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Acha lagta hai - 22nd September 2015, 12:45 PM
ghumoN ke saye meiN ab tau jeena acha lagta hai,
teri yaad meiN rat bhar takiya bhigona acha lagta hai.

Chala gaya chor tanha mujhe duniya ki bheer meiN,
tere sang beete lamhoN ko dohrana acha lagta hai.

tere bin bojh lagti hai zindagee jab bhi kabhee,
tassavur meiN tera vo muskurana achcha lagta hai.

na socha tha zindagee kabhi imtehan legi is kadar,
tera sapno meiN aa hausala badana acha lagta hai.

ye safar tau guzar jayega bus teri yaad ke sadke,
phakat ye baat dil ko samjhana acha lagta hai.

Sang ab na tu hai na hi tera saya hai hamdam,
khud hi se rooth ke khud ko manana acha lagta hai


khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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22nd September 2015, 08:05 PM
Bohut khoob sanjay ji..

bohut pasand aayi apki nazm. yunhi likhte rahen.

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22nd September 2015, 09:55 PM
waaah....
Sang ab na tu hai na hi tera saya hai hamdam,
khud hi se rooth ke khud ko manana acha lagta hai

Bahut khoob sanjay ji...dard ko khoob bayaan kiya hai aapne..
Likhte rahiye.....

Aate rahein..



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22nd September 2015, 09:55 PM
waaah....
Sang ab na tu hai na hi tera saya hai hamdam,
khud hi se rooth ke khud ko manana acha lagta hai

Bahut khoob sanjay ji...dard ko khoob bayaan kiya hai aapne..
Likhte rahiye.....

Aate rahein..



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22nd September 2015, 09:57 PM
Bohot khuub jenab.

Badae dino baad aapko paDha aaj, achha laga.

aate rahiye.

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22nd September 2015, 10:05 PM
bahut khoob sanajy bhai......................................

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23rd September 2015, 10:13 PM
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Bohut khoob sanjay ji..

bohut pasand aayi apki nazm. yunhi likhte rahen.
Sarika ji ...aapko humari peshkesh pasand ayee shukriya..Derasal humare ek mitr
2012 meiN heart gail se expire ho gaye . Inki wife ke whatsapp pe status ..likha tha ..
TIRED of fighting alone in life , need some rest .....

Mujhe per ke unke dard ka ehsaas hua aur laga vo apne husband ko.miss kar rahi
haiN ..bus ye kalam unki tribute hai apbe husband ke naam ...

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24th September 2015, 07:52 AM
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ghumoN ke saye meiN ab tau jeena acha lagta hai,
teri yaad meiN rat bhar takiya bhigona acha lagta hai.

Chala gaya chor tanha mujhe duniya ki bheer meiN,
tere sang beete lamhoN ko dohrana acha lagta hai.

tere bin bojh lagti hai zindagee jab bhi kabhee,
tassavur meiN tera vo muskurana achcha lagta hai.

na socha tha zindagee kabhi imtehan legi is kadar,
tera sapno meiN aa hausala badana acha lagta hai.

ye safar tau guzar jayega bus teri yaad ke sadke,
phakat ye baat dil ko samjhana acha lagta hai.

Sang ab na tu hai na hi tera saya hai hamdam,
khud hi se rooth ke khud ko manana acha lagta hai
Pur zor kalaam hua hai janaab dheeron mubarakbaad aapko is rachnaa par bahut khoob, yunhi aate rahiye aur bazm roshan rakhiye


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24th September 2015, 10:27 AM
waah sanjay ji

Kisi aur ke gham ko itni shiddat se mehsoos karna ek bhavuk dil ki nishani hai jo ki shayar ke liye bohut zaruri hai.

iske liye ek baar phir se daad kabool karein.

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24th September 2015, 10:50 AM
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ghumoN ke saye meiN ab tau jeena acha lagta hai,
teri yaad meiN rat bhar takiya bhigona acha lagta hai.

Chala gaya chor tanha mujhe duniya ki bheer meiN,
tere sang beete lamhoN ko dohrana acha lagta hai.

tere bin bojh lagti hai zindagee jab bhi kabhee,
tassavur meiN tera vo muskurana achcha lagta hai.

na socha tha zindagee kabhi imtehan legi is kadar,
tera sapno meiN aa hausala badana acha lagta hai.

ye safar tau guzar jayega bus teri yaad ke sadke,
phakat ye baat dil ko samjhana acha lagta hai.

Sang ab na tu hai na hi tera saya hai hamdam,
khud hi se rooth ke khud ko manana acha lagta hai

Sanjay ji, bahut nazuk ehsaas padne ko miley...tadap, udhasi dard...bahut kuch hai en alfaazoN meiN...bahut acche se aapne dil ki baate kahi hai.

likhte rhiye, bazm meiN aate rhiye

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waaaaahhh sanjay ji bahut khoob bahut aalaa..... likhte rahiye

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