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27th July 2006, 02:10 PM
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This week is World's friendship week... To me, my friebds are the most valuable gift from god.... Just wrote a few lines (after a longgg time)... haven't followed much tehcnicalities... just let them flow..... ======================================= Ajanbi ban kai log roz zindagi me aate hain Apna bankar unme se kucch saath thhehar jaate hain Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb Dosti ka unki hum shumaar dhaadkanon me paate hain Kar lijiye yeh waada yun hi saath nibhaiyega Bin doston ke tanha hum khud ko bahut paate hain ======================================= Happy Friendship week...Journey till now has been good...hope it'll be better in future...  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th July 2006, 05:48 PM
Pulkit ji,
kaise hain aap? Dosti per likhi lines bahaut pasand aayi......yunhi likhtey rahiyega. aapka v i p i n 
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28th July 2006, 06:57 AM
dear pulkit
well said roj log milte hai bichar jaate hai kuch rishte kushbu ban bikhar jaate hai dosti jazbah hai,pyaar se badha sachhe dost zindgi mhakaate hai happy friendship week shrdh 
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28th July 2006, 10:34 AM
mere bhai
bohat hi khoobsurat alfaaz aise alfaaz jo ek bohat khoobsurat dil rakhne wala shakhs hi keh sakta hai. pulkit aap ke dosti, aap ki mohabbat, aap ka mu-addibaana pan (obedience) , aap ka khaloos, voh sab ek aise insaan ka aks pesh kerta hai jo her qisim ki aaluudgi se paak hai. aap ko parh ker,aap ko soach ker mujhe hamesha khushi aur itminaan hotaa hai ke aaj kalke daur mein aap jaise mohabbat kerne wale achchay insaan maujood hain. mujhe apne aap ke saath is adnaa se tualluq per bohat fakhr mehsoos hotaa hai. meri dua hai ke aap bohat taraqqi karein aur duniyaa mein bohat aalaa muqaam aur martaba haasil karein. dosti ke hawale se mein manzar bhopaali ke in ashaar ko hamesha apne haamil e khayaal rakhta hoon "KHATM HO JAAYEIN UMANGEIN YEH SITEM MAT KERNA" BAAGHBAANON NAEE SHAKHON KO QALAM MAT KERNA DOSTI KEHTE HAIN US KO KE JHUKE SIR UTH JAAYEIN "SIR JHUKA DE JO KISI KA YEH SULEM MAT KERNA" Meri tamaam ter duayein, apne bhai , apne dost pulkit ke liye. musharrafhusain |
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28th July 2006, 11:32 AM
happy friendship week 2 u too!...hopeu remember me..
waise alfaaz to bahut acche hain....hamesha ki tarah.... Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb tumhe nahin lagta agar yeh lines ise hoti to flow jyada accha hota....Kucch jo aa jaate hain aap ke dil se kareeb.... agar coment acchi nahin lagi to bura mat manna plzzz.. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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28th July 2006, 12:21 PM
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app ka dosti ke naam par likhna bahut achha lagga. dosti sach mai hi us kudha ka hum sab ko diya amulay tohfa hai. es dosti par mai bhi ek share kahna chahti hu. "Kuch ristey anjaaney mai hi ban jatey hai, phele dil phir zindgi se jud jatey hai, kahtey us dour ko shayad DOSTI, jis mai log zindgi se pyare ho jatey hai" appki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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28th July 2006, 07:28 PM
pulkit ji,
ek arse baad aapka likha padhne ko mila hai.bahut acha laga padhkar.dosti ke rishtey ka bahut ache andaaz mai bayan kiya aapne. likhte rahiye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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29th July 2006, 12:30 PM
Pulkit,
Happy Friendship week pulkit, Dosti par aap ne achcha likha hai.. YuuN hee likhte raho... Log kahte haiN jinhe ajnabii Un se hee pyaar paaya maine Take care, Mayank |
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30th July 2006, 10:37 AM
Ajanbi ban kai log roz zindagi me aate hain
Apna bankar unme se kucch saath thhehar jaate hain Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb Dosti ka unki hum shumaar dhaadkanon me paate hain Kar lijiye yeh waada yun hi saath nibhaiyega Bin doston ke tanha hum khud ko bahut paate hain Hello Pulkit Happy Friendship week to you too....Beautiful lines u have written for friends....Pulkit it's nice to see a post on Friendship week...keep up the good work....I will even like to contribute few lines on friendship .......Dost Kuch Zindagi mein aate hain Aatey aatey Sapne kayi de jaate hain Duur rehkar bhi Dosti Nibhate hain Dost Mushkilon mein Sath de jaate hain Doston ko kuch Bhuul bhi jate hain Bhuul kar bhi kya Dosti Nibhate hain Dosti ko salaam hum kar jaate hain Aaj Dosti ka Nagma gungunate hain Once again keep up the good work Keep Smiling Take care Di |
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30th July 2006, 01:16 PM
Ajanbi ban kai log roz zindagi me aate hain
Apna bankar unme se kucch saath thhehar jaate hain Kucch jo aa jaate hain dil ke aap saa kareeb Dosti ka unki hum shumaar dhaadkanon me paate hain Kar lijiye yeh waada yun hi saath nibhaiyega Bin doston ke tanha hum khud ko bahut paate hain Truly Pulkit! Bahut achha laga padhkar...I hope I'm one of those dosts...because you are always in my heart, buddy mine...iss mehfil mein Pulkit ke bagair suuna suuna sa lagta hai sab...so keep this mehfil going with your presence...bless you...happy friendship week... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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30th July 2006, 05:37 PM
pulkit ji
maine aaj aapko pahli bar pada hai dosti ke naam aapka paigam bada accha laga dad kabool kigiye " Dosti esi ho jo dhadakan me bas jaye saans bhee lo to bhee khushboo usi ki aaye dosti ka nasha aanko pe chaye baat kuch bhee ho per naam usi ka aaye. dilip |
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31st July 2006, 01:18 AM
