Bas is umeed ke saath

TariqAhmadAzmi · **Bas is umeed ke saath -** 3rd June 2007, 09:48 PM

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

sunita thakur · 4th June 2007, 10:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

namaskaar shaan ji....aapke ahsaas humey pasand aaye...aur aapne en ahsaaso.n ko aapni zindgi mei.n utara hai....bahut khoob...kaash hum sab aise jeena seekh jaye....

god bless u

rajveeer · **nice -** 4th June 2007, 10:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

shaan ji ko raj ka salaam bhut khub shaan ji ek achi koshish ki hai aapne dil ko acha lagga.......yun hi likhte rahiyega........raj.......

Pulkit_gupta · 4th June 2007, 12:08 PM

Kya baat hai huzoor,

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne... Saadgi bhare aashaar mujhe bahut pasand aate hain... yun hi likhte rahiyega... khayal rkahiye,,,

TariqAhmadAzmi · 4th June 2007, 02:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita virender

namaskaar shaan ji....aapke ahsaas humey pasand aaye...aur aapne en ahsaaso.n ko aapni zindgi mei.n utara hai....bahut khoob...kaash hum sab aise jeena seekh jaye....

god bless u

namaskaar sunita ji,
Aapki reply ko padh ker mujhe bahut achaa laga.. ye hamare ahsaas hai jinhen hum zindagi me utarne ki koshish kerten hai.
thanx

SHAAN

ajnabi duniya · 4th June 2007, 02:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

shaan jii,
aaj aapko padhaa ..aur padh ke bahut achaa lagaa....jis khubsurti se aapne ek ek sabd ko aapas me bandhaa hai wo kabile tarif hai...asaa kartii hu aapko ese hii padhte rahne kaa mokaa miltaa rahegaa
khush rahiyegaa
apnaa khayal rakhiyegaa
aapki dost~
saloni

darshan.vijay · 4th June 2007, 03:31 PM

hi soloni

aap bahut acha likti hai. ase hi likte rahiye mera message mile tho reply karna

hamesa hasti raho.

Vijay Walia

TariqAhmadAzmi · 4th June 2007, 09:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rajveeer

shaan ji ko raj ka salaam bhut khub shaan ji ek achi koshish ki hai aapne dil ko acha lagga.......yun hi likhte rahiyega........raj.......

Thanx raj ji,

Rajveer ji humare ahsaas jo aapke dil ko achaa laga. or hum koshish karege ki aage bhi humari rachna aapko pasnd aaye.
thanx

take care
Allah Hafiz
SHAAN

ajnabi duniya · 4th June 2007, 09:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by darshan.vijay

hi soloni

aap bahut acha likti hai. ase hi likte rahiye mera message mile tho reply karna

hamesa hasti raho.

Vijay Walia

vijay jii ..
bahut bahut sukriya...par ye to shaan jii kii post hai..merii nahii..
lagtaa hai aapko galatfahmii hogayii..

~
saloni

Dhaval · 4th June 2007, 09:41 PM

shaan bha'ii adaab:

bahot khoob !!

aaj kaafi dino baad aapko paRHaa..baRii hi khuShii huii aapko paRH ke..aSh'aar pasaNd aaYeN..yuuNhii bazm sajaate raheN..

khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazaT

aapkaa dost
Dhaval

pooja_d · 4th June 2007, 09:55 PM

Salaam,

Janaab kaayal bana diya apke in do sheron ne

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

wah!! daad haziir hai saheb. Bas likhte rahiye. Doston ki kamii na khalegi apko yahaan. Apki shaan men kya kahen ab, gstaakhi si lage hai alfaazon ko. Aaj yunhiijaazat dijiye is nachiiz ko.

