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pata na tha mohabat aise chot khayegi,
khiley phool to jakhmo ki yaad aayegi….
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pata na tha mohabat aise chot khayegi,
khiley phool to jakhmo ki yaad aayegi….
-sunita virender
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eh aasmaan wale jameen par uttar ke dekh,
hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh........
2nd sher
pata na tha anese tumhare jindgi badal jayegi
hotho pe fir se muskurahat laut aayegi........
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21st September 2006, 12:54 PM
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pata na tha mohabat aise chot khayegi,
khiley phool to jakhmo ki yaad aayegi….
-sunita virender
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Sunita Virender Singh
eh aasmaan wale jameen par uttar ke dekh,
hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh........
2nd sher
pata na tha anese tumhare jindgi badal jayegi
hotho pe fir se muskurahat laut aayegi........
---dhaval---
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baro beet gaye tera intjaar kartey kartey,
kaya tu meri sanas ruk jane ke baad aayegi...
-sunita virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st September 2006, 01:51 PM
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barso beet gaye tera intjaar kartey kartey,
kaya tu meri sanas ruk jane ke baad aayegi...
-sunita virender
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meri wafa ke aalam ko tu kabhi samajh na saki
marte marte hoto.n pe mere ye fariyad aayegi.....
dilip
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Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
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21st September 2006, 02:11 PM
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meri wafa ke aalam ko tu kabhi samajh na saki
marte marte hoto.n pe mere ye fariyad aayegi.....
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Daaman chhudake ja rahi thhi jindagi meri iss kadar
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21st September 2006, 02:32 PM
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Daaman chhudake ja rahi thhi jindagi meri iss kadar
kya khabar thhi, tere ane se khushiyan lout aayegi…
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tere intjaar main lutta chukaa hu kushi ka jarra jarra
khabar na thi tu meri kushiya lut jane ke baad aayegi....
-sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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21st September 2006, 03:11 PM
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tere intjaar main lutta chukaa hu kushi ka jarra jarra
khabar na thi tu meri kushiya lut jane ke baad aayegi....
-sunita virender
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tere shahar ja raha hoo.n main begano ki tarah
kuch khabar nahi ki kisi ko meri bhi yaad aayegi......
dilip
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21st September 2006, 09:03 PM
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tere shahar ja raha hoo.n main begano ki tarah
kuch khabar nahi ki kisi ko meri bhi yaad aayegi......
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22nd September 2006, 08:15 PM
kya aaj mein ek shuruvat kar du naye kalaam ki............gustakhi maaf
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dekh teri yaad me meri aankho se ansu bahane lage,
warana pathrai aankhen kabhi iss kadar roti nahi....
plzzzzzzzzzz isme words change kar dena lekin ignorr na karna....meri request hai ye please
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22nd September 2006, 10:11 PM
1st sher
dekh teri yaad me meri aankho se ansu bahane lage,
warana pathrai aankhen kabhi iss kadar roti nahi....
--pooja--
2nd sher
dekhe hai hum ne bhi kai gum zindagi me apni
gum ko sehne se ye zindagi kabhi rukti nahi......
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23rd September 2006, 01:39 AM
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dekh teri yaad me meri aankho se ansu bahane lage,
warana pathrai aankhen kabhi iss kadar roti nahi....
--pooja--
2nd sher
dekhe hai hum ne bhi kai gum zindagi me apni
gum ko sehne se ye zindagi kabhi rukti nahi......
--dhaval--
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dua to sab mangte hai khuda se apne pyaar ke liye,
magar pyar me jane kyu dua sab ki kabul hoti nahi...
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23rd September 2006, 09:05 AM
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dua to sab mangte hai khuda se apne pyaar ke liye,
magar pyar me jane kyu dua sab ki kabul hoti nahi...
