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Love Aakhri khat - 21st November 2012, 08:17 PM

khoon se rangeen deewar-o-dar banaa diya
zara sa haath maine zakhmon se utthaa diya

teri yaadon ne dastak jab bhi dil pe di
aik aah bhar lee aik aansoo bahaa diya

cheekh-te hain dil ke chhalle naam-e-marham pe
rog kaise tumne ye dil ko lagaa diya

phir bhi deta hai tum hi ko dil duaayen
mana ke tune mujhe khaak mein milaa diya

baitha hoon jaise lutt gaya ho dilli ka taaj
aaj maine tera aakhiri khat bhi jalaa diya

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21st November 2012, 09:13 PM

teri yaadon ne dastak jab bhi dil pe di
aik aah bhar lee aik aansoo bahaa diya

baitha hoon jaise lutt gaya ho dilli ka taaj
aaj maine tera aakhiri khat bhi jalaa diya


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22nd November 2012, 11:18 AM

asif bhaa'ii:

namaste!

kaise hain aap?

Shukriyaah ees umdaah tehreer ko hum sabhee ke saath baaNTne ke liye ! KhuSh rahiye


duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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22nd November 2012, 08:26 PM

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teri yaadon ne dastak jab bhi dil pe di
aik aah bhar lee aik aansoo bahaa diya

baitha hoon jaise lutt gaya ho dilli ka taaj
aaj maine tera aakhiri khat bhi jalaa diya


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22nd November 2012, 08:27 PM

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asif bhaa'ii:

namaste!

kaise hain aap?

Shukriyaah ees umdaah tehreer ko hum sabhee ke saath baaNTne ke liye ! KhuSh rahiye


duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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22nd November 2012, 08:57 PM

bahut khoob rahe sabhi aashar. Khaaskar ye dil ke behad kareeb raha.

baitha hoon jaise lutt gaya ho dilli ka taaj
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