Allha'haafiiz

Grazie

Apki dost
Pooja

donlove · 4th June 2007, 10:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

salam shan ji
kaise hoo app?

appne bhot acha likha hai padhkar bhot acha lagga
yuhi likhte rehna

khush rehna

appki dost preet

munfairy · **frnd 4 ever -** 4th June 2007, 10:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

SALAM SHAAN JI,
kaise hain aap?

kayi dinon ke baad apka likha padhne ka mauka mila hai,
yakin maniye hame be_hadd khushi hui,
apne jis andaz me wapsi ki hai,,MASHA ALLAH,

Aapne is nazm ko ek alag hi andaz me pesh kiya hain,,likhne ka tarika bhi kafi mukhtalif raha,
BOHOT KHOOB.
ALLAH aur tarakki de aapko,AAMIN

hamesha khush rahiye.
apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

apki dost

HASSONI,
( HaSSaN ki SoNi )

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

EkDharkan · 5th June 2007, 03:40 AM

Namaste Shaan ji,
Bahot sahi likha hai aapne...

TariqAhmadAzmi · 6th June 2007, 08:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta

Kya baat hai huzoor,

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne... Saadgi bhare aashaar mujhe bahut pasand aate hain... yun hi likhte rahiyega... khayal rkahiye,,,

Pulkit ji ko shaan ka salam,
thanx pulkit ji, jo apne humare ahsaas ko padha or wo ahcaa laga. Bas aaplogo ke is pyaar ne hi mujhe apne ahsaas ko sabke samne laane ke liye husala deten hain...
bas aap yun hi padhte rahen.
or hamesha hanste or muskurate rahen....

take care.
Aapka dost
SHAAN

TariqAhmadAzmi · 8th June 2007, 09:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ajnabi duniya

shaan jii,
aaj aapko padhaa ..aur padh ke bahut achaa lagaa....jis khubsurti se aapne ek ek sabd ko aapas me bandhaa hai wo kabile tarif hai...asaa kartii hu aapko ese hii padhte rahne kaa mokaa miltaa rahegaa
khush rahiyegaa
apnaa khayal rakhiyegaa
aapki dost~
saloni

Saloni ji ko shaan ka salam,

Ye jaan ker behad khushi hui ki aapko humara ye ahsaas pasand aaya wase hum itna achaa nahi likh paate jitna ki aapne tareef ki hai per mujhe achaa laa.
Aap bhi hamesha khush rahiye or muskurate rahe.....

take care
Aapka Dost
~~ SHAAN ~~

chaahat · 8th June 2007, 10:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

Shaan ji,

Bahut hi achi soch ko le kar aayi aaapki yeh nazm behad pasand aayi.. That's very true.. "Smile, as it can change someone's life completely, without u knowing anything"

Dua karungi ki aapko bhi woh Smile jaldi hi mile jisse aapki zindagi bhi khushiyon se bhar jaaye..

Daad kubool keejiye..

Take Care..

~Priya

aryanvishu · 11:59 AM

shaan ji ko humara salam,
kysee hain aap
aapki post bahut hi achee lagi bahut achaa ahsaas hai aapka. mujhe aapki dosri post ka intezaar rahega.

take care dost

aryan

TariqAhmadAzmi · 11th June 2007, 12:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ajnabi duniya

shaan jii,
aaj aapko padhaa ..aur padh ke bahut achaa lagaa....jis khubsurti se aapne ek ek sabd ko aapas me bandhaa hai wo kabile tarif hai...asaa kartii hu aapko ese hii padhte rahne kaa mokaa miltaa rahegaa
khush rahiyegaa
apnaa khayal rakhiyegaa
aapki dost~
saloni

Saloni ji, shaan ka salam kabool kijiye,

bas aap sab ke pyaar hi mujhe likhne ka haosla deta hain, wiase humne itna achaa nahi likha par achaa laga aapki reply dekhker. aap yun hi padhte rahen to jaldi hi ek nai rachna post keronga...? mujhe aapsab ki reply ka hamesha intezaar rahega.

aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahen...
apna khyaal rakhiyega.

Allah hafiz
aapka dost..
SHAAN

koi to ho · 14th June 2007, 02:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

shaan ji shayad ye aapki pehli koshish hai ya ho sakta hai mujhay pehli baar parrhne ka ittefaq howa ho lekin bohat acha laga parrh ker bohat hi aasaan alfaz main aapne apne ahsasaat kobayan kiya yunhi koshish jari rakhainacha likh payenge apna khayal rakhiyega

TariqAhmadAzmi · 14th June 2007, 10:04 PM

Vijay ji
aapko ye post pasand aai achaa laga...
Tarif post ki hui na? ab wo meri hai ya saloni ji ki
apne alfaazo ki daad sunker mujhe achaa laga.
aage bhi aapse review ka intezaar keronga..

take care
SHAAN

TariqAhmadAzmi · 26th June 2007, 09:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you

shaan bha'ii adaab:

bahot khoob !!

aaj kaafi dino baad aapko paRHaa..baRii hi khuShii huii aapko paRH ke..aSh'aar pasaNd aaYeN..yuuNhii bazm sajaate raheN..

khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazaT

aapkaa dost
Dhaval

Dhaval ji kyse hain aap,
Hamara salam kabol kijiye, aaj kaafi din baad hum shayri.com per aaye or aapka replye padh ker achaa laga or khushi hui ye jaanker ki aapko humare ye koshish pasand aai.

bas yun hi aapka saath chahye.

hamesha khush rahen or muskurate rahe.\

take care

Aapka dost
SHAAN

Mohammad Kashif · 27th June 2007, 10:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

SHAAN sahab ko mera salam bahut khoob likha hay janab apne unhi likhte rahiye her dum aur khush rahiye hamesha.........ALLAH HAFIZ

TariqAhmadAzmi · 28th June 2007, 09:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pooja4588

Salaam,

Janaab kaayal bana diya apke in do sheron ne

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

wah!! daad haziir hai saheb. Bas likhte rahiye. Doston ki kamii na khalegi apko yahaan. Apki shaan men kya kahen ab, gstaakhi si lage hai alfaazon ko. Aaj yunhiijaazat dijiye is nachiiz ko.

Allha'haafiiz

Grazie

Apki dost
Pooja

Salam Pooja ji,
Bas aap sub ki mahobbat hai jo mujhe shayri.com se jore rahti hai. nahi to mai koi shayer kaha hun.. ek simple sa insaan hun. or aap logo ke beech aapki dosti paker kush hun

is tamnna ke saath ki khush rahiye or saath nibhate rahiye..

Aapka Dost
SHAAN

TariqAhmadAzmi · 6th July 2007, 01:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by donlove

salam shan ji
kaise hoo app?

appne bhot acha likha hai padhkar bhot acha lagga
yuhi likhte rehna

khush rehna

appki dost preet

Preet ji aapko shaan ka salam,
kysee hain aap, aaj bahut din baat shayri.com per aaya or aapke reply dekhi. bahut achaa mahsoos huaa bas aap mujhe yun hi hausla dete rahnen

aap kush rahne or hamesha hanste or muskurarte rahen

Take care
Aapka Dost
SHAAN

TariqAhmadAzmi · 11th July 2007, 10:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by munfairy

SALAM SHAAN JI,
kaise hain aap?

kayi dinon ke baad apka likha padhne ka mauka mila hai,
yakin maniye hame be_hadd khushi hui,
apne jis andaz me wapsi ki hai,,MASHA ALLAH,

Aapne is nazm ko ek alag hi andaz me pesh kiya hain,,likhne ka tarika bhi kafi mukhtalif raha,
BOHOT KHOOB.
ALLAH aur tarakki de aapko,AAMIN

hamesha khush rahiye.
apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

apki dost

HASSONI,
( HaSSaN ki SoNi )

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´

SONI JI, Salam ke saath sabse pahle aapki reply ke liye shukriya kahna chahunga ji aapko humari souch itnee achee lagi, Such kah raha hun Mujhe Bahut achaa laga, or saath me maafi bhi chahuga jo waqt ki kami ke chale aapki reply ka jawab der se de sakha, bas aap yun hi saath dete rahen is umeed ke saath ab ijazat
apna kyaal rakhiyega

Aapka Dost
SHAAN

musafir ek pal · 14th July 2007, 03:57 AM

namaskar shaan sahab,

aapne jiss andaaz mein yhe rachna pesh ki hai, wo vakai tareef-e-kabil hai. humein appke ehsaas bahut ache lage. kash kar yhe sher:

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

this is 2 gud. aap aishe hi likthe rahein.

tc

manish

TariqAhmadAzmi · 16th July 2007, 07:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by EkDharkan

Namaste Shaan ji,
Bahot sahi likha hai aapne...