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4th sher
hazaro khwahishe.n seene main dafan kar chuke hai.n
magar tujhe pane ki chahat dil main dafan hoti nahi......
dilip
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23rd September 2006, 09:28 AM
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4th sher
hazaro khwahishe.n seene main dafan kar chuke hai.n
magar tujhe pane ki chahat dil main dafan hoti nahi......
dilip
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yu raahi miltey hain zindgi ke safar main bahut se,
jis se hum milna chahtey hain us se mulakaat hoti nahi....
-sunita virender
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23rd September 2006, 10:40 AM
5th share
yu raahi miltey hain zindgi ke safar main bahut se,
jis se hum milna chahtey hain us se mulakaat hoti nahi....
-sunita virender
6th share
chhahat ki baahain faila kar khud pe itminaan rakho,
kaun kehta hai ki kisi apne se kabhi mulakaat hoti nahi......
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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23rd September 2006, 11:04 AM
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yu raahi miltey hain zindgi ke safar main bahut se,
jis se hum milna chahtey hain us se mulakaat hoti nahi....
-sunita virender
6th share
chhahat ki baahain faila kar khud pe itminaan rakho,
kaun kehta hai ki kisi apne se kabhi mulakaat hoti nahi......
'veer'
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roj khabooN main aati ho mere ek naya paigaam lekar
tere tasaubar se baat hoti hai tujse to baat hoti nahi....
-sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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23rd September 2006, 11:22 AM
7th share
roj khabooN main aati ho mere ek naya paigaam lekar
tere tasaubar se baat hoti hai tujse to baat hoti nahi....
-sunita virender
8th share
palkon pe umeedon ke chiraag yu hee jalaye rakhna,
bass mera intzaar karo itni lambi judai ki raat hoti nahi....
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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meri be-wafeai se woh mar jayega dosto,
uske saath mai bhi mar jau yeh dua karo....
-sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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23rd September 2006, 02:39 PM
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meri be-wafeai se woh mar jayega dosto,
uske saath mai bhi mar jau yeh dua karo....
-sunita virender
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ISS JANAM ME NAHI MIIL SAKE TO KOI GUM NAHI,
AGLE JANAM ME USKA SAATH MILE YE DUA KAHO....
GRATSE
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23rd September 2006, 04:07 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by pooja4588
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meri be-wafeai se woh mar jayega dosto,
uske saath mai bhi mar jau yeh dua karo....
-sunita virender
2ND SHER
ISS JANAM ME NAHI MIIL SAKE TO KOI GUM NAHI,
AGLE JANAM ME USKA SAATH MILE YE DUA KAHO....
pooja
3rd sher
maine chaha hai unhe apni jindgi se badkar,
aaj chahat meri rang laye yeh dua karo.......
dilip
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hi -
23rd September 2006, 04:40 PM
1st share
meri be-wafeai se woh mar jayega dosto,
uske saath mai bhi mar jau yeh dua karo....
-sunita virender
2ND SHER
ISS JANAM ME NAHI MIIL SAKE TO KOI GUM NAHI,
AGLE JANAM ME USKA SAATH MILE YE DUA KAHO...
'pooja'
3rd share
tu dil hai main dharkan tu phool main khushbu,
har janam me tera saath nibahoun yeh dua karo.......
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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23rd September 2006, 04:48 PM
are janab aapne hamara likha sher beech main goal kar diya kya baat hai kuch galat likh diya kya humne ...... batao to jara.....
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23rd September 2006, 04:57 PM
nahi dilip ji asal main app pehle post kar gaye or main late ho gaya is hisaab se mara share 4th hai or appka 3rd....maffi chahta hoon.......app plzzzz bura mat mano or isko theek kar do.....raj..
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23rd September 2006, 05:09 PM
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meri be-wafeai se woh mar jayega dosto,
uske saath mai bhi mar jau yeh dua karo....
-sunita virender
2ND SHER
ISS JANAM ME NAHI MIIL SAKE TO KOI GUM NAHI,
AGLE JANAM ME USKA SAATH MILE YE DUA KAHO...
