me lafzon se kuch izhar nahi karta.......

passionatelover · **me lafzon se kuch izhar nahi karta....... -** 22nd February 2006, 11:30 PM

me lafzon se kuch izhar nahi karta
iska matlab yeh nahi ki me usse pyar nahi karta
chahta hu me usse aaj bhi par
uski soch me me apna waqt bekar nahi karta
tamasha na ban jaye kahi mohbbat meri
isliye appne dardko dhikhaya nahi karta
jo kuch mila ussi se khush hu me
uske liye khuda se taqrar nahi karta
par kuch to baat hai uski fitrat me khuda
warna ushe chahne ko dil bar bar nahi karta.............

acharya_mj · **modified -** 26th February 2006, 02:35 PM

Hi passionate

I have just modified this" mai labjo mai......."

“ Main labzo mei kuch bhi izhaar nahi karta,
Iska matlab ye nahi k mei tuze pyaar nahi karta,”

“Chahta to me tujhe aaj bhi hu,
Par teri soch mei apna vaqt bekaar nahi karta.”

“Tamashaa na ban jaaye kahi mahobbat meri,
Isliye apne dard ka aksar izhaar nahi karta.”

“Nazar na lag jaaye tere rup ko jammane ki,
Izhaar-e-ishk isi khwaish mai shar-e-bazar nahi karta.”

“Jo kuch bhi mila hai usi mei khush hu mei,
Tere liye khuda se takraar nahi karta.”

“Tujhko pane mai mujhe hai jhamaane lage,
Aise hi kayaamat tak tera mai intzaar nahi karta.”

“Ise apni khushnasibi ya meri zindgi samajh,
Pyaar khudse bhi mai itna beshumaar nahi karta.”

“Jab kabhi in aankho ko tera nasha ho jaaye
Dil par bhi kabhi apne mai Ikhtiyaar nahi karta.”

“Tere Jamaal se roshan hai kaynaat meri
Chand k hone par bhi mai aitbaar nahi karta”

“Vaade-e-vafaa ne mazbur kiya hai mujhko
Bhul kar bhi kisi aur ka didaar nahi karta”

Teri parchhayi bhi mil jaaye to chahunga use
Tere na milne pe dil ko bekaraar nahi karta”I

“Par kuchh to baat hai teri fitrat mei zaalim,
Varna tujhe chahne ki khata baarbaar nahi karta.”

passionatelover · **Re: me lafzon se kuch izhar nahi karta....... -** 26th February 2006, 07:29 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by passionatelover
me lafzon se kuch izhar nahi karta
iska matlab yeh nahi ki me usse pyar nahi karta
chahta hu me usse aaj bhi par
uski soch me me apna waqt bekar nahi karta
tamasha na ban jaye kahi mohbbat meri
isliye appne dardko dhikhaya nahi karta
jo kuch mila ussi se khush hu me
uske liye khuda se taqrar nahi karta
par kuch to baat hai uski fitrat me khuda
warna ushe chahne ko dil bar bar nahi karta.............

me tahe dil se sukr guzar hu aapka ki aap ne is shayri ko complete ki aur humare liye aapna kimti waqt nikala.........

its becuz of u i am able to know the complete version of it.............

or ummed karta u aapse ki aap aage bhi aisa karenge

bye and take care......
passionate........

surbhi_lov1 · 27th February 2006, 07:00 PM

hi passionate
nice one likhte rahiye
bye tc

farhana · 28th February 2006, 11:42 AM

hi buddy after a long time...

ek baat poochoon bura na lagana,kya yeh sach me tumhara likkha hai kyunki kaafi waqt pehle yeh mujhe mere dost ne sms me bheja tha....khair apna khyaal rakhna

acharya_mj · **hi everybody -** 28th February 2006, 03:09 PM

I always add my lines in to someone else poetry, it is my hobby.

U may call it Gustaakhi.

This is not mine , i have just modified it and add some few

beautiful line of mine to make it alive as passionate inspired me to do the same.

By the way what is ur true name Farhana or Naseem.