Salam ke saath sabse pahle shukriya kahna chahunga jo aap ne is post ko padha, bas aap yun hi hausla dete rahen to aage bhi kuch likhonga.
bas ab ijazat

take care dost
SHAAN

TariqAhmadAzmi · 8th August 2007, 11:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chaahat

Shaan ji,

Bahut hi achi soch ko le kar aayi aaapki yeh nazm behad pasand aayi.. That's very true.. "Smile, as it can change someone's life completely, without u knowing anything"

Dua karungi ki aapko bhi woh Smile jaldi hi mile jisse aapki zindagi bhi khushiyon se bhar jaaye..

Daad kubool keejiye..

Take Care..

~Priya

Priyaji, Salam ke saath maafi chahunga der se reply kerne ke liy, Acha laga jo aapko humare soch acchi lagi saath me shukriya bhi kahna chahunga jo aapne humare ahsaas ko samjha, bas hume aap isee tarah hausla dete rahen ab ijazat chahunga.
Hamesha apna khyaal rakhe,

Take care
Shaan

TariqAhmadAzmi · **Sorry -** 8th August 2007, 11:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chaahat

Shaan ji,

Bahut hi achi soch ko le kar aayi aaapki yeh nazm behad pasand aayi.. That's very true.. "Smile, as it can change someone's life completely, without u knowing anything"

Dua karungi ki aapko bhi woh Smile jaldi hi mile jisse aapki zindagi bhi khushiyon se bhar jaaye..

Daad kubool keejiye..

Take Care..

~Priya

Priyaji, Salam ke saath maafi chahunga der se reply kerne ke liy, Acha laga jo aapko humare soch acchi lagi saath me shukriya bhi kahna chahunga jo aapne humare ahsaas ko samjha, bas hume aap isee tarah hausla dete rahen ab ijazat chahunga.
Hamesha apna khyaal rakhe,

Take care
Shaan

TariqAhmadAzmi · 24th August 2007, 09:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aryanvishu

shaan ji ko humara salam,
kysee hain aap
aapki post bahut hi achee lagi bahut achaa ahsaas hai aapka. mujhe aapki dosri post ka intezaar rahega.

take care dost

aryan

Thanx aryan ji jo aapne mujhe is kabil samjha. waqt ki kami ki wajah se hum koi nai post nahi bhej paaye. per ab jald hi ek baar fir hazir hogen.

ok
Take care
SHAAN

akelijaan · 28th August 2007, 09:03 PM

bahut khoob shaan ji,kya kehne aapke.aapke is sadah se kalaam mai kitni gehraayi paayi hai.bahut khoob.likhte raen yunhiun

acharya_mj · **hi -** 28th August 2007, 09:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi

Aap sab ko SHAAN ka sallam,

Sabse pahle hum aapko thanx kahunga jo aapne hame is kabil samjha ki hum bhi kuch likh saku per waqt ki kami ne hamare ahsaas ko daba diya per aaj Hamare hasaas jo kuch sochne ko majboor ker rahe the hum apne is ahsas ko aapsab ke bech rakh raha haun..

Gam ko chupa ker apne dil me,
Tum muskura dena.

Derd ke tufaan ko seene me daba ker,
Tum muskura dena.

Shaid..
Shaid tumhari muskurahat se koi,
Jeene ka sabak seekh le.

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

Shaid..
Shaid kise ke dil ki dua,
Berang zindagi me roshni bhar de,
Dabe hue dil ke zakham me marhum bhar de.
Bas is umeed ke saath ji raha hun.
ki shaid....

