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shisha takraya hai.........(nazam) - 11th August 2006, 08:12 PM
dosto aap sabhi ne protsahit kiya hai mujhe isi liye aaj kuch aur likhne ki koshish ki hai.............



Shisha takraya hai pathar se,
Dua hai choor ho na jaye kabhi...

Kaagaz ki kashti par sawaar hai pyar mera,
Dua hai doob na jaye kabhi...

Meine maana hai kudha tujhe meri mahobatt ka,
Dua hai khuda rooth na jaye kabhi...

Haath thaam kar tera chal rahi hoon raah-e-ishq par
Dua hai saath chhoot na jaye kabhi...

Dil ki galiyon me jalai hai jyot chahat ki,
Dua hai andhera ho na jaye kabhi...

Basaa rakha hai tujhe apni saanson me,
Dua hai saansen toot na jaye kabhi...

aapke reply ka intazar rahega.

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11th August 2006, 08:16 PM
pooja dil ek sheesa hi to hai bada nazuk hota hai

aap ki har shayri ko padh k ye banda bada khus hota hai

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hi - 11th August 2006, 08:18 PM
bahot bahot shukriya dhaval ji aapka.
aapne meri nazam ko pada hai aur aapko pasand bhi aai.
koshish rahegi aur aacha likh sahu.

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11th August 2006, 08:31 PM
ARE POOJA ISME SHUKRIYA KAISA HUM BHI TO AAP KI TARHA INSAAN HAI


DOST BOLTE HO AUR SHUKRIYA BHI KARTE HO YE KAISI DOSTI KI PEHCHAN HAI

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hello - 11th August 2006, 08:34 PM
dhaval ji aap to kamal ke shayar hai. har baat ko shayri ke roop me likhna koi aapse sikhe.
lekin apko meri nazam pasand aai usi ka shukriya kaha hai. chaliye ye bhi nahi kahenge ab se

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11th August 2006, 08:41 PM
nain shayar Bhala aap jaisa kaha POOJA aap to mujse bhi achhi shayri kar leti hai


aap ki shayri is liye achhi hoti hai kyuki aap har shayri apne scche dil se bana leti hai

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reply:-dua - 12th August 2006, 02:44 AM
bahoot khuub pooja..bahoot hi achcha likha hai apne

humari bhi dua hai aap k saat
aap ka likhna chhut na jaye kabhi

aise hi aap likhte rahe

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hi - 12th August 2006, 03:16 AM
bahot shukriya aapne meri nazam ko saraha. aap honsla badate rahiye mein likhti rahungi

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12th August 2006, 09:24 PM
pooja ji pehli baar padhne ka mauka mila hume aapko.yakeen maaniye khayalat kaafi ghere hain dard ki ek bheeni bheeni pyari si tees dikh rahi hai har line me.bas tarashne ki kami hai.aur mujhe umeed hai ki aap aage yunhi likhti rahengi.par ek baat hai 16 saal ki umar me itna dard ahcha nahi lagta.yakeen maaniye.aur har ek post ke saath aapki lekhan me nikhar aata jayega.bas aapki doosri poston ka intezaar rahega hume.


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hi - 13th August 2006, 02:42 AM
bahot bahot swagat hai aapka meri post par. ghayal ji sukriya aapki honslafzai ka. dard umar nahi dekhta dard ko lagna hota hai to kisi bhi umar me lag jata hai.

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hi - 14th August 2006, 05:24 PM
pooja bhut ache ehsaas hai......lafzon ko bhee bhut khubsurti se istemaal kiya hai......yu he likhti raho or mehfil ki ronak ko barathi raho........raj.........

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15th August 2006, 10:43 PM
why so????

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Hi Pooja - 16th August 2006, 12:44 PM
Hi pooja,
App kaphi acha likhti ho Kya app mujh ko bhi isi tarah likhna sikhaoge.

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hi - 20th August 2006, 08:36 PM
sukriya aapko meri nazam pasand aai.
manoj ji abhi to meine hi kuch nahi sikha hai mein aapko kaise sikhaungi.

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28th August 2006, 01:16 PM
Hi pooja Ji
How are you,
I hope you will bw fine

Pooja ji kya app mujhe ek aisa sher likh ser de sekte hain.
Jise main apni friend ko don or vo itni khush ho ki vo mere i love you ka javab de de.
Plz mujhe ek aisa sher likh ker mere E:mail par dal dijiyega
Mera E:mail add hai manojbhardwaj20@rediffmail.com



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