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वो तो हर एक बात पर ग़ज़ल लिखता है
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2nd September 2010, 01:20 PM
वो तो हर एक बात पर ग़ज़ल लिखता है
नादाँ है जो दरबे को महल लिखता है
लिखने को तो लिख दूंगा दास्तान-ऐ-मोहब्बत
मगर कौन है जो सच्चाई आज कल लिखता है
करता अगर वो बातें सागर के किनारे की
कुँओं की ख़ामोशी भी को हलचल लिखता है
होते हैं कुछ दीवाने दुनीयाँ मैं इनके जैसे
महबूब को वो अपने ताजमहल लिखता है
चुभ जाते हैं पैरों में जब कांटे गुलिस्ताँ के
वो दीवाना है कांटो को जो कमल लिखता है
वो वक़्त हुआ काफूर खुशियों का जब चलन था
अब आंसूओं के किस्से हर पल लिखता है
सरे जहाँ की रौनक बस्ती थी उसके घर में
वो बटवारे हुए घर को जंगल लिखता है
Aapka Santosh..........
Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum
Tumhara saath meri tanhaiyo.N se kuch to behtar hai...
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2nd September 2010, 01:50 PM
Superb Creation....
Dil se daad hazir hai Santosh ji.....
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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2nd September 2010, 01:57 PM
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kavita negi
superb creation....
dil se daad hazir hai santosh ji.....
बहुत शुक्रिया कविता जी जो आपने इसे पसंद किया आपकी दाद दिल से कबूल है
Aapka Santosh..........
Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum
Tumhara saath meri tanhaiyo.N se kuch to behtar hai...
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2nd September 2010, 08:03 PM
kabhi rona kabhi hasna kabhi hairaan ho jana
Mohbbat bhale change ko bhi deewana banati hai
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3rd September 2010, 06:36 PM
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kabhi rona kabhi hasna kabhi hairaan ho jana
mohbbat bhale change ko bhi deewana banati hai
वाह क्या शेर लिखा है आपने मज़ा आ गया
आते रहिए लिखते रहिए......
Aapka Santosh..........
Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum
Tumhara saath meri tanhaiyo.N se kuch to behtar hai...
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4th September 2010, 02:17 AM
Santosh Bhai Aadaab........
Kya baat hai janaab bahut khoob Gazal kahi hai aapne....
Khayaal bhi umdaa rahe aur sabhi sher bhi....... Daad Janab....
Sabhi sher daad ke kabil hai......
Par last sher bahut achcha laga........
Aise hi likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye.......
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4th September 2010, 12:37 PM
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santosh bhai aadaab........
kya baat hai janaab bahut khoob gazal kahi hai aapne....
khayaal bhi umdaa rahe aur sabhi sher bhi....... Daad janab....
sabhi sher daad ke kabil hai......
par last sher bahut achcha laga........
aise hi likhate rahiye......
khush rahiye.......
समीर जी बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया जो आपने ग़ज़ल को पसंद किया आपकी दाद सर आँखो पर, आशा है आगे भी आपका साथ यूँ ही मिलता रहेगा !
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Aapka Santosh..........
Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum
Tumhara saath meri tanhaiyo.N se kuch to behtar hai...
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