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Bahut dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hun.... Aap sab ka vahi pyar paane ki umeed karti hun.......... Lo Dhaval tumse vaada kiya tha ki kuch khush-numah post karungi India ja ke... late ho gayi thoda... lekin phir bhi vaada to nibha hi liya....  Beqraari ke is aalam ka anT kab ho.. Kab unka is naacheez pe nazre-karam ho.. InTzaar ki inTihaan kuch hai is qadar.. AahaT har lagTi hai yun, ki woh aa gaye ho.. Dhadkano ka chalan aur Tez ho raha... Khushboo unki... woh mehak, rub-roo ho gayi ho... Deedar mila aise.. chaand ka amaavas ke baad jaise.. Chandni bhi apni mohabbaT ki gavaahi de rahi ho.. Unse nazre milli, ghabraa gayi main.. Jism ko nahi.. unhone rooh ko choo aa ho.. Aankhon hi aankhon me dard-e-judaai kiya bayaan.. Bheegi palkon ne jaise, saara afsaana kaha ho.. Na hum kuch keh paaye, na woh kuch keh paaye.. Dua To rahi bas yehi.. ki is raaT ka anT kabhi na ho... Haan!!! Is raaT ka anT bas ab kabhi na ho.... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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17th March 2008, 11:41 PM
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hello ji Priya ji mashahallah! kya khoobh likkha hai apne... ishq mein doobkar uff kya kalaam pesh farmaya hai..sacch padhke dil khush ho gaya... aise hi likhte rahiyega bahut kam mauqa milta hai apko padhe ka taek caer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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18th March 2008, 12:36 AM
Rude comment, Post deleted, member banned.
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18th March 2008, 12:32 PM
Priya didi:
namaskaaR..! sach maaniYe aaj mujHe baRii hi KhUShii hu'ii.. KhuShii ees baat ki hay kii aap KhuSh hai.. bas aur kyaa chaahiYe ees Shaitaan BHaa'ii ko.. aapne mujhse kiYaa huaa waadaa pooraa kiYaa.. maiN ShuKriyaaH naheeN kahuNgaa.. itanii pyaari si teHreer ko paRh ke dil KhuSh ho gayaa..! har lafz sey pyaar ke liye pyaar chhalak rahaa hai..  .. bas duaa haii aap donoN YuuNhi KhuSh raheN..! ees pyaar bharii teHreer par merii dilii daad-o-mubaaraQbaad qabUl keejiYeNgaa..! aur YuuNhi mehfil ko rauShan karte rahiYe..!Quote:
yeh Sher bahot hi Khuub rahaa.. daad!! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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20th April 2008, 05:59 PM
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Bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ke liye... dil se jo shabd nikle bas vahi kaagaz pe utaare... aur kuch khaas nahi... Take Care... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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6th May 2008, 09:27 AM
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Thanx Dhaval!!!!Tum saath hote ho, to bahut khushi hoti mere chotte bhai! Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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8th May 2008, 03:08 PM
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bahut acha laga apke batoin ko padh kar ais lagata hai jaise kisi ne dil ko touch kiya ho par apke baat ke liye ek shayri likh raha hu umeed hai acha lage umeed ne jindgi ke aanchal pe sar rakh ke pucha main kab puri hongi jindgi ne kaha jo puri ho jaye wo umeed hi kya yours vikas singh bangalore |
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8th May 2008, 04:26 PM
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vikaas mere bhaai. . . kya sahi baath ki hai tumne , jo poori ho , vo ummed hi kya ! Maan gaya tumko! as d name says it all- I-M-POSSIBLE ! & ofcourse Its not the end of the road dat u c ahead, Its just a bend dat u have to pass ! |
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8th May 2008, 04:30 PM
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kya khoob likha hai aapne . . . Aankhon hi aankhon me dard-e-judaai kiya bayaan.. Bheegi palkon ne jaise, saara afsaana kaha ho.. aur yeh tho . . . InTzaar ki inTihaan kuch hai is qadar.. AahaT har lagTi hai yun, ki woh aa gaye ho.. bahuth achhe , Daad qubool kijiye . . . SONU as d name says it all- I-M-POSSIBLE ! & ofcourse Its not the end of the road dat u c ahead, Its just a bend dat u have to pass ! |
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8th May 2008, 07:48 PM
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bahut acha likha hai aap ne PRIYA DIIIII.....har ek sher kaabil-e-tarif hai....dil se dad hazir hai......  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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8th May 2008, 08:23 PM
Hi Priya,
kaisi haiN? aapkii Ghazal paRhii aur yeh kahuuNga k ek achchhi koshish hai. maiN sirf daad dene ke hit meN nahiiN huN. mujhe jo kami, beshi lagti hai maiN bila takalluf bataa detaa huN. usse criticism karna maqsad nahiiN hai. yeh ek dostaana sujhaao hai taa k kalaam meN behtarii aaye. aapko Haq hai k aap ise qubool kareN ya radd kar deN. i'm sorry if i have upset u. to aaiye ek ek sher ke silsile se kuchh kahtaa huN: Quote:
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10th May 2008, 11:38 AM
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Sabse pehle to main aapka SDC pe swaagat karna chaahungi! I hope you would feel like a part of our huge n loving family too! Bahut bahut shukriya aapka jo aapko mera likha pasand aaya.. Aur behad naayaab khayaal pesh kiya hai aapne.. ki jo poori ho jaaye woh umeed hi nahi... bahut khoob! Thanx once again and Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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14th May 2008, 09:16 AM
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Tumhe yahan dekh ke bahut khushi hui! Bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ke liye... Take Care... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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14th May 2008, 12:27 PM
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wah priya kya baat hai boha bohat khubsurat lafz hain.kya baat hai nice to read u..bohat acha likha hai apne.aj pahli bar ap ko parha hai acha laga..keep writing..apna khayal rakhna..khush rahoo... |
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18th May 2008, 02:06 AM
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U take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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26th May 2008, 09:32 AM
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Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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1st June 2008, 09:47 AM
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Aapko pasand aaya jaan ke khushi hui!!!Take care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Achi koshish hai |
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1st June 2008, 11:09 AM
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Arre wah itni piyari ghazal perhny mein itna late ho gya mein ????  Any ways "dair aya darust aya " Bahut khoob likha hai app ne Mohterma ... younhi likhty rahiye ... bahut hi pyaare ahsaas hain Daad Kabool kijye ... Mujeeb |
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14th July 2008, 10:04 AM
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Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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14th July 2008, 01:24 PM
priya di....kya khaoo no word....kuch nahi he kaihne ko......bahut bhaut bhaut hi aacha likha hai aapne........aap humesh aisi hi likhti raho......daad kubul kijiye........
aapki, gudiya...... Take Care |
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15th July 2008, 04:45 PM
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Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna s@L@uddinSuh@n... 
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17th July 2008, 10:04 AM
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Take Care Dear!!! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Take care... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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17th July 2008, 11:05 PM
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nice priya ji really u wrote fantastic $...!
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 hai to yeh bahut pyar bhari rachna par main udhas ho gaye hoon.kush raho .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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