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ek shaam yun hi.............. -
12th October 2004, 02:10 AM
hasrate jawan hoti hai ,ishq mai umra tamam hoti hai,
gili ret per kadmo ke nishan rehte hai, tere sajde mai fir ek shaam dhalti hai. shama nahi dil jalte hai,badnaam wafa subakti hai, mere dupatte ke kinare gile rehte hai, tere intazar mai fir ek shaam dhalti hai. ummide khawahishe jagati hai, waqte-aandhi shaksiyat hilati hai, sare manjar tughe kaid kiye rehte hai, banjar is jameen per fir ek shaam dhalti hai. her shaam nadi tak jaati hai, vo tere gaavn ki maati lati hai, mere aangan mai ,us maati per,*kanha-vranda rehte hai, diya lagaye"mayu" roj waha ,fir ek shaam dhalti hai. *tulsi ka paudha aur kishan ji mayuri |
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12th October 2004, 09:28 AM
hasrate jawan hoti hai ,ishq mai umra tamam hoti hai,
gili ret per kadmo ke nishan rehte hai, tere sajde mai fir ek shaam dhalti hai. shama nahi dil jalte hai,badnaam wafa subakti hai, mere dupatte ke kinare gile rehte hai, tere intazar mai fir ek shaam dhalti hai. ummide khawahishe jagati hai, waqte-aandhi shaksiyat hilati hai, sare manjar tughe kaid kiye rehte hai, banjar is jameen per fir ek shaam dhalti hai. her shaam nadi tak jaati hai, vo tere gaavn ki maati lati hai, mere aangan mai ,us maati per,*kanha-vranda rehte hai, diya lagaye"mayu" roj waha ,fir ek shaam dhalti hai. har sham ka sooraj dil jalata hai... phir bhi muje jeene ka path padata hai har bat uski dil ko rakh karti hai.. phir ek sham dhalti hai... amber simat jana chahta hai.. dharti se mil jana chahta hai... gham-e-judai mai koi jeeti marti hai... phir ek sham dhalti hai.... ek kursi pe hum baithe reh jate hai... log hume dekh hans ke nikal jate hai... badnami bhi "saccha_pyar" bayan karti hai phir ek sham dhalti hai... meri mayu dekha tumne tumhari kalam ki dhar pe main jo apne behte lahu se likha woh bhi ek dard bayan kar raha hai..tumne bohat accha kalam likha hai... mujh jaisa nacheez to tareef dene ke bhi kabil nahi... phir bhi ye ashar mila hi diye inhe hi samajhna sab kuch ... tumhara kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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12th October 2004, 10:17 AM
har sham ka sooraj dil jalata hai...
phir bhi muje jeene ka path padata hai har bat uski dil ko rakh karti hai.. phir ek sham dhalti hai... amber simat jana chahta hai.. dharti se mil jana chahta hai... gham-e-judai mai koi jeeti marti hai... phir ek sham dhalti hai.... ek kursi pe hum baithe reh jate hai... log hume dekh hans ke nikal jate hai... badnami bhi "saccha_pyar" bayan karti hai phir ek sham dhalti hai... meri mayu dekha tumne tumhari kalam ki dhar pe main jo apne behte lahu se likha woh bhi ek dard bayan kar raha hai..tumne bohat accha kalam likha hai... mujh jaisa nacheez to tareef dene ke bhi kabil nahi... phir bhi ye ashar mila hi diye inhe hi samajhna sab kuch ... tumhara ha mere kanu , kyon yeh kehke sharminda kehte ho ki tareef ke kabil nahi , shayed itnee tareef ke kabil to hum nahi . badnammi bhi sachha pyar bayan kerti hai bahut khub thx mayuri |
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mayu ji... thats too good |
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mayu ji... thats too good -
12th October 2004, 10:19 AM
Mayu ji,
Thats really amazing shayri... really too too good gazal, do keep it up... i like it ... really i love it... too amazing.. U won my heart mayuri... can we be friends? do take care, keep smiling ______________________________ http://www.angelfire.com/emo2/shayri_e_dard |
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12th October 2004, 10:58 AM
Thats really amazing shayri... really too too good gazal,
do keep it up... i like it ... really i love it... too amazing.. U won my heart mayuri... can we be friends? do take care, keep smiling dear samir, i m honoured , thx . itni tareef ke liye . aapko ye poem aachi lagi aur aapne reply kiya , thxs . aur aapne dost banne kabilk samza , thxs again . of course we r friends , infect all shayri people r friends . so we r too friends mayuri |
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12th October 2004, 02:45 PM
Hi Mayuri Ji,
Phir aur ek la jawaab aur dil ko chhoo lene wala kalaam. Bohot hi khoobsurti se izhar kiya hai hal e dil. Har ek line dil mein ghar kar gayi. Hiya Kunal. Chotey, tumhara response bhi behud pasand aaya. U hi likhtey raho aap dono. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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12th October 2004, 07:16 PM
hi pancham ji,
aapka swaget hai is duniya mai. shayri ki duniya mai izhar ki duniya mai , choti si is pyar ki duniya mai. kalm ko padhne ke liye aur jawab dene ke liye shukriya . koshish karungi ki aur behter likh saku. jaldi hi dobara milne ki khwaish ke sath mayuri |
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12th October 2004, 07:22 PM
helo salim ji,
Hi Mayuri Ji, Phir aur ek la jawaab aur dil ko chhoo lene wala kalaam. Bohot hi khoobsurti se izhar kiya hai hal e dil. Har ek line dil mein ghar kar gayi. Hiya Kunal. Chotey, tumhara response bhi behud pasand aaya. U hi likhtey raho aap dono. ------------ is baar mai aapka shukriya kerke , baat nahi khatam karungi . kaise kahu ab to jab bhi kuch likhti hu , to aapka kya reply hoga pehle hi sochne lagti hu , aap mera her post padhte hai aur reply kerte hai , iske liye shukriya bahut mamuli alfaz reh jata hai . aur dosti mai shayed is shabd ka mol bhi nahi hota .mol hota hai to bus jazbato ka ahsaso ka.jo ki aapke her jawab mai zalkte hai keep writing 4 my inspiration mayuri |
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13th October 2004, 02:03 PM
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Hi Mayuri Ji, Dosti ka pehla usool, no thanx no sorry. Arey aap likhti hi itna pyaara hai ke bas response diye bina raha nahi jaata. Lolz, aap humare response ka intezaar karti hai??? Ab kya kahu.... Arey jab koi itna pyaara likhey to phir pankho (fans) ke liye bhi tayar rehna chahiye. Bas aap u hi likhtey rahiye, hum u hi aapka hausla barha te rahenge. Aur zahe naseeb jo aapne hume dost maana. Khush rahiye, Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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13th October 2004, 02:08 PM
salim ji
aapka shukriya ki aapne is khaksar ka reply bhi padha... waise salim ji padha kariye mere reply ... wakai main mere reply bhi khali nahi hote kabhi ... aap yun hi sath dete rehna ... aur meri sabse pyari dost mayuri ke post pe aane ke liye shukriya ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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