'pooja'
3rd share
maine chaha hai unhe apni jindgi se badkar,
aaj chahat meri rang laye yeh dua karo.......
dilip
4th sher
tu dil hai main dharkan tu phool main khushbu,
har janam me tera saath nibahoun yeh dua karo.......
'veer'
5th share
teri yade.n badi hai.n mere dil main dhadkan bankar
kahi.n dhadkan hi na ruk jaye kabhi ye dua karo....
dilip
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23rd September 2006, 05:11 PM
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Originally posted by rajveeer
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meri be-wafeai se woh mar jayega dosto,
uske saath mai bhi mar jau yeh dua karo....
-sunita virender
2ND SHER
ISS JANAM ME NAHI MIIL SAKE TO KOI GUM NAHI,
AGLE JANAM ME USKA SAATH MILE YE DUA KAHO...
'pooja'
3rd sher
maine chaha hai unhe apni jindgi se badkar,
aaj chahat meri rang laye yeh dua karo.......
dilip
4TH share
tu dil hai main dharkan tu phool main khushbu,
har janam me tera saath nibahoun yeh dua karo.......
'veer'
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5TH SHER
BARSON SE BICHHI HAI NAZREN TERE INTAZAR ME,
EK JHALAK TERI NASEEB HO JAYE YEH DUA KARO....
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ARE KOI TO DUA KARO MERE LIYE
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ARE YE HO KYA RAHA HAI AAJ SAB KO EK SAATH SHAYARI POST KANI HAI AAJ TO............LAGTA HAI SAB EK SAATH FREE HO RAHE HAI AAJ........
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meri be-wafeai se woh mar jayega dosto,
uske saath mai bhi mar jau yeh dua karo....
-sunita virender
2ND SHER
ISS JANAM ME NAHI MIIL SAKE TO KOI GUM NAHI,
AGLE JANAM ME USKA SAATH MILE YE DUA KAHO...
'pooja'
3rd sher
maine chaha hai unhe apni jindgi se badkar,
aaj chahat meri rang laye yeh dua karo.......
dilip
4TH share
tu dil hai main dharkan tu phool main khushbu,
har janam me tera saath nibahoun yeh dua karo.......
'veer'
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5TH SHER
BARSON SE BICHHI HAI NAZREN TERE INTAZAR ME,
EK JHALAK TERI NASEEB HO JAYE YEH DUA KARO....
--pooja--
6th sher
ek arzoo si ho gayi hai bas usko ab pane ki.
aarzoo meri poori ho bas aisi tum dua karo...............
--dhaval--
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23rd September 2006, 05:15 PM
5th share
teri yade.n badi hai.n mere dil main dhadkan bankar
kahi.n dhadkan hi na ruk jaye kabhi ye dua karo....
dilip
6TH SHER
BARSON SE BICHHI HAI NAZREN TERE INTAZAR ME,
EK JHALAK TERI NASEEB HO JAYE YEH DUA KARO....
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ARE KOI TO DUA KARO MERE LIYE
GRATSE
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HAYE RABBA AB MEIN KUCH NAHI LIKHNE VALI.............DHAVAL KYA KAR RAHE HO YE AAP
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23rd September 2006, 06:08 PM
6th sher
ek arzoo si ho gayi hai bas usko ab pane ki,
arzoo meri poori ho bas aisi tum yeh dua karo...
--dhaval--
7th sher
Suraj ki kirnon me sab saath hote hai ''pooja'' ke,
Chaand ki roshni me sirf tu paas ho yeh dua karo…
meine iska ant kar diya hai.................khushi hui jaan kar............hmmm..........kaisa raha ant iska????
gratse
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Aap sab ko aadaab! Sunita di kehne pe aap sab ko yahan join kar rahi hun... Kaafi confusions ho rahi hain... to pehle uska solution....