My sister has also 1 friend named Naseem.

mehul jain · 28th February 2006, 06:16 PM

both of u have done good job............

passionatelover · 5th March 2006, 01:45 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by surbhi_lov1
hi passionate
nice one likhte rahiye
bye tc

thank u for ur words of appreciation.....

cute_ashu · 5th March 2006, 04:43 PM

wow .... bahut accha laga

aise hi likhte rahiye
bye TC

passionatelover · 12th March 2006, 12:04 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by cute_ashu
wow .... bahut accha laga

aise hi likhte rahiye
bye TC

thank u for ur sweet words bro,but plz read achaya mj to,he had made it even wonderful...................

bye and take care
urs passionate..........

deep_in_ur_hear · 12th March 2006, 02:13 AM

Main lafzon mai kuch bhi izhar nahi karta
Iska matlab ye nahi k main tujhe pyar nahi karta
Chahta hoon main tujhe aaj bhi par
Teri soch mei apna waqt bekar nahi karta
Tamasha naa ban jaaye kahi mohabbat meri
Isi liye apne dard ko namoodaar nahi karta
Jo kuch mila hai usi mei khush hoon main
Tere liye khuda se taqraar nahi karta
Par kuch tou baat hai teri fitrat mein zalim
Warna Mein tujhe chahne ki khtaa bar bar nahi karta

-not mine

passionatelover · 12th March 2006, 10:33 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by deep_in_ur_hear
Main lafzon mai kuch bhi izhar nahi karta
Iska matlab ye nahi k main tujhe pyar nahi karta
Chahta hoon main tujhe aaj bhi par
Teri soch mei apna waqt bekar nahi karta
Tamasha naa ban jaaye kahi mohabbat meri
Isi liye apne dard ko namoodaar nahi karta
Jo kuch mila hai usi mei khush hoon main
Tere liye khuda se taqraar nahi karta
Par kuch tou baat hai teri fitrat mein zalim
Warna Mein tujhe chahne ki khtaa bar bar nahi karta

-not mine

though i didnt get what u like to say...............it seems little mysterious to me........any way

i was going thrugh ur profile,we do share some common intrest astro,poetry and stock market.......like to be in contact with u.............................hope u tooo......

bye and take care
passionate...........

deep_in_ur_hear · 14th March 2006, 02:10 AM

hi passionatelover,
Par kuch tou baat hai teri fitrat mein zalim
Warna Mein tujhe chahne ki khtaa bar bar nahi karta

i just postd this one coz in ur post this last line was not correct....
or mayb the one in my post mayb wrong....
but i really felt tht the whole essence of this poetry lies in this lines so posted tht one..
nice 2 see we share almost the same set of interests......will love to stay in touch with u buddy......
bye
deep....

passionatelover · 4th April 2006, 10:58 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by deep_in_ur_hear
hi passionatelover,
Par kuch tou baat hai teri fitrat mein zalim
Warna Mein tujhe chahne ki khtaa bar bar nahi karta

i just postd this one coz in ur post this last line was not correct....
or mayb the one in my post mayb wrong....
but i really felt tht the whole essence of this poetry lies in this lines so posted tht one..
nice 2 see we share almost the same set of interests......will love to stay in touch with u buddy......
bye
deep....

thanks for maiking it correct,but acharya mj ne pehle hi kar diya tha..............

and hey may i have ur email id,well me and acharya wud like to chat with u......so if give permission then i will go further.................well we can be worthful to each other.....
because we have similar set of intrest.....
wiating for ur approval
passionate..........

bindaas_ashi · **hi -** 5th April 2006, 08:37 PM

its awesome dear
really nice
keep writing
take care
miss u

passionatelover · **Re: hi -** 6th April 2006, 10:59 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by bindaas_ashi
its awesome dear
really nice
keep writing
take care
miss u

thanks sweet heart but its was not mine........though i convey feeling through my post always.........and if u see my feeling can be known from post in shyr -e -ishq column

and hey thanks for missing,atlaest somebody has that courage to say in on my face that she misses me(except vh and u) ,i appreciate u for that........and hey..............

I miss you tooooo
because you always make
me feel comfotable.

And I just wanted to
send you some good wishes
and let you know
that you're in my thoughts
every day.

Drop me a line when you find the
time, and let me know
how you're doing.

I'm anxious to hear about
what's going on in your life.
I hope your troubles have been few,
and that fair weather
has found its way to your door.....

plz do keep coming
ur friend forever
passionate.............

nottttttt minnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee