ye gum chupta kyase hai.

[TariqAhmadAzmi]

Sabhi doston ko shaan ka salam,
ye chand ahsaas jo aap ke beach rakh raha hun or umeed karta hun ji aapko pasand aayega.............

Aakhir Ye Dil hai

Aakhir ye dil hai ye dil samjhta kyase hai,
Hui jo aandhi raat to ye sabhalta kyase hai.

Aansun to aankh se chalak jaate hai ye bin bataye hue,
Ho jaaye jo aankh nam to ye rukta kyase hai.

Gir jaane teta hun kagaz pe inehe kuch istarah,
Ki Ban jaaye koi Gazal per ye banta kyase hai.

Talash raha hai SHAAN ek aise dost ko,
Jo bata sake ki ye gum chupta kyase hai.

~Shaan~

[kwahish]

Tareeq sahab AadaaB!

Aapke ahsaas achche lage per kuch bayan baraber nahi hua hai, agar yeh sahi taur per bayan hote, to wakai is mein bahut gehrai hoti.............

Achchi koshish rahi...............
Agar meri baat ka bura lage to plz mauf ker deN............

Yunhi likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye duaoN ke saath.......Ijazzat.

[khanak]

shaan........... aapne bohat pyaara likha hai....
mujhe pasand aaya
keep writing

[TariqAhmadAzmi]

Originally Posted by kwahish

Tareeq sahab AadaaB!

Aapke ahsaas achche lage per kuch bayan baraber nahi hua hai, agar yeh sahi taur per bayan hote, to wakai is mein bahut gehrai hoti.............

Achchi koshish rahi...............
Agar meri baat ka bura lage to plz mauf ker deN............

Yunhi likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye duaoN ke saath.......Ijazzat.

Salam ke saath shukriya kahna chahunga ki aapo humare ahsaas achee lage..
waise isme bahut saare galtiya hain par kitne ye mujhe nahi maloom...
ye humare ahsaas hain jise humne ek baar me likh kar aap sab k beech rakhne ki koshish ki hai................ aapki reply dekh kar achaa....
bas aap mujhe yun hi haosla deten rahe.....

Hamesha muskurate raheen.............
take care