1st share
meri be-wafeai se woh mar jayega dosto,
uske saath mai bhi mar jau yeh dua karo....
-sunita virender
2ND SHER
ISS JANAM ME NAHI MIIL SAKE TO KOI GUM NAHI,
AGLE JANAM ME USKA SAATH MILE YE DUA KAHO...
'pooja'
3rd share
maine chaha hai unhe apni jindgi se badkar,
aaj chahat meri rang laye yeh dua karo.......
dilip
4th sher
tu dil hai main dharkan tu phool main khushbu,
har janam me tera saath nibahoun yeh dua karo.......
'veer'
5th share
teri yade.n badi hai.n mere dil main dhadkan bankar
kahi.n dhadkan hi na ruk jaye kabhi ye dua karo....
dilip
6TH SHER
BARSON SE BICHHI HAI NAZREN TERE INTAZAR ME,
EK JHALAK TERI NASEEB HO JAYE YEH DUA KARO....
--pooja--
7th sher
ek arzoo si ho gayi hai bas usko ab pane ki.
aarzoo meri poori ho bas aisi tum dua karo...............
--dhaval--
8th sher
Suraj ki kirnon me sab saath hote hai ''pooja'' ke,
Chaand ki roshni me sirf tu paas ho yeh dua karo…
--pooja--
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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24th September 2006, 04:04 AM
Starting a New Ghazal!!!
1st Sher..
Unki mehak aaj bhi mere baalon se aaTi hai..
Ye baarish bhi unke paas hone ka ehsaas dilaaTi hai...
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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25th September 2006, 04:02 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by chaahat123
Starting a New Ghazal!!!
1st Sher..
Unki mehak aaj bhi mere baalon se aaTi hai..
Ye baarish bhi unke paas hone ka ehsaas dilaaTi hai...
~Priya
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2ND SHER
TERE SAATH CHALTE- CHALTE RAAH ISS KADAR KAT JATI HAI,
SANG TERE CHUBHTI SADAK BHI MAKHMALI EHASAS DILATI HAI..
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GRATSE
AAPKI DOST
POOJA
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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25th September 2006, 08:27 PM
1st Sher..
Unki mehak aaj bhi mere baalon se aaTi hai..
Ye baarish bhi unke paas hone ka ehsaas dilaaTi hai...
~Priya
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2ND SHER
TERE SAATH CHALTE- CHALTE RAAH ISS KADAR KAT JATI HAI,
SANG TERE CHUBHTI SADAK BHI MAKHMALI EHASAS DILATI HAI..
-----------------------<<<<<((((())))<<<<<----------------------------
GRATSE
AAPKI DOST
POOJA
hota hu jab main akela to tumhari baten yaad aati hai
tumhare bina ye zindagi dard bhara ehsas ban jati hai
--dhaval--
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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26th September 2006, 10:26 AM
1st Sher..
Unki mehak aaj bhi mere baalon se aaTi hai..
Ye baarish bhi unke paas hone ka ehsaas dilaaTi hai...
~Priya
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2ND SHER
TERE SAATH CHALTE- CHALTE RAAH ISS KADAR KAT JATI HAI,
SANG TERE CHUBHTI SADAK BHI MAKHMALI EHASAS DILATI HAI..
POOJA
3rd share
hota hu jab main akela to tumhari baten yaad aati hai
tumhare bina ye zindagi dard bhara ehsas ban jati hai
--dhaval--
4th share
vaise to har lamha tujhe appne paas mai ppati hu,
judai tab lagti hai, jab yeh dunia ahsaas dilati hai...
-sunita virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2006, 10:31 AM
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Originally posted by sunita virender
1st Sher..
Unki mehak aaj bhi mere baalon se aaTi hai..
Ye baarish bhi unke paas hone ka ehsaas dilaaTi hai...