SHAAN

wonderful tariq ji aap ka kalaam padh kar mazaa aa gaya,ek dam sidhaa magar fir bhi dil ko chhu jaanewaala kalaam hai aap ka,yunhi likhte rahiyega janaab.

regards
manu

Merul · 29th August 2007, 09:38 AM

Namaskaar shaan ji

Kam alfaaz par dil ko chhune wale hai, padhke baRa achchha laga hamein

yuhi mehfil ko sajate rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul

TariqAhmadAzmi · 24th September 2007, 08:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by koi to ho

shaan ji shayad ye aapki pehli koshish hai ya ho sakta hai mujhay pehli baar parrhne ka ittefaq howa ho lekin bohat acha laga parrh ker bohat hi aasaan alfaz main aapne apne ahsasaat kobayan kiya yunhi koshish jari rakhainacha likh payenge apna khayal rakhiyega

Thaanx..
aapko humare ahsaas pasand aaye shaid aapne mujhe nahi padha, mujhe waqt hi bahut kam mil paata hai shaid yahi wajah ho. waise hum aapki baato ka khyaal rakhegen bas aap mujhe yun hi hausla dete rahen

hamesha hanste or muskurate rahen.....

take care
SHAAN

maikasH · 24th September 2007, 08:30 AM

aadaab hazrat

pehli dafaa aapka kalaam padhe ka ittefaaq huaa aur yaqeen jaaniye maiN mutaasir hua huuN, wazan meiN keh paate to bilaa-shaq chaar-chaaNd lag jaate, nasr padhne ka maiN kabhi qaayil nahiiN rahaa lekin yahaaN aap daad ke har lihaaz se haqdaar haiN, mubarakbaad tasleem far'maiiye

rab raakha
maikash

TariqAhmadAzmi · 17th November 2007, 11:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mohammad Kashif

SHAAN sahab ko mera salam bahut khoob likha hay janab apne unhi likhte rahiye her dum aur khush rahiye hamesha.........ALLAH HAFIZ

kashif ji ko shaan ka salam,
Bahut khushi hui ki reply ko per ker aaj bahut din baat shaire.com per aaya or aapki reply ko dekha
aap yun hi hausla dete rahen.
Take care
shaan

TariqAhmadAzmi · **thanx... -** 28th December 2007, 07:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by musafir ek pal

namaskar shaan sahab,

aapne jiss andaaz mein yhe rachna pesh ki hai, wo vakai tareef-e-kabil hai. humein appke ehsaas bahut ache lage. kash kar yhe sher:

Duniya me kuch mila nahi to kyaa gam,
Chalo marte hue kuch insaan ko zindagi de den.

this is 2 gud. aap aishe hi likthe rahein.

tc

manish

Aapko shaan ka salam
Sabse pahle maafi chahunga jo ki mujhe reply karne me deri hui, aapko humare ehsaas pasand aay bahut khushi hue jaane ke, bas aap hume yun hi hausla dete rahe...
ab ijazat

aapka dost
SHAAN

TariqAhmadAzmi · 9th March 2008, 08:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by akelijaan

bahut khoob shaan ji,kya kehne aapke.aapke is sadah se kalaam mai kitni gehraayi paayi hai.bahut khoob.likhte raen yunhiun

Akelijaan ko shaan ka salam,
Shukriya kahna chahunga ki aap ko humari post achaa lagi or saath me ye bhi kahunga ki aap humari new post jo ise foram me hai use bhi zaroor padhee..

bas aap sab ki mahobatt ke intezaar me......

Take care
Shaan

TariqAhmadAzmi · 25th March 2008, 08:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

wonderful tariq ji aap ka kalaam padh kar mazaa aa gaya,ek dam sidhaa magar fir bhi dil ko chhu jaanewaala kalaam hai aap ka,yunhi likhte rahiyega janaab.

regards
manu

Thanx manu ji................

ye jaan kar achaa laga ki humara kalam aap ko pasand aaya......

hum aage bhi koshish karge...

bas aap mujhe yun hi pardte rahe..... keep reading...

take care

Shaan