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Ash'or ka daftar Khula - 2nd April 2014, 08:00 PM

Aadaab doston . . .

Is shaam ne phir se is naacheez ka hosla badhaaya aur phir se ehsaason ko labzo me bharne ki koshish me lagaaya. Yeh kalam is haseen shaam ke naam. . . Ummed hai aapko pasand aayega

Aaj badi muddat ke baad apna ash'or ka daftar khula
jaha so rahe the barso se ham! aaj woh kabr khula

Taras rahe the meri nigaahe jis nazaare ko dekhne,
aaj phir se us haseen saadgi ka nayaab manzar khula

Jis se baandh rakhe the khud ke ehsaas e muhobbat ko
aaj woh takabbur e wafa ka sakht zanjeer khula

Hamne jab bhi bhulna chaaha unki lajawaab saadgi ko
Ajee!! Unki andaaz e bayaan e muhobbat ka nashtar khula

Jab bhi zindagi ne bharna chaha jakhm e muhobbat ko
unki saadgi se jude yaadon ka dawa e beasar khula

AAj jab Krishna ne phir se jeeya us haseen muhobbat ko
barso se unki khushboo se lipta huwa uska bistar khula


Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
   
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3rd April 2014, 08:38 AM

wah...waah waah waah krishan ji baht umdaa kalaam pes kiya hain....................!!!
   
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3rd April 2014, 11:16 AM

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Aadaab doston . . .

Is shaam ne phir se is naacheez ka hosla badhaaya aur phir se ehsaason ko labzo me bharne ki koshish me lagaaya. Yeh kalam is haseen shaam ke naam. . . Ummed hai aapko pasand aayega

Aaj badi muddat ke baad apna ash'or ka daftar khula
jaha so rahe the barso se ham! aaj woh kabr khula

Taras rahe the meri nigaahe jis nazaare ko dekhne,
aaj phir se us haseen saadgi ka nayaab manzar khula

Jis se baandh rakhe the khud ke ehsaas e muhobbat ko
aaj woh takabbur e wafa ka sakht zanjeer khula

Hamne jab bhi bhulna chaaha unki lajawaab saadgi ko
Ajee!! Unki andaaz e bayaan e muhobbat ka nashtar khula

Jab bhi zindagi ne bharna chaha jakhm e muhobbat ko
unki saadgi se jude yaadon ka dawa e beasar khula

AAj jab Krishna ne phir se jeeya us haseen muhobbat ko
barso se unki khushboo se lipta huwa uska bistar khula
waah waah.........
Krishnaji, bahot hi sundar qalaam pesh kiya hai....
dilse daad......



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5th April 2014, 07:56 PM

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wah...waah waah waah krishan ji baht umdaa kalaam pes kiya hain....................!!!
Bahut shukriya saab. Aate rahiye aur hamar hosla badhaate rahiye . . .


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5th April 2014, 07:57 PM

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waah waah.........
Krishnaji, bahot hi sundar qalaam pesh kiya hai....
dilse daad......
Aadeil saab,

Bahut shukriya. jaan ke bahut khushi huyi ki aapko hamari kalam pasand aayi.
Aate rahiye . . .


Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
   
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14th April 2014, 05:03 PM

very well written sharma ji....... achaa , bahot acchaa likhaa hai aapne...
likhte rahiye

Shaad...


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15th April 2014, 03:52 PM

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very well written sharma ji....... achaa , bahot acchaa likhaa hai aapne...
likhte rahiye

Shaad...
Bahut shukriya Sameer saab. Bahut khushi huyi. Aate rahiye . . . .


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15th April 2014, 11:09 PM

very well written sharma ji....... achaa , bahot acchaa likhaa hai aapne...
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18th April 2014, 05:43 PM

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very well written sharma ji....... achaa , bahot acchaa likhaa hai aapne...
likhte rahiye
Bahut shukriya saab. aaate rahiye, hamara hosla buland karte rahiye . . .


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