~Priya
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2ND SHER
TERE SAATH CHALTE- CHALTE RAAH ISS KADAR KAT JATI HAI,
SANG TERE CHUBHTI SADAK BHI MAKHMALI EHASAS DILATI HAI..
POOJA
3rd share
hota hu jab main akela to tumhari baten yaad aati hai
tumhare bina ye zindagi dard bhara ehsas ban jati hai
--dhaval--
4th share
vaise to har lamha tujhe appne paas mai ppati hu,
judai tab lagti hai, jab yeh dunia ahsaas dilati hai...
-sunita virender
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5th share
teri yado.n ke sahare hi main jinda tha ab talak
aaj yaade.n magar ye teri dil per sitam dhati hai....
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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26th September 2006, 10:46 AM
5th share
teri yado.n ke sahare hi main jinda tha ab talak
aaj yaade.n magar ye teri dil per sitam dhati hai....
dilip
6th share
eh kudha ab nahi saha jata mujse yeh dard,
uski be-waffeaya ab har lamha satati hai.......
-sunita virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2006, 11:00 AM
5th share
teri yado.n ke sahare hi main jinda tha ab talak
aaj yaade.n magar ye teri dil per sitam dhati hai....
dilip
6th share
eh kudha ab nahi saha jata mujse yeh dard,
uski be-waffeaya ab har lamha satati hai.......
-sunita virender
7th share
tamam koshishe ki use bhulane ki magar
her subah ki dhundh uski yaad dilati hai.....
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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26th September 2006, 11:18 AM
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5th share
teri yado.n ke sahare hi main jinda tha ab talak
aaj yaade.n magar ye teri dil per sitam dhati hai....
dilip
6th share
eh kudha ab nahi saha jata mujse yeh dard,
uski be-waffeaya ab har lamha satati hai.......
-sunita virender
7th share
tamam koshishe ki use bhulane ki magar
her subah ki dhundh uski yaad dilati hai.....
dilip
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8th share
usko mujse bicdey zamana hua magar,
uski yaadey ab bhi har lamha rulati hai...
-sunita virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2006, 11:25 AM
priya dekh to jarra tumhari start ki hue gazal kitni acchi tarh anzaam tak pahunchi hai, mubaraak ho sabhi ko jinhoney es mai.n saath diya hai. aur umeed karti hu aagey bhi aap sab esi tarah saath baney raheygey.
1st Sher..
Unki mehak aaj bhi mere baalon se aaTi hai..
Ye baarish bhi unke paas hone ka ehsaas dilaaTi hai...
~Priya
2ND SHER
TERE SAATH CHALTE- CHALTE RAAH ISS KADAR KAT JATI HAI,
SANG TERE CHUBHTI SADAK BHI MAKHMALI EHASAS DILATI HAI..
POOJA
3rd share
hota hu jab main akela to tumhari baten yaad aati hai
tumhare bina ye zindagi dard bhara ehsas ban jati hai
--dhaval--
4th share
vaise to har lamha tujhe appne paas mai ppati hu,
judai tab lagti hai, jab yeh dunia ahsaas dilati hai...
-sunita virender
5th share
teri yado.n ke sahare hi main jinda tha ab talak
aaj yaade.n magar ye teri dil per sitam dhati hai....
dilip
6th share
eh kudha ab nahi saha jata mujse yeh dard,
uski be-waffeaya ab har lamha satati hai.......
-sunita virender
7th share
tamam koshishe ki use bhulane ki magar
her subah ki dhundh uski yaad dilati hai.....
dilip
8th share
usko mujse bicdey zamana hua magar,
uski yaadey ab bhi har lamha rulati hai...
-sunita virender
ab naye shuruyaat kaun kar raha hai,
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2006, 02:38 PM
1st sher
"kya ki he khata mene jo itne khafa ho tum
pas ao zara baitho ye shikwe mitayeNge"
Mangi thi mene tumse mohbbat ki zindagi
Zindagi ko tumne mohbbat bana diya
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