o gham kaa bharam naheeN! zaraa baaz aa! woh hee naimateN, kaheeN ashq ashq rulaa nah de, jinheN toone zaa'e kiyaa sadaa, tire waasite jo aham naheeN! ji saare hi ashaar bhaut khoob rahe..............ye kuch khaas raha....very nice........ yeh har ik janam nayaa pairhan, kabhee is badan, kabhee us badan! mujhe aglii baar nah bhejiyo, "naheeN iske baad janam naheeN!"[/QUOTE] Dhanyavad Radhika ji! -Dheer |
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