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Bahut hi pyari aur sachi lines likhi hain.. aur yeh dua humesha rahegi ki yeh shayri parivaar yun hi bana rahe... Bahut acha likha hai aapne.. Happy Friendship's Day (in advance) Take care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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2nd August 2006, 10:26 PM
Dear Vipin bhai,
aapko yeh ehsaas bhi pasand aaye... jaankar bhaut khushi huii... yun mere saath rahiyega... apna khayal rakhiyega... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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2nd August 2006, 10:32 PM
Hey Shraddha,
Gald that u liked my words this time too.... keep motivating me like this.... A very happy Frndship week to you too... take gr8 care... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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2nd August 2006, 10:41 PM
"KHATM HO JAAYEIN UMANGEIN YEH SITEM MAT KERNA"
BAAGHBAANON NAEE SHAKHON KO QALAM MAT KERNA DOSTI KEHTE HAIN US KO KE JHUKE SIR UTH JAAYEIN "SIR JHUKA DE JO KISI KA YEH SULEM MAT KERNA" Bahut hi khoobsurat aur sacche lafaaz hain bhai... Mushi bhai, Adaab, ummeed hai aap acchi sehat me honge... bhai har baar aap itne khule dil se taareef karte hain ke main soch me padh jaata hoon ke vaakayi tina accha likha hai kya... yeh aaapka badappan hai jo aap mujhe itna pyaar dete hain... Dua rahegi ke aapka aashirwaad yunhi bana rahe... apna khayal rakhiyega bhai... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th August 2006, 11:48 AM
hiii pulkit,
very nice. happy friendship week. beautiful lines. keep writting. take care! |
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4th August 2006, 12:14 PM
Dosti aur mohabaat ka virsa haasil hai.......
meri zindagi mein ek tohfa haasil hai......... tum vo hira ho jiski chamak har taraf hai.... is heere ki chamak humein haasil hai......... Dear Pullu......... ye misra tumhare liye.............Happy freindship day........ Aur musam ko aaj bade dinon baad dekha to khushi hui............. TC.............. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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5th August 2006, 11:44 AM
bhai
kaise ho. acha laga bohat din bad tumhare lafzon ko parh kar..bohat acha likha hay aisa hi likhte raho apna khiyal rakhna khan agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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5th August 2006, 12:09 PM
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acha likha hai . takecare oye frndship band kahan hai haan??? शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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10th August 2006, 04:05 PM
Dear Mausam,
How are you doing and how is ur li'l angel... must be getting naughtier.... Tumhe ehsaas pasand aaye accha laga.... yaar jo tumne suggest kiya usse to poora menaing hi change ho jaata naa isliye aise likha  Glad tht u spared so much time for this....take good care... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:06 PM
Hi Sunita,
Accha laga jaankar ke aapko yeh aashaar pasand aaye.... aapke shabd bhi bahut subdar thhe... vaakayi dosti sa sundar rishta aur koi nahi... yun hi saath deti rahiyega... apna khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:12 PM
Hi akelijaan,
Glad that u liked my words.... Do keep motivating me like this... take care... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:17 PM
Mayank bhai,
Aapko accha laga jaankar khushi huwi... vaise aap jo mujhse expect karte hain vaisa nahi hai yeh... aajkal thhoda busy hoon... aapki shikayat jaldi doosr karoonga... yeh to bass mann ke khyaal thhe... apna khayal rakhiyega.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:20 PM
Hi didi,
My friends and their friendship is the most special thing to happen to me... so just wrote a few words on that feeling... aapko accha laga jaanakar khushi huwi.... aapki likhi lines bhaut pyaari hain... yun hi saathr rahiyega.... khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:22 PM
Dearest Guruji,
Well.... My post is incomplete till i get ur signatures here.... as always you've appreciated me so nicely.... Mehfil to hum sab se hai naa... we all conteibute in our ways... till d time we r together... the mehifil will blossom Take good care of urself...btw... just 4 mnths to go... time's flying naa.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:24 PM
Hi dilip,
aapko acche lage ehsaas jaankar khushi hui... saath banaye rakhiyega... khayal rkahiye apna... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:26 PM
Hi Priya,
Glad that you liked my words... Friendship to me is the most beautiful and special thing to happen to a person.... Humara parivaar aur hum sabka pyaar yun hi bana rahe.... take care Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:28 PM
Hi parul,
Am happy tht u liked my feleings so much... sweet of you to apprecaite... do keep coming.. take care... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:29 PM
Aman bhai,
Am flatttereddd... soooo swweeett... hehe mujhe chane ke jhaad pe chadaa diya... but fikar not... hum sab pakde huwe hain Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th August 2006, 04:30 PM
Dear khan bhai,
kaafi time baad aapko site pe dekha... apako mere aashaar pasand aaye jaankar bhaut khushi hui... yun hi saath dete rahiyega... main koshish karat rahoonga.... apna khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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14th August 2006, 04:02 PM
ha pulkit tumne thik hi kaha hain...meri suggest ki hui lines shayad matlab hi badal deti,,,,bahut waqt baad aana hua to shayad mere dimag ko hi zang lag gaya tha......and my lil one is as naughty as always.....
have a nice day.. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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